IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 15

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This trend has negative effects on both society and family. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's fast-paced world, due to the proliferation of fast food consumption national meals are being eaten less compared to fast food. I consider this as a negative change and reasons will be elucidated in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in building as all facilites and books are available for all to access. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries existing online?

In this day and age, the internet is ruling the world and has overtaken most of the facilities, including access to various books, which were previously available only in the libraries. This has sparked the common opinion that public libraries will no longer be in existence, as everything is available online. There are both positive and negative ramifications of this development, which will be further discussed in this essay.

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Some people believe that men and women possess different skills. According to them certain jobs are more suitable for men than women. There are also some jobs where women perform better. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, women compete with men in almost all the sectors and have also proven their mettle. When we talk about intellectual capabilities, men and women are considered equal, however there are certain fields where gender plays a crucial role in terms of recruitment. There are still some areas of employment, which are more suitable for the men than women and vice versa. This essay agress with this fact and will further explicate my opinion.

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After graduation many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's day and age, there has been an increase in the trend of taking a gap after graduation, by students before enrolling for higher education. This leads to an increasingly controversial question, whether this gap should be used to travel or to work in a company. I agree with the latter situation than the former because it helps children to gain some real life experience and also provides them aid to manage their finances.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reaons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The extent of criminal activities has aggravated in most nations. There are various reasons behind this development, the main one being a lack of employment, and the other one is poverty and inequality. However, we can deal with this issue by improving the job market, as well as by discouraging racism. I will explicate my opinion further in the essay below.

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Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?

The Influence of Media on Society: A Double-Edged Sword

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Schools should give up using books, which makes children feel boring, they should use films, video games, computers instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone think that school should quit books, which makes student boring, instead they should shift towards films, games and laptops. In my opinion, books are worthy for studying, as books are treditional method of study, as advance methods may distract students and may create health problems for students.

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Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. They believe this would benefit teenagers and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In China, unpaid community work seems very far away for teenagers, the main reasons for that are because majority of teenager believe it is useful, as suggested by some group of people, such practices should be increased during students’ spare time to benefit both the students and the society. but I generally disagree with this statement, in this essay more details will be illustrated.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Healthly lifestyle plays vital role in human life.People should preform healthy activities to enhance their stemina and immunity to stay fit and through exercises they can get disease free life.Mostly doctors suggest to old citizen to participate in haelthy routeen for better furture.However , nowadays old people avoid to do any kind of exercise.There are many reason for this scenario and i will discuss all causes and appropirate solutions for this phenomenon in upcoming paragraphs.

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent year, a lack of discipline has increased among students. Some individuals argue that teachers should be responsible for instilling self-control; however, others contend that it is the primary duty of the parents to shape children's behavior. Although both play a role, I believe parents hold the greator responsibility for developing discipline in their children.

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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and what can be done to encourage them to spend their time walking?

Walking is the best scientifically proven method of exercise, which allows human beings to keep in shape as well as keeping their bodies away from various sets of chronic illnesses such as hypertension, diabetes, heart and kidney associated diseases. This essay will describe the two most common causes involving in reduced walking, moreover, how population can be motivated towards this exercise.

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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary scenario, reading habit has been changed entirely, there are few people who prefer reading with traditional method than the modern. Therefore, some people believe that paper-based media would be vanished in upcoming years. While, others argue that printed media cannot fade away, it will be same as it is. I personally think, non-digital media still have the equal value and it would be in the future too. So, this essay would discuss my point of view with examples.

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Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that parents should be penalised if their children are suffered from obesity. This essay disagrees with this statement because obesity can be caused by genetic and children often eat unhealthy food outside their home.

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

With the development of technology, people can interact with others through online meetings. Personally, I partly agree with this innovation based on some reasons that are explained in the essay.

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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that for intellectual and social improvement in children, educaters play a vital role than parents.This essay will explore the extent to which teachers may exceed parents in influence during school years, while acknowledging the enduring impact of parental involvement as well.

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People spend more and more time browsing social networks. Is it a positive or negative development? Should anything be done to restrict children’s access to social networks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Social networks have been playing an important part in human’s lifestyle for the past ten years, people often use social networks to engage with others in the digital world, such change made by technology has made more and more interaction from individuals, this essay will discuss the effect it has made on mankind.

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The problem of obesity is becoming a serious issue all over the world. Some people argue that the price of fattening foods should be increased to reduce the growth of this problem. Do you agree or disagree?

The recent trend shows obesity becomes a global concern. It has been argued that imposing higher tax on junk food may mitigate the severity of this problem. I agree with this proposal as this step will reduce the consumption of processed food and encourage people to choose healthy alternative meals.

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Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents willl be better carers for their kids. Discuss bot views and gave your opinion.

There is debate over where is a better place for children home or childcare centers. If parents leave them at home with their granparents, it will be useful in some cases, however, kindergarten centres may affect children's mental development.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a lot of research indicates that sugar has a negative effect on humans. The public starts to see as the foods which contain high levels of sugar. Some people argue that consumers should spend extra fee to buy the products which include a large amount of sugar. I don’t align with this point. In addition, this article will analyze the viewpoint and discuss the reasons below.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the issue of subjects selected by university students is highly discussed. Some people maintain that students have the right to learn diverse subjects, while others believe only practical subjects which are related to societies’ future development should be chose. I side with the formal one, as every subject have value to different area.

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