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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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The money, spent on space research, has brought enourmous benefits to humankind, but it could be more usefully applied. How far do you agree?

Some people believe that instead of spending the national budget on space exploration, that amount of capital should be allocated to urgent issues such as poverty, education, or worldwide crises. However, I am opposed to this judgment.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.

“Health is wealth”. It is generally observed that the rich countries youth generation are putting on weight, which has become a serious issue in well-established countries.

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Nowadays most of the parents are working which lead to harmful effects on their children. What are the causes of it? what could be the result of it?

These days, People would like to choose a professional career rather than stay at home and raise children. this essay will discuss what are the factors for this such as desired goals, to limit expenditures according to rising inflation and also will explain what would be the result of it.

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Advantages and disadvantages of studentsworking while studying

Nowadays, many students are choosing to work part-time while pursuing their education. It is true that working while studying provides an overview of industry culture and makes them responsible, it can be quite taxing for scholars. The essay will examine these merits and demerits in detail.

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Advantages and disadvantages of studentsworking while studying

Nowadays, many students are choosing to work part-time while pursuing their education. While it is true that working while studying provides an overview of industry culture and makes them responsible, it can be quite taxing for scholars. This essay will examine these merits and demerits in detail.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of the argument and then give your opinion.

Using a computer in education has become increasingly a controversial topic among most of the demographic in this society.It is often argued that there is a huge amount of advantage available in this trend whilst others disagree and think there is a negative outcome in it .I am with the first side

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In many countries, governments spend a lot of money celebrating national holidays and festivals. However, some people think that spending money on these celebrations is a waste. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Observing different carnivals is considered the essential way of fostering a nation’s pride and dignity. Governments of many countries allocate a massive amount of budget for commemorating holidays and festivals. This essay will argue why celebrating country-wide festivals and holidays is completely unnecessary despite few advantages.

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Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.

A certain group of persons believe that living with a family which consist of grandparents, father's brothers, and brother-in-law is good for the baby's holistic development instead of living with only parents. I personally gravitate that this is a wonderful perspective for youngster's growth. Moreover, I can explicate my stances in favour of the given statement and confer certain examples to support my views.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is often noticed nowadays that a few nations give paramount importance to buy a house rather than taking it on a lease. There are certain factors involved in the development of this novel trend such as increased affordability and peace of mind. However, in my perspective, I feel it is an appropriate development that will help folks in many ways.

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People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some individuals think that the importance of material consideration is more significant than bonding relationships with their friends and families for people in the modern world. In my opinion, capitalist and competitive world structure has forced material possessions amongst individuals and also social media is another main driver for increasing people's desire of buying, thus people have become fewer participants in their family and friendship. The aim of this essay is to discuss the argument and it will represent relevant examples.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that people's health has been improving, and a certain group of people are living many years, as a result of the retirement age of the people should be considerably increased. I gravitate with the given statement, and I will make some perspectives with supporting some examples in the following paragraphs.

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Parents who send their children to study abroad. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Some parents prefer to send their children to study outside their countries so they can get the benefits of greater education, new culture exploration, and extra opportunities for working and living while other parents recommend for their children to be educated in their home country as a more affordable option with higher safety for their youngster.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Countries all over the world are faced with the problem of overpopulation in city areas. There are several causes and solutions, which I will discuss in this essay.

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Some people believe it is best to speak while others believe writing is better way of communication. Do you agree or disagree?

Communication has become a very important tool in today's world. There are many types of communication resources available, such as writing an application, having a face-to-face conversation. While some people say that the best way to communicate is to communicate whereas, others are of the view that writing an application is the best way. Although I believe that face-to-face conversation is very important, the way the letter is written cannot be ignored.

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nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amount of money on their marriage parties. many people feel large and expensive wedding causes problems for bride and groom. do you agree?

Some people believe that money spent on big fat marriages is a waste and cause problems for the newly married couples. I strongly agree with this, their future becomes less secure and this causes the social evil and practice of Dowry.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Retirement age is an age when every working individual takes a break from work and gets paid for the services that they have done for their company. Some people believe that having a fixed retirement age for everyone irrespective of their occupation is unfair and certain workers should allow taking early retirement. I completely agree with this argument and I will indicate my view with examples.

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If a product is good can meet people's needs, people will buy it. Advertisement in the media is no more than form of entertainment. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?

Advertisement is a medium to entertain people as well as educate them about the product through visual effects. However, some people believe that individuals will purchase the commodity if it is important to them, regardless of what the media shows. I agree with the former statement, however, it is not completely true.

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Nowadays most people read digital books than conventional books. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Books have helped humanity evolve over a great period of time. It is often seen nowadays, most of the public use digital books and there is a drop in conventional book readers. This trend has got its own benefits such as easy portability, as well as drawbacks such as health problems.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer techology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that, with the introduction of computers, the authorities should not waste money on the maintenance of public libraries. While this could be the case for several reasons, my view is that traditional libraries have an important function that computers cannot perform and therefore should be maintained for public access.

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In modern societies, it is possible for people to go shopping, work and communicate via the internet without face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

The advancement in technology has uncertainly changed people’s lifestyle. Nowadays people are able to do their shopping, work and communicate with each other via the internet. In my opinion, while there are some drawbacks of having less facial communication, I believe there are also clear positive aspects of this trend.

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