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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Due to modernization and change in living styles, people are buying more packed food to eat instead of fresh food. All these processed items are rich in calories which are causing a lot of health issues like obesity and cholesterol. So, according to some people, these items should be costlier than others to discourage them from buying, however, I do not agree with this statement. I shall explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.

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University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics these days. Many people believe that college students should be allowed to choose subjects they like to study. Others think that it is always better to learn subjects that have relevance in the future and I agree with them. Both views will be discussed in this essay

Recent years have witnessed that universities' programmes lacked elective modules for students to choose from, and whether allowing college students to select their own interests or not has been a widely debated topic. Meanwhile, some may argue that compulsory subjects may be relevant and essential for their future career. Therefore, the following essay will contain both views about this issue.

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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

In this modernized era, the increment in the number of infrastructures is the major concern across the areas. . With each passing day, people spend a lot of time doing activities regarding education, health, and social security. Essential services really made our lives easier, there is enough chance of improvement in this sector. Significant numbers of people work in both areas and have because of ample commitment to the country. This essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner.

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Nowadays many young people choose to work in farming industry. Why do you think that is? How could young people be encouraged to work in this industry?

Agricultural production becomes more popular among young entrepreneurs. Residents of modern cities suffer from numerous obstacles such as unemployment, cost of living and overcrowded population. Especially, youths would prefer to move from the urban to the rural because of these reasons. I strongly consider that government incentives are useful to support the young community being a part of sustainable cultivation.

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Recently, extreme violence in movies and dramas is contributing to a growing number of social issues. This leads teenagers to copy the violent actions in the movies without noticing what is wrong. To deal with this problem, teachers and parents should be responsible for teaching them what is acceptable and what is not in the real world.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

It is universally believed that society should be based on rules and laws to function well and if people were allowed to do whatever they desired to do, society would be dispersed and ruined. I totally agree with the former view and will give my reasons below.

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some countries allow old people to work to any age they want . Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In some countries,old people are permitted to work at any age that they want.There are more pros than cons associated with this flexibility provided.I will elaborate on these and provide my opinion in the writing that follows.

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Some people believe having a good teacher is the ultimate recipe for a student success. Others think a the desire to succeed is most important. Discuss both sides ad give your opinion.

Some people hold the view that a tutor is the most significant factor for achieving results in studying meanwhile some individuals claim that it is crucial to want to learn whatever it is in order to be successful.

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In many countries, a prison sentence is considered as the best way to decrease crime. However education is open argued as more effective way. Discuss both use and give your opinion.

In this fast-moving era, education is the most important thing in everyone’s life in most nations lookup is believed to the superior to declining crime but education is the best way to reduce the increasing crime rate day by day. Both play the same role in punishment as well as education to decrease crime. In upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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People who were born in rural areas often move to big cities when they become adults. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

The quality of living and facilities vary according to the locations where people reside. Individuals who were born in suburbs tend to shift to cities when they become mature. The underlying reasons for this problem are analysed in the ensuing paragraphs, while I believe it is a negative development.

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Global environment issues are the responsibilities of rich nations not of the poor nation. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are more and more issues needed to be solved in the world. Some people believe that well-developed countries should be in charge of fixing them, while other people are convinced that all the notions in the world have to cooperate with each other to make the earth become a better place. In the essay, I am going to discuss the reasons why I agree with the former one.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are different opinions with regard to keeping a country’s heritage alive. While some believe it is not necessary, others feel that it should be protected. This essay will argue that although a country can still thrive without rituals it takes away some of the uniqueness that will draw tourists and visitors to its shores.

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Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activities among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.

in today's ,generation crime amount is rising day by day, especially among youngsters of the new generation are part of it. I will be discussing all reasons for the particular act and will be suggesting how we can come up with a better solution to this problem.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

People often choose to live near their birthplace. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this statement and explore the advantages and disadvantages.

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When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree?

There exists a school of thought whether the most crucial objects that fresh-built towns should include are sports centres and common green zones rather than shopping malls and I agree.

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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Indeed, the trend of hiring a properly educated population as a fresh staff has increased in recent years. Some hold the view that formal education is more critical than hands-on experience and individual abilities. This essay will discuss that demand for an educated community is rising and I think that it has more certain advantages than drawbacks.

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company of organization. Do the advantages for people who are in to for their own business outweigh the disadvantages ? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals opt to be self-employed rather than being employed by others. The positives surpass the drawbacks of these.

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Studies show that criminals get low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce the crime is educating people in prison so they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education for offenders during imprisonment as a method to reduce the rate of crime has evolved as a major topic of concern in today’s society. While I agree that such a solution is effective to reduce felonies, I am convinced that it is far from being the best method and there are many better ways of reducing violations.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

The increasing use of plastic has caused an adverse effect on the environment. This essay will discuss the environmental problems associated with excessive plastic usage and the measures the governments and the people can take to remediate the issue.

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City planners’ new designs include setting up schools, markets and commercial places (like office) in different areas of the city. Do you think it will help the city dwellers?

Local municipalities are expanding the city’s infrastructure in many areas. This will definitely help residents to have more facilities available, create jobs and travel less far from home.

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