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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Since the turn of the millennium an increasing number of people have switched from reading traditional books to electronic media

Nowadays,in many countries, people have turned from reading printed books to online reading materials. This essay will firstly discuss the main reason that why this is happening and secondly, look at the effects this is having on society.

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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a section of society believes that modern technologies like phones, Tv, and social media all are major dissertation for people not to socialise.In my opinion, I completely agree with this.However,day to day interaction with families has been decreases no words and time for the society meetings also to take care of their kids.I shall examine my own view on this in the following paragraphs.

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

The issue of whether the infant should learn the knowledge related to flora and fauna has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that these activities can substantially help children develop their mindset about protecting the environment and broaden their horizon by necessary skills for themself. On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that this is not important for the kid’s syllabus because they are just at primary school. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people think that the government should give financial support to artists such as musicians, painters and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Creating uniqueness is an art towards which certain people involved such as painters, poets and musicians. A section of society holds a belief that these artists should be allocated by some amount for their desirable work by the law enforcement agencies; however, some think that it is just a squandering of money as there are other various things to be paid for.This essay intends to discuss both the viewpoints followed by my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs with suitable illustrations.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Pet ownership has become common in recent years, and while some individuals believe that this has a positive impact, others argue that it is unhealthy and they may spread dangerous diseases. This essay will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea that having a pet is beneficial for young ones.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undeniable, in school curriculums, literature is an essential subject. But some people think that other units such as science, math, etcetera are more important than novels and poems. In my opinion, every study field has its value and significance, and it depends only on the student's interest in which area he or she wants to choose.

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Most Children want to watch the same TV programmes or play the same video games as their friends. Do you think parents should allow their children to do this ?

The person we choose to interact with can shape what we become in the future. As a result, what our children watch or play with their friends is very crucial. But should parents allow their kids to watch the same stories and play the same games their friends are watching ? To my mind, parents should allow this as it can have a positive impact on their child's mind which this essay discusses.

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Many of the countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so?what can be done to change their views

Is international tourism a threat to one's country? This is the belief of most countries. The reason being first, it can be harmful to the local culture. Second, there can be exploitation of nature reserves. Certain measures can be taken by the government to alleviate these concerns as international tourism can be a boon to a nation’s economy. The same shall be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your Opinion?

In the forthcoming future, some individuals believe that artificial intelligence would develop all kinds of work, in a job occupation.

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Many museums charge for the entries while others are free. Do you think the advantages of Charging people for admission to the museum outweighs disadvantages?

There is no denying fact that some museums take entry free whereas many give admission without any cost. Although everyone can afford to visit without any charge, they should pay for better facilities because of high maintenance cost and the need to upgrade with the latest technology, so that the merits of this practice outbalance the demerits.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?

Walking is one of the elementary and effective forms of physical activities. However, nowadays a smaller number of folks have been showing their interest in strolling as a way of exercise. This essay will discuss the main reason for less enthusiasm in walking including scarcity of places for hiking. This essay will also suggest the probable solution to the problem including the construction of the walking amenities in various area.

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Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that planting greenery in urban areas is more important than erecting new apartment buildings instead. I totally agree with this statement and think that it might help to improve the environmental situation in the world and also will be beneficial for citizens’ health.

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some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organizations.discuss both sides and state your opinion.

It is well accomplished that, people in this modern world are highly competitive. It is a highly debatable topic that, whether individuals opt to work in the same company life-long or to choose different options whenever that is necessary. In the upcoming paragraphs, both sides would be discussed in detail.

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Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university,in order to travel or to work .Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

A gap year that means a year between leaving school and starting üniversity that is usually spent travelling or working is a highly debated issue.There are many advantages and disadvantages when this issue carefully studied,but it the more important to notice the advantages.

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some people prefer on-on-one lessons while others prefer groups discuss both views & give your opinion

In this modern era, methods of learning and teaching have been transformed completely. However, it is argued that one to one teaching is convenient than common company discussions. This essay will discuss both the perspectives as well as give some immensely beneficial aspects of organizational learning in order to support my opinion, in favour of combined studies.

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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extend do you agree on disagree?

A small portion of society believes that alternative penalties, such as professional training or community work, other prison sentences, should be applied to criminals. I personally agree with this statement depending on the offence types.

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Write about the following topic: Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers and mobile devices are becoming accessible to more individuals and organisations in our society. Writing by hand has been replaced by typing on keyboards to fill out forms, create bills and write articles. Hence, there is an argument whether it is still relevant to teach our youth the art of writing by hand. To my mind, I disagree that we should abandon teaching this skill as it has lots of advantages in life which this essay discusses.

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Some people say that self-employment is better than a job in a company or an institution. Discus both the views and give your opinion.

More and more people are aiming to become an entepeunier in their life as it provides some with the flexibility they desire. But there have been some who are speculative of this model and believe that working at a well-established organisation is the way to achieve their goals.To my mind, being self-employed can help someone unlock skills and become more successful in their life.

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that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

It is some times argues parents should be responsible for the physical activities of their children than the schools. In my ,opinion it would be wrong for schools to only focus on studies.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The Internet has been looked upon for any smaller piece of information needed these days because of its outstanding reach. However, many people argue that it has provided us with some serious problems than benefits. Some of the problems and solutions related to the internet are discussed below.

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