IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 150

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In today's world, fast meal is becoming widely common in many land. While this can help with producing reasonably-priced fare in some state, the impact it had on the environment and healthcare system is undeniable and outweighs the advantages.

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In many countries, people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses, and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies? Do you consider it good or bad?

It is a growing debate that celebrities and other famous people should be earning lesser comparing to other professional like doctors, nurses and teachers. In my opinion, it is a pressing issue that requires careful consideration, as peoplle from entertainment and sports feilds getting higher pay, while demanding professions that are essential for community is recieving moderate pay.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In many countries, the most popular leisure activity is shopping, especially for young adults because of the advancement in technology. However, this may result negatively in financial management.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree? (opinion question)

Numberous countries are facing various conflicts and criminal activities, to reduce this issue many people are arguing that prisonment will provide effective protection to tackle this issue while others reject this notion and believes that education is the key component to preventing complications. This essay will further elaborate on both perspectives and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Your community centre is surveying your opinion on a new event happening every Saturday in the park near your home. There are two events being considered. One suggestion is a vegetable and fruit market. The other suggestion is a second-hand furniture and appliance market. explain Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons why you would like to have a vegetable and fruit market every Saturday in the park rather than a second-hand furniture and appliance market every Saturday in the park.

I strongly prefer having a vegetable and fruit market every Saturday in the park rather than a second-hand furniture and appliance market.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both viwes and give your opinions.

Recent decades have witnessed tremendous modernization in all around the world .Still some people have deep faith in their root culture of the origin while dictators thought that human beings have no interest left in traditions or religion . I personally, reckon that people should precive traditional values of their country from where they belong .

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people are feeling it is important for both mother and father to find a job for living because it's going to help their kids financially. However there are another point of view that said those kids will suffer from absence of their parents. In the coming essay I am going to explore my reasons of why I am agree for working parents.

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According to a recent study, the more time people used the internet the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seing the internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

A recent study shows spending most of your time online may lead to having less time in person as a result of misusage of internet. In my opinion, many people have been affected from this changed habit due to raise of isolation. However, there exists several positive sides as well.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Recent decades have witnessed tremendous economic development. Due to this growth , migration is introduced in every society . People move from one place to other for superior opportunities. There are many pivotal causes behind this which will be discussed in this essay briefly .

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In many countries today,crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

At present in several nations,crime stories and TV stories are becoming famous day by day.I think these kinds of books and shows are trending because people are keen interest in them.In my opinion these things spread negativity in our society and illegal act are increasing.I will discuss both questions and will clear my point of view in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some believe that history has little to teach us about today while others think that the study of the past helps us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Uniquestionably, every coin has two side and so are the people. Society's people are divided into two groups and therefore, history has became a topice of debate among people. This essay will compare and contrat both of the opinion along with my opinion which is in the favour of formal/latter will be discussed in a sensible conclusion.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work

It has been universally accepted that changing of work is escalating at an alarming rate and people should not depent on the similar job and situation of work for life. This change is bringing a state of depression among the masses and in economy too. There are plethora of reasson of the same and its possible solutions can be suggested too which are discussed as follows.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that in the regions the government eliminate a wide of the crimes happened the by applying strength restrictions.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their workn.To what extent do you agree?

Artists play crucial role in society for enriching culture, fostering creativity and preserving heritage however due to unstable income they face abundant financial struggle therefore to support artists, governments should grant some funding them to continue their work.I totally agree with this statement as conserving heritage and economic prosperity are two central benefits emerged by artistic skill.

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University students should pay in full for their own education instead of the society funding their studies. The reason is that individuals tend to benefit after graduation more than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

While the society should fund students' education in college, students ought to pay education by themselves. The reason is that the folk don't get the benefit larger than the individuals who have graduated. I completely disagree about this notion as not all students have similar wealth to fund their school. Moreover, the regulation of education's funding should be fair and transparant which society could also monitor it.

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Some people enjoy change and look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to remain the same and do not like any changes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Certain individuals enbrace life and its obsiticles and have a positive outlook on any potential situation that might occure. Other people do not enjoy the unknown and try and keep their lives in routine to prevent any unseen changes that may accure. In my opinion, change is inevidible and by embracing it will make life easier.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The prison has been playing a significant role in a thief's punishment. Some people argue that the best method to decline crimes is the longer prison, others Think there are a variety of approaches to decrease crime. I totally disagree with this statement. in this essay, I am going to discuss both of views and draw my own conclusions.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs are not suitable for women. What is your opinion ?

While some people believe that both genders are equal and women are able to do any job, others hold a view that they are not comparable and so there might some inconvenience for women in certain job fields. I firmly agree with the statement that women should avoid from certain work areas that might require more responsibility than they can cope with. Since there are not only physical difficulties but also mental challenges in particular work spaces, i believe that women should take these into their considerations.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, people tend to mention about feminism When women asking for the same portion equality in any aspects of social life. However, there is something basic different that cannot be changed between men and women which is biological strength. In this essay I Will discuss about this issue.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. whhy might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Working has always been an essential part for every adults' life. In recent times, many people started to consider working by themselves instead of joining an enterprise, hoping to have more flexibility and leisure time. Despite this, there are several points to be noted by all employees before deciding to start their own business.

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