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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. what whould you think the causes, and what measures could be taken to solve them

It is undeniable that in many countries people are suffering from weight increase as well as health and fitness deterioration. This essay will discuss the possible factors behind these problems and suggest some solutions to overcome them.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Environmental pollution is one of the major challenges members of a community are prone to face.Most countries around the globe are also experiencing contamination of land,water and air in their areas. This essay will examine how flooding and malaria affect the surroundings and how good hygiene and drainage can be used to reduce the problems.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

There are some people who prefer to have their own business instead of working in an institution, while others opposed it. This essay will show why more and more people are following this trend. In addition, will draft some disadvantages for the same.

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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Many are of the belief that contacting possible alien life is a desirable goal. While others are wary of the potential dangers. In my opinion, this satisfies basic human curiosity, as the risk is too high. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will be discussing my point of view.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is t to maintain old buildings

many antique buildings are guarded by the authority because they have historically been remarkable in a nation. While some people argue ancient monuments should be demolished and replaced by new ones because of citizen`s demand for housing and work and I would argue that it is extremely crucial to preserve old buildings and also give reasons why the past oughts do not obstruct advancement .

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Those budgets that governments destined to music, theatre or art usually are seen as a waste of money and therefore citizens think that they should be invested in public services. Despite that, I am in total disagreement to that extent due to the following reasons that I will explain in this essay.

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Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, automation in home appliances like dishwashers and technological advancements in communication gadgets like computers have made life easy for humans. Nevertheless, there are a few who believe that these devices make it complicated. I believe that it reduces stress of users by reducing work-load and saving time.

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Many cities replace farmlands and parks with houses. Is it positive or negative?

Due to people immigrating from rural areas into metropolitan areas, the need for accommodation will be increased compared to the past. Consequently, most governments for providing more houses because of the lack of empty land in an urban district turn to destroying green lands in the vicinity of urban areas. This action will have numerous destructive environmental and city effects, as expressed below.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Keeping a clean environment is the ultimate responsibility of every human. A number of countries facing more challenges in maintaining the purity of natural resources. This essay will discuss a few problems faced by them and some possible steps to overcome this type of problem.

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Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Youths in every society are considered an asset of a country for developing the nation. However, some public believe education for grown-ups holds a higher importance than for the younger generation, and governments should elevate the education budget for adults. This essay argues why adolescents must be given more funding than adults.

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it is observed that most governments pay a lot of money for the art projects. For instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures seen in public places. Some people say that it is wrong and governments should spend more money on other important things of public interest. Do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, most governments around the world are investing a lot of money in art projects. However, people think that it is best to use this money for something more important. In my opinion, governments should use their resources for more important matters. In this essay, the reasons for this statement will be discussed.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

History always plays a vital role in the journey of mankind.In the modern world, people were more curious to know about the past incidents that happened in the houses they live in. Different people use different methodologies to identify the past and they have their own reasons to do so. In this essay ,I will discuss the motive for this and how they dig out the past.

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Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this?

There are split opinions regarding the importance of the school curriculum.It has become evident that there has been a shift among secondary and university students away from traditional sciences and towards IT-based subjects.Both have their pros and cons.Before commenting on my decision,I would like to discuss its reasons and the overall negative development of the trend.

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Although more and more people get the news on internet, the newspaper will be important in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, social media are often seen as places where people receive the news, though there is a firm belief that in the future newspaper will remain the crucial means of news. I personally disagree with this notion for several reasons, describe in the following paragraph.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interesting in finding out about the history of the house or building they lived in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In today's world, cutting edge technology and new innovation have occurred since the 20th century. Depending on the economy of countries, developed countries tend to interesting more in the history of construction. In my opinion, it is exciting to know how the structure that we lived are used to be something before. In this essay, the reason and method for research will be provided in this essay.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like . Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future , such as science and technology . Discuss both these views and give your opinion .

Some people feel that all college students should study subjects they are interested in, while others claim that only the ones that will benefit their future should be allowed. I agree with the former viewpoint because students can increase the likelihood of having a successful career if they study subjects they like.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Working remotely has been a popular trend in Corona times. Thanks to modern internet services, one need not be present in the office to complete their work. Although there are some negatives, lesser in-person interaction and slower speed of teamwork, the positives, extra savings and greater family time weigh much more than them.

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Some people believe that it is good to share a much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuablr to be shared freely.

It is a common belief that it brings positive effects when people share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. However, I firmly believe that some information should be kept a secret since it can be too important or valuable to be shared freely. In the following paragraphs, I will briefly explain my view on this topic.

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In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity and unhealthy eating habits among kids are the growing issues that some countries are facing lately. Some are of the opinion that governments should take a step forward to find a solution to this. I partially agree with that statement. Although governments should serve the primary role, parents' attitudes should not be disregarded, too.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people live longer and life expectancy increases. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Due to the advancement in health facilities like hospitals, health experts, medication methods as well as vaccines. Nowadays, people could live longer than people who live in the past. Therefore, the retired will be able to spend and enjoy the rest of their life. This situation would also cause some issues for the government. However, I believe this trend has more benefits than disadvantages.

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