IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 127

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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As global trade increase many goods including those we use on daily basis are produced in other countries and have to transported long distance. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

There is no doubt that advances in technology have enhanced trading between countries. It is believed that products we use on daily basis are mostly imported from overseas. This essay will explore both, the advantages and the disadvantages of this proposal.

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sounds are the most pleasant part of self-amusement in all times of history. Music is closely connected with stress levels. Because of harsh work and interpersonal issues individuals are permanently overwhelmed. I totally agree that listening to music helps people to deal with stress. Analysing the musical effect on water as well as the mood correlation will prove this statement

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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Offenders committing crimes again after relieving from prison has become a matter of great concern. This is mainly due to lack of employment, but it can be controlled by providing jobs according to their qualification.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is speculated that business enterprises nowadays are framing their products as new in many ways. This tendency can be attributed to their goal of making higher profits. In my point of view, this can bring a negative impact on our environment.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The majority of governments argue that one of the crucial targets is economical development but some individuals believe that the importance of other forms of improvement is the same as an economy for a country.I believe that other types of development have an equal value to the economy.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.Probably the most worrying threat to our planet at the present time is global warming. This essay will the reasons why this is occurring and discuss some possible solutions associated with it.

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We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology has provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as an energy source and in certain areas of medicine. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?

In the modern world, nuclear technology has led to advanced resources for humankind while it has produced modern nuclear weapons for the military of nations for decades. This essay will provide my opinions on the pros and cons of nuclear technology.

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Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

No one can deny that new youths are spending their chunk amount of capital on their wedding events, While, Others think that it is not important to spend a lot of salary in one day. In my opinion, Wedding occasions will affect on national recession and it hurt poor people's lives, and It is unnecessary to spend good value bills on these occasions I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, animal lovers are being louder on social media to express their opinions. They believe that wild animals should not be kept in zoos, while some still believe it is good for educational purposes. I agree with the latter.

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Good teaching is more important for academic success than individual ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over four decades of the period, a mature teaching system has been done with regard to its modes and methods in this nation. Like this, obviously, academic success depends on excellent instructions from teachers rather than persons. It is agreed that traditional teaching is more significant to academic success than individual competency. This essay is to split points to discuss related agreements and disagreements.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Youngsters learn a lot from their ancestors which clearly shows that history plays a major role in the current life of an individual still, some people think that past days do not have any relation with the present life. I agree with the former statement. This essay will discuss both views and in the end, will give a valid conclusion.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this.

Images are very rarely shown and published by news channels and magazines. It is a common perspective that the photos speak more than what is written. This essay would discuss some of the benefits and disadvantages of it.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, with the rapid demand for long-distance travel, many countries are faced with the challenge of upgrading the traffic infrastructure. While some people propose the brand-new construction of fast trains, others prefer further improvements to the current public transport instead. In this essay, I am going to debate both views to draw a conclusion.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that travelling by aeroplane has its own perils which cause pollution and will finish the world's resources; hence, it should be restricted. I completely disagree with this opinion and in this essay will explain the main reasons.

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Some people opine that increasing office hour is a reason for many social and personal problems and that is why it should be reduced to 35 hours in a week. What are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to 35 hours?

Hard work is imperative for the success of every human being. Some people think that many issues in our life are due to the rise in working time and, therefore this should be decreased to 35 hours per week. I strongly agree with this idea. This essay will mention the pros and cons of the topic and will give a valid opinion.

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Some people opine that increasing office hour is a reason for many social and personal problems and that is why it should be reduced to 35 hours in a week. What are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to 35 hours?

Working hours ought to be utilized by every individual of the state in order to fulfil the duty of a responsible citizen. It is generally argued that prolonged work time affects family hours and social get-togethers of people for, this reason, time spent at the workplace should be reduced. This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of the topic and in the end, will present a valid conclusion.

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Why today Immigration for study has become trend do you agree or disagree?

Immigration has a significant impact on the community. Each year numerous students around the world have decided to immigrate to developed countries for education. I agree that the prominent reasons for immigration can be job opportunities and a lack of liberty.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary society,the development of technology enables people to study from home.In other words,online education has become a trend.However,some individuals believe that distance learning can not replace a method that is delivered on campus.I partially agree with this statement.

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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals species. Some people think that is too late to do anything about effective measures can taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

It comes as no surprise that people have been causing harm to the planet due to different kinds of activities such as manufacturing, development of the global economy and so on. Certain people think that mankind does not have any time left for taking steps to tackle the issue meanwhile others think otherwise. I am inclined to agree with the latter. The two opinions will be examined in the essay.

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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree.

Information is a basic right for every human and it should be free for everyone regardless of their personal wealth. In this essay, I strongly agree that schooling must be free for all and open for all.

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