IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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these days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, youths do not prefer to do outdoors activities such as hiking, climbing mountains, and enjoying the beautiful nature. This is a very vital problem that requires a range of pratical ideas to encourge them to do more of these activities. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and suggest some solutions and innovative ideas to let them spending much time in outdoor activities rather than other activities.

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Some say that music, art and drama areas important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there are many opinions that comes from negative and positive aspects that subjects like music, art and drama should be tought in schools or not. Some believe that these are not useful whlie others have different ideas. In my point of view I agree that they should be in schools as lessons and in this essay I will assert my ideas about my view.

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some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, students choose to study in the local area, while in other countries the situation is the different. Living far from home may influence their academic performance negatively, I believe journey can help them a lot

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the ultimate goal of science should be to enhance human lives. I completely agree with this assertion because of medical, technological and environmental benefits.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is what is aim of learning foreign language. It is undeniable that every single person should to know two or three languages and it is become an essential part of our life. However there is no absolute agreement on whether people should learn language only for travelling and getting a job abroad or other reasons.

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In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is difference between young people opinions and older people mind.It is undeniable that problems to difficult communicate with different age group an essential part of our life.We must need to understand a reasons of this problem and step by step come to a decisions.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children’s development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

Although some people believe that art classes are important for children's development others don't.In opinion art classes are as important for child development as other subjects

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The spread of a ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the last few years, the number of people who learning the English language has increased significantly. Because the English language is very common in the world. Although there are some people who disagree with spreading the English language all over the world. However, some people prefer it more than those who do not. Partly, I agree with this opinion because there are oppositions. In this essay, I will explain both sides and draw my own opinion.

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Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era, working from home has become popular after the pandemic (COVID-19) among workers. Some believe that this is beneficial for employers and others have the opinion that employees have more advantages. I will discuss both views and give my opinion at the end.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decresing. Do you think this is a positive/negative development?

This topic describes many countries that have made some mistakes in dropping the population in the countryside so many people migrate to urban .in this essay, I try to give my opinion and I will spare my ideas.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

It is widely argued that most people think experimentation on animals is necessary, but other people feel that experimentation on animals is unjustified and illegal. I believe that people need continued experimentation on animals, and there are alternatives to replace experimentation on animals.

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Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligance enhance the learing experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

nowadays, many people are increasingly using A.I technology and computers for online learning, thus leading to enhance the experience of online education. This writer believes that this is a positive development due to creativity improved for student and convenience.

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Computers and A.I. tehnology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative dvelopment?

In this today digital's era, more and more robots and man-made tools are being applied to studying on network. There will be enhancement of various styles in studying, although, this is a negative development because of distraction and health problems.

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A number of people are moving from rural area to city’s. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, Urbanization has become spread all around the world. As far as I’m concerned, this phenomenon has several drawbacks which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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The spread of a ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, the English language has developed in more countries because it gives opportunities and helps people's lives. However, some people think, it may affect other languages in English and I am going to give my opinion in this essay.

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Some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids.

There are two opinions, some people think that centers provide for children is better than family members. Other believe on the contrary. To be honest, my opinion, that professional workers for baby are the most competent then members’ extended family. Such employees trained to work with kids.

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While some people like to live at home, other people think that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss both views.

Everyone has a choice of accommodation to live in, depending on different reasons. Although some individuals choose to stay in a house, other people believe that staying in an apartment has many benefits. In my own view, I think living in a apartment has a lot of merits.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment it necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach behaviour children?

Over the last few years, teachers and parents have avoided wrong punishment whereas, if parents or teachers have been punishing the bad sort of punishment, children have scared adults. Therefore, right punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference between right and wrong.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with co-workers while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some folks enjoy to spend their free time with co-workers, other group of people chose to keep their pravite activites and work life separeted.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that the goverments should be focusing on looking for life and habitations on other planest, while other countered that that is a waste of tax payer money when it could be funded to solve problem we already have on Earth.

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