IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 721

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?

Over the years, television has become an essential device in homes. However, lately, many children spend excessive time watching television. In this essay, I will discuss the reason for this trend and how we can prevent it.

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Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

Currently, global companies have become creative to increase their sales. Turning to online shopping and improving customer service are the main ways to motivate their sales. In my opinion, online shopping is the best method for companies to sell their products. I will elaborate more in the next paragraphs.

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A growing number of people feel animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research

A significant number of individuals assert that animals should be utilized by people and thus should have the same rights as mankind. While others argue that these creatures should be used to gratify the human plethora of needs such as feeding and conducting research. This essay shall endorse the latter sentiment, however, the two contracting views shall be highlighted in the ensuing paragraphs after which a logical conclusion shall be analysed.

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Nowadays, children watch too much TV. Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?

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Behavior in schools is getting worse. explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

The behaviour of someone is an important item in the envourment ,especially in school. We noticed in these days the behaviour is hedging worse because The parents don't learn their sons the polity and other things.It is very necessary to deal with teachers in the school.The two solutions to solve these problems are learning them from parents and learning them from teachers.

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers during their working time. What causes this trend and is it a positive or negative development?

The whole world seems to be altering its outlook demanding reinvention from modern-day humans. In par with that, the professional life of an individual is rapidly altering at an alarming rate. This essay discusses the reasons for the trend and its repercussions.

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours and they feel more stress out then before, what are the reasons and what can employer do to make their life easier.

There has been a phenomenon that people have to work longer hours and have more life pressure than before. There are reasons behind it, and they will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a conventional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It would be argued that some people are not interested in leading their lives following their traditional culture these days anymore. However, some others believe that preserving ancient customs is part of our history. In my opinion, the traditional culture has advantages and disadvantages. The positive effects are worth learning. The negative effects can be improved.

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Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that authorities should spend more tex money on libraries rather than the public transport system. however, I complete disagree with this notion. In This essay, I shall discuss both cases followed by the conclusion.

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When designing a building, some people think that the intended use of the building should be taken into account rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Building construction has expanded dramatically at an exponential rate in the modern age. Many people concur that when a building is constructed, the intended purpose must take precedence over the infrastructure's outward appearance. I wholeheartedly concur with the aforementioned remark, and I'll go into further detail below.

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Children do not concentrate and School what is the cause and what is the solution

Nowadays, scholars no longer concentrate while in their study zones. This is a result of the excessive use of electronic gadgets. Moreso, it can be because of a lack of interest in the subject that is being discussed in class. In this dissertation, I will examine the above-stated causes and profer possible solutions.

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Some people believe social media is very important in our daily life, other believe it is waste of time. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

There is an ever-increasing use of technology, such as the internet and social media. It is frequently argued that it is an absolutely necessary part of our survival, while others disagree and expect that it is a misuse of one's time. In my opinion, I believe these platforms have more benefits. Also, this essay will examine both aspects discussed in further paragraphs.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes

The crime rate has been rising in many nations.Poverty and related factors such as illiteracy and unemployment are the hidden causes behind these crimes.To tackle this problem, the government and authorities should encourage educational programs,vocational training and job employment for all deprived populations.

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The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?

Nowadays every piece of information is just a click away from us, the horizon to obtain knowledge has been expanded, and the credit for this goes to the internet. The Internet has influenced our lives to a huge extent but like ,everything it comes with some drawbacks and has altered the human race both in negative and positive aspects. I advocate that there is a positive net effect of technologies.

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World peace is maintained through the threat of nuclear weapons. Nuclear power also provides cheap and clean energy. Therefore many people say that the benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the disadavantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of nuclear technology and give your opinion.

There has been controversy about whether the benefits of nuclear power outweigh the disadvantages. Both upside and downside will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this stage of prosperity, the issue under scrutiny, which divides opinions among classes in society, would be whether additional financial support can catalyze more satisfaction in developed countries. Inevitably, the more influx of cash flow the country has, the more influential and powerful that country becomes. Nevertheless, in my book, the word satisfaction may not be closely linked to wealth.

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Many people feel the urban encivronments are more unhealthy than they have ever been What do you think are the main causes of the problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem ?

It is certainly true that towns and cities all around the world have already been more polluted and much more unhealthy for the inhabitants of them. In my opinion, this situation is the direct result of human overpopulation, but there are many approaches to address the problem.

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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have morw opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In these past few ,years there is a gradual increase in study abroad due to the scholarships and in some cases free education this is a good thing it will encourage students to study more and become competitive to go do a degree outside of the country additionally some people also think having degree outside the country can add an additional value when going for a job.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no argument that free health service is one of the most important welfare that every country should include in its priorities. The technology of medical treatment nowadays grows up too fast. The cost of that is also huge, so I personally agree that every country should have a free health service, but should not cover the expensive cost of new medical services. In the following paragraphs, my agreement reasons will be outlined in detail before a conclusion is reached.

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Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples.

In today's ,world people say money can buy anything from happiness to all kinds of bad stuff which can spoil a human life or improve us teenagers at that age get new habits if they control and use them in a good way then their life turns brighter than anyone expected on the other end if they think in a wrong way their life can get spoiled.

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