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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

In this generation, Mother and father are buying a tremendous amount of playthings for their offspring which are good for their cognitive development, Hence, there is a disadvantage to this as well, which i will be discussing in this essay.
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Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers playing games, chatting and watching videos but all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and their working lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I am referring Lucas Hardy, who is admitted to our hospital due to worsening asthma symptoms.
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Some people believe that children should be free to choose their own career while others believes more realistically discuss both the views and give your opinion

Undoutedly, every individual has a right to choose their own career nowadays some strata of the society believe that the youngsters should be free to choose there own career but other thing that they should be choose more realistically .I will be discussing both the schools of thought in the subsequent paragraphs prior to the meaningful conclusion along with my opinion.
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Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades.What causes water pollution?How can we prevent this problem?

It is true that water pollution become a major problem in our country over the few years. There are several reasons for this.
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Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether the government should make tertiary education free for al students. I tend to believe that higher education should be free– for the following reasons. Three main factors support the idea of free university education. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many students cannot afford university education, although they truly want to get degrees. Obviously, without enough financial resources, these students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships– the fund should be spent on university education. That is to say, the government would be well-advised to alocate resources in a more sensible way. A third reason for my belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognised that many young people are reluctant to face their ...
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ome people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Re: Lionel Ramamurthy, aged 63 Mr Lionel Ramamurthy was admitted on 4 February 2019 having contracted pneumonia. He is now ready for discharge back into your care tomorrow. On admission, he was experiencing fevers and rigors. He suffered dyspnoea, wheezing and sleeplessness. He had chest and abdominal pain due to prolonged persistent coughing. After a week in hospital, he has stabilised and his breathing problems are now resolved. However, he still experiences some chest and abdominal pain, with a dry cough. His nursing management in hospital initially consisted of a walking frame and assistance with showering and dressing. Mr Ramamurthy is now more independent. He is also able to walk about slowly without assistance, and shower and use the toilet independently. Paracetamol may be administered as needed if chest and abdominal pain persists and Mr Ramamurthy should be kept warm. Please encourage oral fluids, and ensure that he sits up, rather than lies down, whenever possib...
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Weather countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The key factors in diminishing fish stocks in global reservoirs are repeated incidents of superfluous fishing along with a major issue of water pollution. To deal with this worldwide problem groundbreaking research on the topic of tackling water pollution might be made. By way of illustration, in the recent past Australia had a severe problem of marine life extinction caused by an uncontrollable torrent of tourists. Nevertheless, Australian enthusiasts together with local entrepreneurs came up with a brilliant solution which is breeding fish on special farms. My own considered opinion is that if we domesticate some fish species and multiply them on an industrial scale, the rest of the sea life form will undoubtedly benefit from it.
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Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?

Children are the future of our upcoming generation.Their upbringing plays a very important role for the society.It is often suggested that physically hitting or punishing a child helps him or her to behave correctly.According to my opinion,it does create a lot of issues in their growing phase as I will explain.
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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary household. Wwhat problem are caused by household waste, and what solution may be possible in both the short and the long term?

It is sometimes argued that those garbages which are generated by families can be consider as a concerning issue nowadays. While it may be lead to various difficulties, it would be control by using many solutions in different period times.
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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The lifestyle of people is changing every moment and and everyday.human population is increasing gradually with the increase in demand of health and job.This rush was much less when compared to the older generation.Life was much peaceful years back from now.According to my opinion,we are having much better lifestyle than our grandparents as i will explain.
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Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is well-known that today's study program is being developed. And due to the changes some people tend to think that students should be divided taking into account their academic level, againstly others believe that this is nat a good option. So, I am going to discuss these two points.
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Some people say that on one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society.discuss both views and give ur opinion.

Three graphs illustrate the kinds of deal with waste in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and UK, meanwhile, all values are shown in percent.
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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

There is a study which shows that the original characteristics inside people’ selfs are having far more impact on our personality and development than experiences that may occur in life. In my point of view, I believe that the role of our characteristics is more crucial in compare with the experiences.
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In spite of the advances in medicine, many people around the world still die of easily preventable diseases. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In recent years, medicine has progressed enormously but still the highest death rate is related to preventable diseases. This essay will examine the main causes of this problems and possible solutions.
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In spite of the advances in medicine, many people around the world still die of easily preventable diseases. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In recent years, medicine has progressed enormously but still the highest death rate is related to preventable disease. This essay will examine the main casue of this problems and possible solution.
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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives

It is said that taking risks brings a lot of benefits. However, it also gives us some drawbacks. First of all, it is obvious that taking risks will cause a great loss if people do it and fail. In personal life, this loss might not be so harmful. However, it will be really harmfull in professional life, because people take a responsibility not only for themselves but also others such as colleages, customers and their families. It will even damage the society from the economic point. On the other hand, we can receive huge benefits by taking risks. Firstly, we can learn how to prepare for one goal through this process. In order to achieve the aim, people will make all the efforts to think about it and try to find more efficient way. If they do this in the professional circumstances, they will recognise the responsibility and importance of cooperation. Also, it will be completely meaningful even though people can't achieve the goal after taking risks. They will learn the reaso...
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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives

It is said that taking risks brings a lot of benefits. However, it also gives us some drawbacks. First of all, it is obvious that taking risks will cause a great loss if people do it and fail. In personal life, this loss might not be so harmful. However, it will be really harmfull in professional life, because people take a responsibility not only for themselves but also others such as colleages, customers and their families. It will even damage the society from the economic point. On the other hand, we can receive huge benefits by taking risks. Firstly, we can learn how to prepare for one goal through this process. In order to achieve the aim, people will make all the efforts to think about it and try to find more efficient way. If they do this in the professional circumstances, they will recognise the responsibility and importance of cooperation. Also, it will be completely meaningful even though people can't achieve the goal after taking risks. They will learn the reaso...
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The process shows how sugar is made from the sugar cane plant. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this natural and man-made process involves 3 main stages beginning with initial harvesting, followed by a chemical transformation, and finally separation into the end product of sugar.
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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The impacts of unscrupulous activities towards mankind have already started showing as a curse to nature. Nature, like our own mother, have undergone enormous pressure and causative factors and alarmingly the limits are reached. The effects of industrialisation, rapid use of networking activities and fast growing urbanisation have always been the prime role player for the changes observed in climate. While the summer is considerably broadened in some parts of the earth causing the draught and less fertility, the other zone is receiving a good amount of downpour throughout the year. As we have already been habituated to live with the modern amenities in a luxurious life, it has become difficult for us to avoid the importance of globalisation. Additionally, it is pertinent to mention that someone should be habituated to live accepting the change without ignoring the importance of growing civilization. However, the other opinion says that we must be responsible enough to take various m...
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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case?

Clothing is one of the major form of an individuals both personal and professional identity.A person’s clothing gives us a rough idea about where the person is going.One’s attire also gives us an overall view about his or her characteristics.Nowadays, both men and woman wear mostly T-shirts or shirts with jeans and trousers over olden traditional dresses.This is mostly due to a following reasons.
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