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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion, give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, almost 50% of human begin are using technology and science to developing and sloving the proplem. However, we still need the history to guild us and give us more infromations that been happen before to improve and learn from them althought mistake or invention. As my own opinion the history subject is as important as science and technology subjects.

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The cost of international travel is decreasing, and tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries?

Nowadays, the decrease in travel costs contributes to the flourishing of tourism worldwide. While there are benefits, there are also some drawbacks. This essay will discuss both views with examples.

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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary era, going abroad for education is seen as trend. Foreign countries provide numerous opportunities to pupils to study their part and all of their courses. It comes with many advantages and disadvantages. I do not support this statement.

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as increasing number of people are buying what they need online.What are the advantage and disadvantage for both individuals and companies to shopping online.

In this fast phase world, the number of people shop online increased rapidly nowadays.This new trend has several benefits to buyers and corporationS, as it is time saver and cost effective for both of them . However, it also has a few issues that can not be overlooked such as software malfunctions, risk of cybertheft .

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How does the writer use language to describe the storm?

The title of the text is " death zone " reflecting a imagery of horifying area at the start . The writer use of the numebrs in the opening sentences to describe the fact that in this height "5,360" metres ,it is a cheerless place which describes unpleasurable environment . Alliteration is used as "sudden squalls" which this rhythm is about something mysterious or feary and conveys the sense of fears for readers.In approaching sentences it mentioned tha catastrophe is flowing like a apocalyptic event which moved in scary ways and described as moving silently and swiftly toward them ,so ,these sentences create a sense of fearful scene in plus of huge sculpture to the people .Another beautiful alliteration is "mightiest mountains" which is transfered that the watchers have been paused ,because the repetition "mm" is looked like a sound of disability in a speech .

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, competitive - is a part of schools education sistem. Some people belive that this is bad for children and make bad influance on them. While, others think, that this is great and can make children to acheive.

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Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

some folks belive that it is a proper thing for high level management ranks to have more wages than other members in a corporation. I completely agree with this statement as those positions comes with difficult tasks. Consequently, it involve a lot of time and thinking process.

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, placing an order online is more popular trend among the individuals as compare to how they do shopping previously. This scenario has more pros and cons which will be discussed in this essay with the appropriate views.

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The success of a business or sports team depends more on the leader of that team than on the individual team members. This is because it is the leader who makes sure everyone works together to achieve the team's goals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, it is considered that a success of an organization depends entirely on the leardership on the supervisor rather than the members of that group. Although team leaders have the ability to motivate and encourage everyone in the group, I completely disagree that with this statement, because, the success of an organization depends on many factors such as self-motivation instead of just the group cooperation. This essay will explore these perspectives.

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Some people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is clear that education is an essential element of our life and has a huge impact on society, but in terms of private schools, should countries give them financiall facilities ?. In my opinion I believe they should because of two reasons , it is useful to improve the educational system and to build more schools.

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Some people believe that artificial intelligence (AI) has become an essential part of daily life and its usage should be encouraged, while others argue that relying too much on AI could have negative consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of the interference of artificial intelligence in the lives of community at an unprecedented pace, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial, while others reject the notion. In my opinion, increasingly relying on it, will make life problematic, ergo, only limited usage of such innovations acts as a blessings.

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Directors of large organisations receive much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary, while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions differ regarding the salaries of directors of large companies, with some arguing that it is unfair to pay much higher money to directors than average employees. However, others think it is resonable . This essay disscuss both perspectives and why I believe directors deserve higher salaries.

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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

With the technology become more advance, computer as the product of it are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. In my perspective, while some jobs would be replaced by modern technologies, it would not replace all the jobs in this world. People with unique and creative expertises would survive on this issue.

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Many scientists believe that we can now study the behaviour of three-year-old children to see whether they will become criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature? Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

Scientific community has opinion that we can study behaviour of three-year-old children to see whether they will become criminals. I am convinced that crime is determined by human nature due to awareness of actions. The following paragraphs will discuss is it possible to stop kids from becoming criminals and how exactly childhood affect on individual's behaviour in the future.

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Directors of large organisations receive much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary, while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Do high managers deserve higher salary than low workers. I agree that high employees should receive a higher salary than others. In this essay, I am going to discuss why large organisations have high incomes and ordinary employees have low salaries.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people around the world start worry about environmental issues that might made our planet destroy all forms of the life. With progress of technology, humans can predict the future of the earth in more precise way than before, one of bad sign is changing in climate in recent years. However, in my view there is a lot of solutions for this problem.

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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

As proven by experience, the skills and features of women and men are varied. This issue is shown more so in jobs. I know it is vital in many areas like occupation. I believe because of these fundamental differences, men are better suited for some jobs and the opposite is also true.

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Overcrowded classrooms can hinder the teaching and learning process, affecting both teachers and students. Explore the causes of overcrowding in schools and propose practical solutions to manage classroom sizes and improve the quality of education

Nowadays, educational facilities face many difficulties like overcrowding. It is a major problem in many countries around the world. There are a several causes for this problem and the governments should solve this problem because it could effect on the study. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons of overcrowded students in classes and headlights some solutions.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of economy, money has been becoming a sign to determine people rich or not. Whereas some people look upon saving money earlier is better, another people refer to it as something not really important. I am in favour of the former, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be prioritized. Discuss both views and what is your opinion?

Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of technology, more and more natural resources had been taking for individuals' demands. Whereas some people look upon taking advantage from the environment should be prevent, others refer to it as something acceptable. As for my perspective, I am in favor of the former and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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