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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is it a positive or negative development?

teaching online is obtaining more and more advanced technology. This writer believes that artificial intelligence could improve study process significantly by using the internet and this advantage is certainly a positive upgrade due to its reliability.

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Teenagers face a lot of difficulties at home and at school. What are the causes for this? How Can parents provide solutions?

Undoubtedly, not only adults, teenagers face a variety of pressure and obstcles form daily lives. Normally, the reson can be divided into two parts. One is the relationship with classmates and family, another is the competition at school and the expectation from parents. These issues will be elaborated on as follows.

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More and more students choose to move to other countries to study their higher education. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

In this era of globalization, youngsters tend to move to other nation to pursue their higher education. This essay will uncover why the benefits of studying abroad outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Now in our days,everyone meets bad situation such as an unlikely job or problems with money, and there are some people believe that in this situation the best thing we can do is to accept the situation, while other people argues that the best choice is to try harder and improve your life. I personally believe that everyone should try to make their lifes better and never stop until achieve their goals. In this essay, I will discuss both these views.

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global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. what are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Over the last few years, global warming has become one of the major problems that people should pay attention. While can cause many problems, one of them is the increase of cars, they affect the clouds in the sky and cause global warming and the second reason is the phenomenon of hot and humid air that comes to the siberian islands to settle in Russia are claimed to be the main reason behind this issue there are some effective solutions that can be applied in this essay, I will discuss major reason and effective solutions of this problem.

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Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Really,there are positive and negative opinion about impact of technology on their lives.some people think smart life has positive effect on their habitance because they can do soeasy their work and daily routines . I can not live with out technology so i prefer , it use for my comfort and access easy everything’s for myself.

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Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healtheare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more money is appropriated for caring for animals and their wildlife habitat. However, in many counties, some people have essential issues of life. Because they do not have a suitable financial circumstance. Many of them require a home and earn more money. In this essay, I will describe my opinion in which the government should be more considerate about the quality of people's lives.

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Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, technology is now increasingly applied in teaching online. However, this phenomenon have bad effects on students' experience which is misunderstanding knowledge from these application. Moreover, this seems to be a negativ advancement among learners that it can lead them to a lazy studying style.

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Nowadays the way people interact the way people interact with each other has changed becasue of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationships people have? Has this become a positive or a negative development?

In the age of technology many facilities appear and one of them is virtual communication. Overally visiting each other affected a lot by technology in both problematic and well-mannered ways. This phenomena made differences in our routin lifes. In this essay I will discuss my view point about both sides also I assert the ways that technology effects on our relations.

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

It has become more and more ubiquitous/pervasive seeking worlds news online instead of delving news from newspapers and news shows on TV. This evolution gives us some benefits but also some drawbacks. This essay will explore the underlying causes behind and elucidate with examples.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family, we just watch television. To what extent fo you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I think many people around the world spend their time in front of the TV and watching TV is one of the most common breaks, also many people believe that it can destroy family life and society relationships although I agree with them, I believe that the technological devices are useful for building relationships by new ways. At first, we have lovely times when we watch series and movies with our families and that’s why you invite relatives to enjoy free time together during the weekends, and television has been the easiest choice for them. Therefore, this technological device makes people happier than before.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can learn.

Nowadays, although some people are earning uncountable money from their business, plenty of indviduals criticize the situation due to its harm in countries, others advocate that a few people should remain earning good money in their job. This essay will discuss both these point of views and argue in favour of the letter.

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The plans below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given schemes compare the ground floor of a library in 2001 and 8 years later, in 2009.

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12.The range and quality of foods have been improved with the development of technology and scientific advance. Some people think it is a good development while others consider it harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Food processing technology has improved the variety of foods available and their quality. A portion of society argues that it is a beneficial advancement while others contend that it has negative effects. Both of the viewpoints have their own rationale but I reckon that overall it has improved the eatables.

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Bạn đã gửisome people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.How might having a lot of money make people happy?What other things in life can make people happy?

It has been frequently argued that in the current period, few people protest that when mental happy, people will happy. However, many individuals argue that, money can make human cheerful. I will shed light on my stance in the following essay.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.

In recent times, the production of consumer goods has been rapidly increasing, leading to the harmful effects on the environment.This essay agrees that art and culture is a unique identity of the nation and government must allocate some funds to preserve them.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

It cannot be denied that in this modern age of internet, newspapers are considered as outdated trend by the majority of population. I am partially agree with this phenomenon because old people are still prefer to read newspapers instead of reading the news on the screen.

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Many city centers these days have traffic flow problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build fast ring roads on the outskirts of a city, taking traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that problem with traffic jams in the city centers should be solved by developing fast ring roads industry in the suburbs. This essay totally disagrees with this statement. Personally, I believe that ring roads are not only the main sourse of continuous noise and air pollution, in addition, it is a serious problem for the lifestyle of pedestrians and cyclists of that area.

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile deliquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opioion?

Human being had been evolution a milion of years. At stone age, men with more strength than women have responrity to do hunting a dangerous duty to find a food for their family. Therefor, women were left at a cave to take care their children. To survive this behavior continious foward to new generation. However, the intellectual process of human being and the deveolpment of technology, a duty or carrier not depend on gender anymore. In fact, the problems of young people such as juvenile deliquency not only cause by their mother not care of them, but it can cause by many factors.

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The plans below show the layout of the university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given plans illustrate a university’s sports complex current layout and proposal for its further improvement. Overall, the university sport center is expected to be bigger, with numerous additional facilities.

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