IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 453

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The idea that, children have to take part in art classes, because some particular activities such as painting and drawing are necessary to their progression as well. The writer partly agrees with the statement and believes that authorities school encourage students’ imagination, while, there are more ways to do it rather than forcing them learning art in high schools.

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Fast food is becoming part of life everywhere, negatively affecting our lifestyles and diets. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Eating junk food everyday is becoming a pressing issue arounf the world, but the significant impacts on their diets and lifestyles are unsettling globally. The author of this essay agrees as the fast foos brings terrble health and lack of eating experiences.

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art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other susbjects, so it should be complusory in high schools. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

Gifted class in schools is becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. However, there remains certain discrepancy as to whether the total impacts of these art classes have been advantageous and disavantangeous to the sustainable growth of civilized society. Wherears many put forward opposite proposition, i hold to the belief that the imperfectness of these classes is far outweighed by its practicual benefits.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent you do agree or disagree?

The big amounts of people think that should bring painting and drawing in high school because of the important development. This writer also agree with this opinion.

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Some unversities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today's modern age, online classes are used as a new way of studying instead of conventional ways in higher education. The spread of technological approach leads to opposite proposition in current community as to whether the innovations of education bring its convenience as a benefit to human life, even the detrimental aspects affecting to the quintessential people in a specific country directly. This writer argues that Internet-based courses constitute an impediment to the creativity and the concentration on lessons.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Gifted classes are becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. However, there remains certain discrepancy as to whether these courses should compulsory for children around the world. Whereas many put forward the approval proposition, I hold to the belief that teenagers should choose to learn based on the passion and object to the obligatory.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people always take science subjects to become serious in high school whereas some individuals believe that many art classes, such as painting and drawing, make a important role in the development for other subjects and must have had in high school. The writer of this essay agree with this statement and will talk some benefits when you study and practice this subject.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as improtant to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art courses consist of painting and drawing, are as vital to a kid’s development as other projects, so it thought to be permitted in high institutions. I totally agree with this statement because of talented art.

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Art classes such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Art classroom ,such as drawing and painting, are play an important role to a child's development as other lesson, so it should be vital in tertiary schools. This writer believe that it's necessary to student in high schools.

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ART CLASSES, SUCH AS PAINTING AND DRAWING, AE AS IMPORTANT TO A CHILD'S DEVELOPMENT AS OTHER SUBJECTS, SO IT SHOULD BE COMPULSORY IN HIGH SCHOOLS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE ?

SOME OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT ART COURSES SHOULD BE TAUGHT IN SCHOOLS AND THESE COURSES SHOULD CONTAIN A WIDE RANGE OF MATERIALS, WHILE PEOPLE THINK THAT IT SHOULD BE COMPULSORY IN HIGH SCHOOLS. PERSONALLY, I AGREE THIS POINT OF VIEW AND WITH HIGHLIGHT THE REASONS WHY IN THE FOLLOWING ESSAY.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How to educate students is a difficult issue worldwide. It is the opinion of this writer that it is better to teach students based on academic ability rather than focusing on art than other subjects because of pace of learning and behavioral issues.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Around the world, some group of people condemn that utilizing animals in experiments is not good, and it should be restricted. On the other hand, another group of people agree with that using animals in experiments is essential for new scientific research. In my opinion, in this modern world, we manage to find new alternatives such as through using IT technologies.

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If a product is good or it meets people's needs, people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider that advertising of a product is not vital if it meets the customer's needs. I completely disagree with this idea because right promotion can increse income of the company and provides more chances of improving the product.

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Music play an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While it is widely claim that music plays crucial role in society, others argue that it just a simple form of personal entertainment. Both point of views and reasons why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The advancement of time and technology certainly requires students to always develop themselves, especially the university students. When students enter a university, of course they choose one major with one compulsory subject and materials related to their discipline. Some students consider they must focus on their main subject in order to get a maximum result while getting a qualification for their field. However, other students may have confidence that one of the ways to be able compete with other job candidates is by learning topics in addition to their gist material. I want to discuss both sides of the argument.

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some people belive public health is governement duties but some people believe that sign everyone to keep own health. Please discuss both of views

Keeping healthcare is very important for everyone because of basic and necessary to become liable to everyone. However, the government should give good services for public health so can fulfil health services needs.

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some people belive that public health that government duties but some people believe that is own health for everyone. Discuss both of views

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In many countries have severe problems with students behavior. what do you this are the cause of this? what solution can you suggest?

Pupils’ actions lead to numerous issues in different part of the world. This is a serious problem because it affects speed of the development level of the countries. This essay will consider the main causes of students’ tendency, before proposing two possible solutions.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than Secondary school. Do the advantage of this outweight the disadvantages?

In this days foreign language is very important to comminication. AI technology coming for spontane translate but personel translate always better. If children are learn at early its better for they. Personally, I think primary school right time for learn foreign language.

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Big salary is much more important than jab satisfaction. D you agree or disagree?

in these years there is a huge diffrent in salary, A big salary is way more important then the job satisfaction, in this essay im going to view both the advantages and the disadvantages, And I will draw my own opinion.

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