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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of  fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of people are becoming crucial too fat. There are controversies recommended to solve this problem with thriving food. In my opinion, I disagree, because to solve this problem people need a total change our eating habits and exercise regularly.
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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

In the modern globalised world, man, aided by the magic mantra of technology, continues to improve his existence in terms of economy, literacy and quality of life. However, in the process of creating a more productive and prosperous life society, it seems that internet is destroying the wholesomeness of unsupervised childrens using internet.
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Annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

As seen on the chart, between 2002 and 2011, the annual number of rentals tends to decrease while the annual number of sales differs depending on the film’s types. During 2002-2003, there is a significant difference between the number of sales and rentals, with rentals being higher. However, starting from 2004, the number of sales is higher than rentals. Moreover, among the sale of films, on average, DVD sales have the highest number of sales compared to the other types of film. In 2002, the number of VHS sales is higher than DVD sales. Nevertheless, VHS sales experienced a continuous decline from 2003 to 2005, while the DVD sales increased and reached their peak in 2007. As the Blu-ray sales start in 2007, the number of DVD began a continues declined from 2008 to 2011. On the other hand, the sales of Blu-Ray films increase during the same period. Compared to the number of rentals, the number of film sales is lower in 2002 and 2002.
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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a “level playing field” that reduces socio economic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather that their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students’ rights to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academics achievement. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The given table, gives the information describing the number of persons in millions had travel to international destination in era of 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. We are going to discuss the main information we can observe from the table and compare these four years with each other and make a conclusion.
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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today's world, many peoples are spend large part of free time using smartphone. There are several reasons for this, and the impact of this trend are subject to debates.
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Childhood obesity is being a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?

Nowadays, Many countries facing childhood obesity problems with a severe conditions and how it will be solve easily. In my opinion, I will explain about this obesity problems.
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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is a common belief that children are often told that they can achieve anything if they have enough effort. It seems to me that these is a more persuasive arguments that you should Teaching children makes them feel pressured or difficult to achieve but doesn't want to do it this has both pros and cons. I will examine both viewpoints in the following essay .
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write atleast 150 words.

These two pictures shows the plan of the Grange Park which was opened in the year 1920 and the current plan of the park today.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.

i don't really agree with the statemanet in which say television has destroyed communication among friends and relatives. first reason is that television nowadays not really a big concideration for people to make their connection among friends and family worse and the other is that television not the very first source people get news but as a companion..
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Some people get into debt buying things they don’t need and can’t ‎afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What action can be taken ‎to prevent people having this problem?

The bar chart gives information about intake of students, who are interested in music in an Australian university between 2000 and 2006 while the pie chart provides different ways of choosing their career after completing the course.
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Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

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The plan below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

the given diagram depicts the plan of a public park has been opened in 1920 and the same park of today
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You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned.

I hope you 're well I am writting to you about unsastisfy that I bought from your store in last week.
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In advertising nowadays, businesses usually highlight and emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why do businesses practice this? Do you think this development is a positive practice or a negative one?

In todays instelmant of modern busines most of the time in the comercials they use inovationa and new technology as a bait to buy a proudct. Assuming that living in a capitalistic society businesses use this kind of advertisment to reach the biggest group of people to maximalize their sales and profits. This kind of practieses are called agresive marketing. Offten product of their ad is not that new as they say. This could led to the assumption that modern world id full of new stuff which is not true and it could missleading for ordinary people. I belive that todays world might be full of new and inovative product but becouse of this kind of practisses make us as a target more numb. We do not need more and more of the new stuff as the ads claim to be, instead often times then not we need trust worthy and stable product that we could use for years to come. I belive that this type of practices are negative compere to more and more worring information about societys over-consumption. B...
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans demonstrate the current version of airport’s southwest site and its proposed enhancement plan for upcoming year.
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Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

recently immarating to another reagoins become pupelar more an more for college or working permanantly ,some people think its peneficial for some guyes as they gane more life excperince dealing with another socity , but some dont believe so , as it mite keep the travilars less connected to his own invironment lets take a look at both side
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formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a students performance.Continual assessment such as course books and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. do you agree or disagree

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the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph demonstrates the proprtions of employees in Autralia of a certain gender, illustrating the distributions among their ages from 15 to 64 within three years including; 1984, 2001 and 2014.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Communication in a non-native language for people who stay overseas has an impact on the social matter as same as training issues. I strongly agree language barrier is always the main reason people can not interact in society where they living in other nations.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problem, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Communication in a non native language for people who staying overseas have impact to social matter as same as training issues. I strongly agree language barrier always main reason people can not interact in society where they living in other nation.
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