IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 17

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Modern technology is now very common in workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work. Do you there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Technology is modernizing the work environment, which has transformed how people work through increased productivity. However, depending too much on technology leads to a lack of interation between people and the loss innovation.

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computers and ai technology are increasingly being used for online education . can ai exhance the learning experiences . is this a positive or negative development?

ai and computers are more and more increasing on online education . the internet have more information and it can help social improve their knowledge , but using more internet make social always depend on it and public will be lazy and stupid. i agree with the negative development and my reason is in the following essay.

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computé and A.I.technologyảe increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enchance the learning experience? Is this a positive or nagative development?

In recent years, computers and AI technology have become popular for online discipline . Other people ask a lot of questions about whether can AI enhance the learning experience . The writer will talk about that and positive or negative development . Can be understood that computers or AI increasingly in social will be more beneficial to children who are studying at other schools like to make them feel interested and help them grow their knowledge with a lot of it on the internet furthermore , will help more students connected to other by the internet , make their study grow rapidly. For example , in Vietnamese country are a lot of ways to study at home on the internet or online literacy and that is very improved. With more benefits will have disadvantages , if using the internet will have some bad physical information. Moreover , online study or studying on the internet will make some of them become bad people in society when they get bad information on the internet . For example ,...

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computer and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artifical intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, AI has been sharply important in education. In this essay, I want to show how students learn from technology and how it brings positive or negative ones.

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Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages?

On the way pursuing our education, there are numerous learning methods that can help you to deal with a large number of information. Rote learning is a memorising skill using frequent repetion in appropriate time which suitable for many learners. While acknowledging that there drawbacks, this essay will argue that rote learning benefits outweigh its disadvantages.

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Nowadays , distance- learning programs have gained in popularity , but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, online classes are flavored by lots of people, however, some said studying online has poor quality than having courses in college or university face-to-face. To a large extent, I agree this opinion with three reasons.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing execise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive or a new negative development?

A personal fitness trainers is popular carear and individuals like to hiring them to train rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. For the reasons.

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As social media continue to develop, more and more youngsters have unsupervised access to all the contents available over the internet in order to meet and chat with friends and even strangers, which can lead to some potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

The modern technology has so many advance features to meet up the new friends by online platform. Teenagers are using a lot of internet websites to interact with the random people which lead them some hard situations. This essay will discuss some solution about how we can deal with this problem in upcoming paragraphs such as by ban of the websites and by introduce hard punishment.

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The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

Frustrations and complaints are significantly vented apply worldwide by social media platforms which are people posted. This might affect around the world that make some people face with issues while some individuals appreciate the opportunities.

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With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view

AS IT IS ENUNCIATED,UNIVERSITIES SHOULD CHANGE THEIR TEXTBOOKS MATERIALS TO VARIETY OF DIGITAL EQUIMENTS BECAUSE OF THE DIGITAL MEADIA IMPROVMENT AND THAT PLAYS A PIVOTAL ROLE IN MODERN SOCIETY.ON DRAWING ON A DIALECTIC PERPECTIVE AND A QUALITATIVE META SYNTHETIC METHODOLOGY,I WOULD PEN HOW POSITIVE RESPONSE AND NEGATIVE CRITICISM INFLUENCE ON THUSING DIGITAL MATERIAL IN THE LIBRARY.ALBEIT THERE IS A DICHITOMY OF VIEWS ON THIS CONCERN I HARBOUR THE BELIEF THAT THIS APPRHENSION HAS PROS AND CONS.BUT THIS SHOULD BEG FOR SOME SORT OF PROFOUND JUSTIFICATIONS AND CONSPICUOUS EXEMPLIFICATIONS.I PROVIDE AN INTERESTING CHARACTERIZATION AND EXEMPLIFY THE ESSENCIAL ELEMENTS TO JUSTIFY MY CLAIM FROM MY PERSPECTIVE.

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The most vital skill in everyone's life is time management. Everyone has the same amount of time; some succeed through effective time management, while others struggle without it.' Discuss the significance of time management and what we should do to use our time effectively.

Everyone has twenty-four hours of time, and if these twenty-four hours are managed in a proper way, they will be able to do all the work successfully and progress towards their own development.In order to manage time, a plan should be prepared for it.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health. Others believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens are healthy.

Some people think that you should take care about your health. Others believe that Government should make it. People should be responsible for their health.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

With the advancement of modern technology and globalization, In this contemporary era, Many children are unruled and are liberal on online networks, even claiming that misusing social media. This essay outlines the reasons and solutions to mitigate this problem.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Smartphones has become a popular toy for our young generation meanwhile, it has taken most of our children's time which creates a lot of concern. While some state that it has positive effect, others argue that it has more shortfalls. In this essay, I will discuss why youth spend hours on mobile gadgets, at the same time, specifying why I believe they have drawbacks on the development of young adults.

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Many new technologies machines and equidment appear everywhere, and almost everyones uses them. Advantage and disadvantage

As society develops, high technology also develops. Many new technologies machines and equidment appear everywhere, and almost everyones uses them. There is no age limit, everybody uses it, and the increading use of new technologies by children also affects their free time.

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Some believe that showing people happy pictures (pictures in which outstanding achievements are made in helping the poor) is more effective in encouraging them to take action to solve poverty than sad pictures ( that show how hard life can be for the poor). Do you agree or disagree? Why?

In this period of modernity, many people suggest that showing positive pictures of helped poor people including successive outcome can stimulate people’s attempting to volunteer easier than showing negative visual documents. In this society, Exposing contents of reality became a part of promoting donation or other volunteer activities. In my opinion, I disagree with this notion because I see ‘empathy’ as a strong trigger for people to help others.

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The Education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. some believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most countries believe that the younger generation must be given the first chance to study and educate themselves. Whereas, others believe that educating the older generation and teaching them is of significant importance. I believe that most countries are doing the right thing.

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When it comes to travelling, do you think that the internet can replace an actual visit to a foreign destination? Why?

With the advancement of technology, internet travelling becomes a feasible way for us to explore the world. We can reach our designed destination through our tablets in a blink second of time.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self employment?

In contemporary society, people prefer to work on their own rather than working amongst a group of people. This writing presents why each individual chose to be self-employed while depicting the downfall of such choice.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I am doimg a project on the most popular jobs with young people in Zetland. I have foun a table with the results of some opinion polls. Now I am going to analyse the data in the table, express my point of view and draw a conclusion.

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