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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

In the modern era, most teenagers focus on trends. They spend money to sustain their dream. However, today they imitate the attitude and apparel of the famous crowds. This essay explains the cases and problems with the attitude of teenagers.

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Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals or government? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past, many of the greatest scientific discoveries in the field of medicine had been achieved by individuals alone. However, as dependence on technology increased in order to make new findings, more and more researchers were needed in multidisciplinary groups. This has led to a shift in how science is organized and funded. Companies' funding became increasingly crucial, and hence it has been argued that private matters should not drive health research. In my opinion, both companies and government have different roles.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermakets in some countries, many small and local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch , it has to be said that local traders are struggling with their business due to the significant expansion of the supermarkets, and the majority of people assume that this trend may be eradicated by the local business and communities. I do agree with this notion as local trading is the heart of the local community. By this I mean, local factories and farmers may be threatened to close their production.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent decades, our society and community have been taking a massive number of advantages of technological advancements such as vehicles, smartphones, social media, and the Internet as people become more social than in the past. Although numerous people argue that there are some drawbacks to sophisticated technological developments I strongly agree with the view that the benefits of recent technology enable human beings to become more social.

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People argue that raising children in today’s society is more difficult than in the past. Others believe that it is much easier due to all the innovations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that the upbringing of children in this era can be a daunting task as compared to the past, whilst others think that it has become easier due to cutting-edge technology. Although children of this age are very hard to raise, I firmly believe that modern developments have made it easier. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns ad cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to modern technology, people's lifestyles have changed. Shopping habits are one of the most notable changes. Some assume that increase in the popularization of online shopping causes the closing of all markets in cities. I personally agree with the given statement because online shopping provides many facilities for consumers.

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Some people say that art is an essential subject and every child should learn it in school. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think every child should learn about art in school. I completely disagree with this opinion because there are many other options which have plenty of benefits for kids. This essay will explore why it is not important for students to take an art class.

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

In the status quo, clean water has been massively demanded and considered a worldwide issue to be resolved at once due to its urgency and limitation in many regions globally. This essay elucidates the major factors of its higher demand and effective alternatives which could be done by the governments and societies.

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Competitiveness is considered to be an important quality for people in many societies. How do you think it affects individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays it is vitally important for individuals to be competitive in numerous aspects. In this essay, I will discuss how it impacts each person and I would argue this to be a positive trend.

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Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others believe making the products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays , it is true to say that some products are focused on quality but others are targeted for an affordable price. Some people believe that products should be used for a long time whereas other opponents claim that price is more important than standard . This essay will discuss both views and then later I will present my own opinion.

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do you agree or disagree with the following satement ? most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future . use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, life is full of unforeseen experiences. There is no doubt that most of the situations that have been difficult in the past days, would be boon for individuals in their upcoming life. I wholeheartedly agree with the given statement. This disquisition will discuss firstly, the reason why this phenomenon is helpful in people’s lives and, secondly, this would not be beneficial.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern society, some people argue that soon-to-be newlyweds should consider living together before getting married because it can give them some opportunities to get to comprehend each other. I partly endorse the essay owing to a number of reasons that will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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some people believe that consumerism is good for countries, whereas others argue that it has negative consequences. discuss both views and give your opinion!

Being over consumptive is often argued to bring both benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, although it has a direct impact on developing economic aspects, having said that, this role would also affect circumstances and human physical condition.

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Goverments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays a huge amount of money is spent on space programs by authorities around the world. Nevertheless, some people think that research on human health would benefit society much more. In my opinion, the safety of our community in terms of health should be supported more, rather than space programs. In ,this I will consider and express my own ideas about this situation.

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Now a days many children play outdoor games. Some People said that they play indoors games. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Contemporarily, a significant number of people are of the view that youngsters should participate in open-air activities, whereas others believe that indoor games are preferable. In my opinion, both viewpoints have their benefits and drawbacks, however, this essay will concur with the former point of view.

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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, travelling has become more affordable than ever before. A section of society believes that the reasonable transport price gives us chance to travel and no doubt it is blessed for middle-class families.While others in social outlook that flights can cause harm to nature and pollute the environment it should be banned .This essay will discuss both contradictory views and at the end provide an appropriate conclusion.

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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

It is true that some lawbreakers re-offend after serving a prison sentence or other kinds of punishment. In this essay, I will discuss why this happens and what measures we can introduce to tackle this problem.

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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Crime rates vary in different parts of the world and the majority of states are adversely affected by it. Some have the view that the possibility to bring down the crime rate is limited. however, I firmly believe that with the right countermeasures and strict laws, the rate of violence can be drastically reduced. This essay will discuss both points of view and my opinion on the same.

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Demand for oil and gas is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The importance of finding new sources of coat in untouched spaces with cutting-edge technology which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial while others reject the notion. Although mining coat in the new operation would destroy the environment, it could have some beneficial points to add worldwide oil supply. This essay will further elaborate my views on favouring the positive and negative impact of this issue and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Money should be spent on creating new buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, there are many ancient buildings around the world. They have a lot of monumental history crossing many centuries. However, I strongly oppose the above statement of building museums or town halls into new ones.

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