IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. ‘Young people need to keep up-to-date with the latest fashion in clothes.’ Do you agree?

The clothing industry has improved by leaps by bounds in the past few years. Especially in youth fashion has become an important part of their life. Nowadays, youth find their confidence in the style they wear and are more comfortable with. It gives them their own personality and helps them stay up-to-date in this fast-changing world.

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Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural word?

According to recent research, the detrimental effect on the eco-system brought about by human activities. The environment refers to the surroundings you are in, that’s why the exploitation of nature leads to limited resources. In this essay, I will outline my perspectives and recommendations on this matter.

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Some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that the most serious environmental issue is global warming. However, I firmly believe that air pollution is the most pressing environmental problem as people are having difficulty breathing these days.

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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people argue that music is relevant when it comes to relaxation. Athough there are many genres of music around the world, I firmly believe that music can help calm people's mind and spirit. This essay will discuss why I agree with the given statement above.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of waste produced?

The general issue of increasing production of rubbish or overall volume of waste disposal is a concerning one from an environmental and moral perspective, there can be several reasons to why this trend is increasing but the general issue seems to be directly caused by the rapid growth of population globally which means a rise in waste disposal volume overall.

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Some people believe that the only purposes of film is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Countless people have relished films regardless of their age and gender, and films could be a part of their lives so far. There are two different concepts for the purpose of films. One is to entertain, and the other is to have educational value, which I endorsed for several reasons.

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It is better for young people to get advice from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays a number of people are becoming concerned about some individuals claiming that workers should wear uniforms. There are two diametrically opposed opinions on the matter. Some people assert that nowadays they work in large enterprises. Workers are given a special form by the workshop, making it easier for people nowadays they work in large enterprises. Workers are given a special form by the workshop, making it easier for people to work.

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Taxing Industries, corporates and individuals based on their environmental footprint is the only way to save the environment. Do you agree with the statement? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, we cannot imagine our existence without traveling. It is worth saying that some officiels diclare that more investments should be done in the railway system rather than in improving autoroads, whereas the others think the other way around. In this assay both, pluses and minuses concerning the issue will be represented.

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Nowadays in many areas of the world majority of tutors do not want to teach secondary faculty recruitment. One of the main causes can be the low productivity of beginner and mental difficulties with offspring which appear in the teaching process. This problem can be tackled by adding contemporary kind of technologies to the teaching system and also by reducing the total amount of mentally poor students.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Transactions are trackable convenient if no cash available

With the enhancement of technology, physical money is being replaced by electonic or soft cash. It helps an individual to pay with the help of mobile phone application with a single tap. In my opinion it has numerous advantages, which will be discussed in forthcoming paraghraphs.

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Some people belive that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some people are giving different kinds of gifts to their friends or family members because they show they.However other people think that there are many better ways to show we care .I will discuss both sides in this essay.

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Many young people today spend a lot of time playing electronic games. In this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays a fiction of young generation are playing different types of electronic games also they are spending many time to it.Now I belive that it has positive and negative sides and I explain both sides.

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Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a well-established fact that some museums charge for admissions while others are free for people. However, there are both pros and cons for this practice.

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People who live in a large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problem be tackled?

These days, due to existence of welfare services in huge cities that leads to shoot up population and quantity of vehicles as well as expenses which this can make bunch of problems, means that the more living environment bigger the more having issues. Individuals that live in a enormous cities have dealing with a great deal of problems in their usual life. This essay will examine at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.

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these days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, youths do not prefer to do outdoors activities such as hiking, climbing mountains, and enjoying the beautiful nature. This is a very vital problem that requires a range of pratical ideas to encourge them to do more of these activities. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and suggest some solutions and innovative ideas to let them spending much time in outdoor activities rather than other activities.

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Some say that music, art and drama areas important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there are many opinions that comes from negative and positive aspects that subjects like music, art and drama should be tought in schools or not. Some believe that these are not useful whlie others have different ideas. In my point of view I agree that they should be in schools as lessons and in this essay I will assert my ideas about my view.

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some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, students choose to study in the local area, while in other countries the situation is the different. Living far from home may influence their academic performance negatively, I believe journey can help them a lot

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the ultimate goal of science should be to enhance human lives. I completely agree with this assertion because of medical, technological and environmental benefits.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is what is aim of learning foreign language. It is undeniable that every single person should to know two or three languages and it is become an essential part of our life. However there is no absolute agreement on whether people should learn language only for travelling and getting a job abroad or other reasons.

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In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is difference between young people opinions and older people mind.It is undeniable that problems to difficult communicate with different age group an essential part of our life.We must need to understand a reasons of this problem and step by step come to a decisions.

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