IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 453

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, young generation has become a bread issue to the general public. Some people believe that kids should be relax after school days. However, it seem to me that children ought to raise awareness about doing household chorces. The following essay will clarify on this view.

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Some people believe that sports are an essential part of school life for children while you should give reasons for your answers and include. ideas and examples

Many people trust that sport very essential or good part of school life for pupil. This issue is very simple to discuss because a lot of people have doing some sports due to, sport very curcial for human specifically Children. I will give any reason in the following esay.

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Some people think that a srnsr if competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children woh are taught to co-operate rather than competemore useful adults. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion.

It is said by some, children should be studied atmosphere competition. However, others consider that pupils who learn to collaborate although, competition is more useful for juviniles. In my opinion, both of them have benefits. Nonetheless, co-operate teaching style is better.

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Some people think that a sense or competetion in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Over the last few years, the question is whether a sense or competetion in children should be encouraged or children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults has become one of the most controversial ones in many parts of the world. While some people strongly support the opinion that the sense or competetion in children should be encouraged, there are other people who think that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. In this essay I will discuss both points of view and try to draw some conclusions.

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There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasins and any relevant examples to support your answer.

In recent years, living in big cities has been of great concern to the public. There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science at university. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

Nowadays, less popularity of science materials to students has been one of the major issues in many parts of the world. Some experts are being concerned this issue, because of the development of nation. This essay will discuss this phenomenon and suggest to counter its negative effects.

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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are diffrent from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some countries and governments nowadays, the junk food became routine and habits in our life of people in particular children are different from those of improve generations. To begin, as we can observe that in modern days, almost countries suffer of this issue. I would discuss before reaching my opinion.

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An increasing number of people change their careers and places of residence several times in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that more and more poeple constantly change living place and careers in the rapidly evolving world. I consider this development a positive trend not only for individuals but also for whole society.

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Deforestation is one of the major issues which need to be tackled. Explore the causes and consequences of deforestation. What strategies, according to you, can be used to promote sustainable forestry and reforestation?

It is universally acknowledged that forest plays a key role in not only humans’ lives but also animals’. Thus, preserving it is the onus of every individual. This essay will debate the causes of deforestation and its result along with proposing some practical solutions.

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Small business should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what level do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, female and men are recruited in small businesses. Some say that small businesses should not

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

It is believed by many people that the introduction of modern technology has a positive impact on connecting people together. While, others believe that the modern technology has a negative effect as it seprates people from each other. In my opinion, i think face to face connection is more prefarable as you can determine people face expressions.

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Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extend do you agree or disagree

According to the view of public figure lessons should be more fashionable. For example, during lesson digital materials such as games, films should be used instead of books. And in this essay it will be given my personal opinion with some examples.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Directors have high status in the company. Bosses of big organizations get high salaries for their employees. The majority of people believe it is necessary, but other people think that is unfair. I believe that directors receive a well-deserved income.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is society has to care for more and more elderly people.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is society has to care for more and more elderly people. In my opinion I think that society will be able to cope with the increase of elderly people. One of the main aspects is that society need to pay attention to old people. To tackle this problem people should cooperate together. This maybe the easiest and so the best way to help elderly people.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Government investment in both the public transport systems as well as minimizing the cost of public transport tickets will contribute a lot to minimizing transport pollution. This essay agrees with this statement. Firstly it will discuss how transport pollution is minimized by these changes. Followed by that it will discuss how cost of living crisis can be diminished with the help of this system.

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Some people believe that if a police force carrying guns, it would cause a higher level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tody, a lot of ploice are allowed to work with guns in many countries,however some citizens think that will increase the social violence. Personally, I totally disagree this version.

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The mass media, such as TV, radio and newspapers, have an influence on people, particularly on younger generations. It plays a pivotal role in shaping the opinions of people, especially teenagers and young people. To what extent do you agree with this? Please give examples.

In nowadays social medias and all the influencer that more powerful for teenager lifestyle wherether all the young generations which apying attention to scolling on platforms that inittialy spending time more than in the class. On the otherhand the mass medias were individually benefitcial for human who are need to improve their skill and ability whereas people to perform respecting each other on the social media platform. I do agreed with the topic within crucial reason why that impact to younger genarational lifestyle.

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Fast food is becoming one part of people's daily life everywhere and this has had negative effects on our lifestyles and diet.Do you agree with this statement?

Certain individuals believe that junk meals have caused deteriorating effects on lifestyle and diet of people in the world. I overwhelmingly agree with it however it is not completely negative at all. It has a few benefits also. In this essay, the reasons behind the drawbacks will be discussed but with some positive outcomes too.

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Today, more and more people want thing instantly (eg: goods, service, news) why is this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many crowd would like to act everything immediately such as education, politic, economy. It comes from the demand of saving time as well as effort in everything. As I see it, it is the positive development about the high speed of dealing all of thing.

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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the advancement of technology reduces the number of felonies, while others think it might even be associated with criminal acts. In my opinion, technology had a negative effect on the crime rate that helped in the improvement of world security.

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