IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 954

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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More and more people move away from family and friends for working. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages.

In today’s competitive world, people are ready to relocate anywhere for their work life. A number of people leave their family and friends when they get job opportunities in another region. This essay will discuss the benefits they can get because of this decision. On the other hand, the limitations for the same from my personal perspective.

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Some people say that the best way to improv public health by increasing sports facility, others however say that they would have little affect on public health and other majors are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Numerous persons think that developing sports centres promotes the well-being of the community, while others believe that they affect rarely public health. The following essay will discuss both points of view.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

People’s age has always been a significant issue for governments in different parts of the world. In some countries, the young generation outnumbers the old one which has some benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, younger people provide more benefits to society than the elderly.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent days most people are spending their leisure time in activities like shopping which becomes a common thing. It has both advantages and disadvantages. There are several reasons for shopping becoming so popular these days. It will affect every individual in many ways. We will discuss them in detail below.

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STUDYING THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE IN AN ENGLISH-SPEAKING COUNTRY IS THE BEST BUT NOT ONLY THE WAY TO LEARN THE LANGUAGE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

These days, the need to speak English makes people think twice about learning it . Although there are several ways to enhance your level of English , some people argue that the best way to acquire it is in an English-speaking country. I am in favour of this point of view and I will support my idea with examples.

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Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own pinion.

To start with , People often will give a thought about taking a break or some time off in order to figure out what actually they wanted to pursue next in their life, in terms of university education .In my opinion , I do agree with the people who say yes to taking a gap year between school to university.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, the vast major of people prefer to shop from chain stores or huge malls rather than retailers. Consequently, this trend has brought both merits and demerits, which I will discuss how its merits outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The freedom given to children has been always debated and people were unsure about it. Though one group thinks that children must be free to decide on their daily routine, however, others believe that it will end in a society full of self-absorbed individuals. Both groups have strong proof of their word. Though it is worth discussing both views.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

For centuries, toddler upbringing is an important factor in society.Some people claim that if children are allowed to make everyday decisions,society may become full of selfish individualists, whilst others argue that it is important for their children to make up their own minds about the matters that impact them.I agree with the former viewpoint because children may develop the habit of being self-centred if given the right to decide mundane matters.The below essay will elucidate both views and my opinion.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more popular,in recent times It has been observed that people prefer to buy a stock from an online platform rather than a shop.It has some merits and demerits both pros, as well as demerits, are elaborated on further.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

The technological advancements of the current era have made it possible for each person to be monitored without their acknowledgement. From my point of view, the benefits of this development are undeniable, however, to a certain extent, there are also some drawbacks.

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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

People have different options regarding educational systems. While many nations are argued that some educational classifications encourage scholarships to certain courses at the age of 15,whereas, others considered that nations should study a huge collection of subjects until they leave school. This essay will examine the reasons for this action and the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of systems.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Doing research and data gathering are aggressively increasing these days. It is often argued that newly gathered data should be shared with others as much as possible, while many people think that information is too valuable and should not be shared freely. I agree with the latter opinion due to some reasons that will be discussed below.

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More and more people move away from family and friends for working. Do the advanatges outweigh disadvantages

Living far from family and friends seems to be one of the ubiquitous requirements for work in the present life. Even though many people believe that it could bring benefits, I would argue that its drawback outstrips, including expense and unwanted health problems.

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in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. what whould you think the causes, and what measures could be taken to solve them

It is undeniable that in many countries people are suffering from weight increase as well as health and fitness deterioration. This essay will discuss the possible factors behind these problems and suggest some solutions to overcome them.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Environmental pollution is one of the major challenges members of a community are prone to face.Most countries around the globe are also experiencing contamination of land,water and air in their areas. This essay will examine how flooding and malaria affect the surroundings and how good hygiene and drainage can be used to reduce the problems.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

There are some people who prefer to have their own business instead of working in an institution, while others opposed it. This essay will show why more and more people are following this trend. In addition, will draft some disadvantages for the same.

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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Many are of the belief that contacting possible alien life is a desirable goal. While others are wary of the potential dangers. In my opinion, this satisfies basic human curiosity, as the risk is too high. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will be discussing my point of view.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is t to maintain old buildings

many antique buildings are guarded by the authority because they have historically been remarkable in a nation. While some people argue ancient monuments should be demolished and replaced by new ones because of citizen`s demand for housing and work and I would argue that it is extremely crucial to preserve old buildings and also give reasons why the past oughts do not obstruct advancement .

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Those budgets that governments destined to music, theatre or art usually are seen as a waste of money and therefore citizens think that they should be invested in public services. Despite that, I am in total disagreement to that extent due to the following reasons that I will explain in this essay.

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