IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 453

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, everyone of us shoulders a massive responsibility towards their health retention. Health is like a crown on our head, because of this, we must prioritize avoiding hazardous ingredients. Obviously, a junk food and soft drinks are the most dangerous sources for these detrimental components. So, have you ever been thinking how can we solve this utmost problem? Reducing the white poison-which means sugar-from our diet is by no means an easy task. So, I completely agree with raising the money of the junk food to seek less sugar.

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Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behaviour such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem?

In this contemporary epoch, the rate of crime is increasing rapidly and due to this sustainable development is facing an extreme danger. This essay will delve into the various reasons for such proliferation along with explaining about the bodies behind this scenario.

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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirment

It is believed that not enough of the rubbish which is taken from people's home are being recycled

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many schools see English as a more important subject than local languages. In this essay, we will discuss why students should learn English more often and reasons to do it reversely.

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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Literature is a great source for intellect, life lessons and culture. Exceptional literary work has been produced across the globe. Some writers stirred the cauldron of poetic phrases and others told immaculate stories. While teaching your own country’s literature can provide vital cultural insights and create a sense of national pride in children. However, it is unfair to completely ignore writers from other parts of the world. Rather than placing importance on one particular kind work, we should create a balance between local and global literary insights.

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Parents can punish their children when they do something wrong, agree or not?

It's some argued that parents should punish their if they're worng. In my view, that is actually wrong. Parent should teach and coummite to their children. Punish should not be the only way to the children.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many people believe that animal experimentation should be banned because it is cruel. On the other hand, its importance in scientific field is emmence. In this essay we will discuss that this practice is justified, despite its cruelty and whether there are any other alternatives.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Around the world, an increasing number of people are opting to purchase imported groceries instead of locally produced food. This is happening due to perceived quality, however action could be taken to promote the consumption of local produce by government policies.

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Some ome people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Will the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated with it?

It is widely regconized that new languae should be invented to connect people around the world. While this trend has certain merits , ther are still outweighed by it's demerits.

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With recent development in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?

Accordingly I could have done something differently, in fact we all could have – ‘in fact’ shows that the two ideas are linked together and support one another.Jack had been sad since his girlfriend broke up with him – ‘since’ is being used here to explain why Jack was sad, so it links the ideas again.

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Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, many people hold the view that student should spend all their money on their studies because of the many benefits of university education. The writer of this essay has another idea for paying attention to social skills and this essay will discuss that.

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Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whilst, many individuals argue that producing a more fulfill community depends on the small disparities in salary between the wealthiest and the most impoverished members. While, the writer advocates that this is not the best way to create a happy society through ensuring similar income due to the amount of work which the rich contribute to the society and the maintenance of high quality life.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, numerous people belive that doing monotone activity is more convinence. At the same time, there are individuals who doing various activity to enjoy their lives. This essay will discuss both view and my own opinion.

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some people say that what individua;s do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether it is possible to protect the environment is a highly subjective discussion point. However, from this writer experience, it is useful to preserve the natural habitat due to advances in technology and the public awareness, despite those who believe that this may not working.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of helth and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Many countries suffer of poor healthe education. This can lead to a huge healthe porblems for the citezens, such as daibetes and obesity. Those people are not aware of how these healthe issues can effect their lifes is a nigiteve way. However, this essay will discuss the major caueses and solutions for it.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one? Do you agree or disagree ?

Some people believe that spending your time working on a large company than a small company offers much more benefits and overall is better than the compensation you get in a small company. Working in a big enterprise and a tiny enterprise each has it's own benefits and losses. However, a few groups believe that working in a big enterprise offers much more in general for workers than those who work in a tiny enterprise.

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Some people believe that environmental problems are too big for individuals ro deal with, while other think that individual should take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion

As in any other plant living in the transitional area between ocean and terrestrial zone, mangrove undergo more dynamic environmental stress as they face stress coming from both zones simultaneously. For this reason, mangrove were compelled to evolve several adaptation mechanism, one of which is producing secondary metabolite compounds like flavonoid, phenol, terpenoid, saponin, and tannin. While the aforementioned compounds function as a way of mangroves to cope with environmental detriment, human are able to make use of them for pharmaceutical purposes.

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The picture below shows the differences in the layout of the conference center in 2010 and 2025.

The given map illustrates the changes which will take place in a conference center from 2010 to 2050.

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Aar lot of old people e suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What do you think are the reasons for this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

This is true that more and more the old stay alone, even they also shortage of physical fitness. This essay will explain some reasons and give some ways to tackle them.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

It is argued that consumerism is highly influeneced by advertisements companies.I strongly believe that the impact of advertising can be seen on people daily choises. As increasing awareness of the disadvantages among soceity members is one of the suggested solutions for this matter.

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