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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Social media is becoming an increasingly large part of people’s lives. What are the effects of the trend? Do you believe this is a positive or negative trend for society?

INTERNET COMMUNTY IS THE MOST USED PLATFORM IN TODAYS WORLD. SOCIAL MEDIA HAS BECOME AN EFFECTIVE WAY OF COMMUNICATING WITH EACH OTHER, AND FINDING NEW AND OLD FRIENDS. ALTHOUGH, THIS HAS ALOT OF BENEFITS IN BEING INTERACTIVE, BUT IT ALSO COMES WITH MANY DRAWBACKS SUCH AS, RUINING THE INNOCENCE OF CHILDREN AND MAKING PEOPLE BELIEVE EVERYTHING THEY SEE OVER THE INTERNET DISPLAYS THE TRUTH. IN THIS ESSAY I WILL EXPLAIN WHY SOCIAL MEDIA CAN AFFECT THE SOCIETY NEGETIVELY.

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In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have a responsibility to both care for and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in the lives of their 14-15 year-old children?

Parenting is one of the important milestones for humans, especially for children from 14 to 15 years old because adolescence is considered a revolutionary period in human life. This is the age of development. , so parents need to pay more attention to their children.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged . Others believe that children who taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that it is necessary to support the sense of competition in young children, and some believe that cooperation, working as a team, should be formed more.

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Space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Outerspace is a mystery place that people weren't explore. Nowadays, it is argue that the exploration of space cost too much and money should be expensed on more significant things. In my point of view, I'm think space exploration is very important and money could be funded to a space research.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think that should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary humans are becoming times which new helpfulness technology for own. In the family, parents when older want more help from children for their health, communication and lifefulness. therefore more parents want to know this situation children must stay on their own or not.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the beginning, in this our modern world in this period of technology revolution there are many alternative treatment ways for many different medical issues. I believe that the advantages could outweigh the disadvantages depend upon the condition itself. My point of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with suitable conclusion.

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some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In today'society, the issue of whether the punishments should be fixed or based on their situation and their personality has sparked a degree of controversy among people. This essay will justify it with argumentation.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, some universities want to add some different subjects to their main course. Others believe it is more important to give all their time to studying for a qualification. I here discuss both views and get my opinion.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding weddings, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views.

In the present society some of them are believed that pay out more money on behalf of the wedding functions, birth day parties are unnecessary money wasting activities. But some of them are believing that these are necessary social activities. I completely agree with the first statement and I am going to elaborate on both perspectives in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries, small shops are closing. Give your reasons about this. Is it positive or negative? Give examples from your knowledge and experience.

People are winding up their local shops in various countries across the world, and there are many reasons behind this move like modernisation, I belive that this not a positive move, rather it has many drawbacks.

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Why teenagers are on the rise doing criminal activities worldwide?what are the causes and possible solutions

I agree with the statements that teenagers are mosty involved in criminal activities. As teenagers are immature,they don't knows whats wrong or whats right moreever,poverty may be another reason for that. And lack of proper guidances,they donot know the conesquences for doing that dangerous activity.

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Some people believe that hard word is more important than talent. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an intense debate about the validity of non_academic education today. However,lots of individuals think that material related to the hand jobs like arts and mechanics should be omitted from the kindergartens schedule as well as kids must focus on formal subjects.so, l believe in the latter view because l think that the next years will depend on non ordinary jobs.

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

IN this modern world, in numerous area fewer people want to become teachers, especially in secondary educations. Along with this essay I am going to discuss the reason this phenomenon and give some solutions to solve this problems before arriving at the sum up.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food nowadays. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

Many people prefer restaurant food than cooking at home however I believe it has more disadvantages than advantages. This essay will first demonstrate eating outside has disadvantages like wasting more money and eating unhealthy food, followed by an analysis of how the primary advantages, namely saves time, is not valid.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Studies will receive more personal benefits about education than social benefits if they pay money for their study in universities. This essay agree on this opinion and will give some reasons about the writer’s point

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university educatio benefits individuals rather than society. to what extent do you agree or disagree

The majority of people believe that students should spend their money on studying due to the advantage of education at academy better than society. This writer totally agrees with this statement and the reasons will be explained below.

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Students should pay pull cost for their own study, because universityeducation benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe that students should pay full cost for their own study because the advantages of university education bing to individuals rather than society. This writer agreed with this agrued, through this essay I will figure out the reasons why I agree with this statement.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society.

It is said that a full cost paying for university courses will bring more student advantages than public one. From my point of view, I agree with this statement because this can enhance student knowledge and their valuable worth.

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Government should spend more money on education or sports and recreation .Do you agree or disagree?

Many people belive that government should allocate a higher presentage of money for education than the extra curricular activities such as sports and recreations.Im totally agree with this argument and in my following easy i will discuss the statement in deeply.

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Environmental problems are increasing in developing countries. what are some possible solutions for this issue

Many developing countries have faced air and water pollution because of industry and construction. Using solar and wild energy and taking some steps to improve air quality through filtrations could be optimal solutions for this issue.

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