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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults coma compared with the number of older people does the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Youngsters are the face of any country or the world without them the development of the countries won't have much of an impact. In the present day scenarios in some ,countries the population of young adults are comparatively more than those of older people. In the following ,paragraphs I will point out each of its advantages and disadvantages.

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Government should control the amount of violence in film and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in society. Do you agree or disagree?

At present, there is huge violence in many parts of the world mostly because of visualizations. While one gets addicted to the crime which was shown, it is due to the fact that level of intensity of action scenes and woman harassment. In my opinion, the government should take appropriate action in reducing the violence in movies and TV series. Some of the problems with examples will be explained in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

It is true that an increasing number of people are aware that environmental protection is essential to all people’s well-being but they have nothing to do with this aspect. In my opinion, depending on high-tech facilities should be blamed for this and there are several actions that people can do for environmental protection.

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Some people think women should be given equal chance to work and excel in their careers. Other believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Despite the fact that it has been pointed out by some that an equal opportunity regarding working career should be offered to females, other people suggest that taking after their house and children is the key role for wives. I agree with the former idea as providing working chances to females is not only beneficial to every single female but also to corporations.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Obesity causes serious health issues and is growing nowadays. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind the upward trend in the number of overweight people, as well as some suggestions to solve this problem.

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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than working together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, comparing with cooperation, most students are educated that they need to compete with others in different fields. I think that this phenomenon brings more benefits than problems.

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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is becoming increasingly popular for buyers to purchase items like clothes, vehicles, and other commodities from renowned brands. From my perspective, the reasons why this problem has occurred and its effects will be discussed in this essay.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Electricity has been merge with our daily life ever since it was invented. With the trend of saving the earth, renewable energy has become popular being the major source of power for households around the world.

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Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Children are the foundation of a country and education is the driving force to make the base strong and stable. It is argued over the past few years that offspring should be enrolled in schools at an early youth; diametrically opposed to this, a segment of society opines that the right age of starting a school is seven. Although both sides may advance equally compelling arguments supporting themselves, however I am personally inclined towards the first notion.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In recent years, big corporations have expanded their productions outside the borders of their countries. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why companies that are conducted multinationally should be responsible for local communities.

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In recent years, tourists have paid attention to preserving both the culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people think that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the twenty-first century, we are constantly confronted with the issue of “responsible tourism”. Some people, nevertheless, are of the opinion that it is nearly impossible to be a friendly tourist for the environment while we’re travelling around. I personally disagree with such opinion because we can actually become responsible tourists by improving our awareness as well as being supervised by authorities.

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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Online shopping has become more and more popular recently. The preference has shifted to virtual shopping instead, while some will argue is better to shop for groceries in supermarkets. In this essay, I will explain the reasons behind these behaviours and why I stand for real store shopping.

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The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education. Given time, technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

It is undeniable that technology plays an indispensable role in education in this era. Some individuals argue that these technologies will completely remove the traditional teachers from the classroom one day, while others believe it is impossible to replace them. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I think the role of a teacher is more important so that it will never be replaced.

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some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A set of individuals opine that the teacher becomes more important to the child once he starts going to school.Even though I see a point in the given opinion, I cannot totally agree with this one.This essay would elaborate on my opinion.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activities for young adults in many countries. Why is this? It is a positive or negative development?

Shopping is becoming increasingly popular in many countries. The younger generation spends their time shopping, and it is considered the most popular form of leisure activity. The reason is people spend their valuable time with friends and family members. It is a positive development and it improves their lifestyle .

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings to us?

With the advent of modern architecture, old buildings and structures are disregarded these days. Many experts debate that whether old buildings should be demolished to create pavement for new buildings or whether these should be preserved. Personally, I am in strong favour of retaining these old buildings and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my view with lucid examples.

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The world's most common problem is caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued by some countries in the world facing with one of the most serious problems, which is the massive increase in world’s population. While this issue is widely considered as one of the most serious problems, in my opinion, the greatest threat to humanity in the 21st century is corruption.

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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

With the development of globalization, communities that contain people of diverse cultural backgrounds are more and more common. In my opinion, the cultural and economic and many other aspects of benefits that multiculturalism brings are more significant than drawbacks.

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People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, shopping has become a trend. Some people do shopping to buy products and others just do window shopping to relax . Many people believe that People's shopping habits depend on age group rather than any other factor. I totally agree with this statement. This essay will elaborate on my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries police officers do not carry guns. How does this affect the manner they implement law and order? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a gun. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Empowering police personal with the necessary ammo to control the law and order is a critical aspect in any country. A few nations are ignoring this fact to provide the right weapons to manage illegal activities which are impacting society in many ways. In this essay, I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon and illustrate the examples to back up my opinion on why they should be equipped with the right ammunition.

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