IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 453

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers.Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

In recent years, the world has witnessed a growing advocacy for equal rights from different groups of people including feminists. There are quite a number of people who are standing up for women to get equal opportunities at the work places. However, this view is opposed by the die hard traditional men who pessive women as beings that belong at homes taking care of children and doing common hosehold chores. In this essay, I will explain and give reasons why I agree with the old fashioned community who are agaisnt women pessuing careers at an equal rate with men.

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When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Companies around the world know that complaining is a common issue that they get almost every day. There are two types of complaints, complaints by writing and face-to-face. I personally prefer to complain by directly addressing the person in charge directly.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is an undeniable truth that a person should he loyal to one particular thing. Certain mankind thinks that , an individual should try different jobs instead of Staying to the one job all life. However both statements have their own benefits which are explai below in Paragraphs.

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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.

I am writing to express dissapointment of parcticipants with you food.

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GLOBAL WARMING IS INCREASING DAY BY DAY. WHAT EFFECTS DOES THIS PHENOMENON CAUSES ? WHAT ARE THE SOLUTION

There is no denying the fact the main issues threat our lives is global warming.While it is a commonly held belife that global warming has increased after people discoverd oil during the last decade.This essay will discuss this problem and the possible soultions.

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When choosing jobs, salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, job payment is the most significant effect to people' job standard. Vice versa, it is argued that satisfication with job also play an important role in job decision. In my perspective, I partly disagree with the opinion that job should be choose by the salary received, but also should be decided by seeker's happiness.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, which is the better option to learn something in a traditional schoolhouse or at home.

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All students should study a foreign language in school, starting in their earliest grades. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that learning a new language has become prevalent to communicate with other people.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to tru and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Any country entries the new technologies in their life, automatically old life Will disappear. I agree with this attendance because new technologies means new methods and these techniques are totally different from the traditional ways. So , in this article I will discuss these two reasons.

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Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In' today modern life, technology developts so quickly, some scientists believe that in the near future cars will run without to need driver because of control of computers. Although this situation has some positives, in my opinion, the negative are greater.

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Some people believes that parents force their children to get sucess but other believes they need to teach them values of cooperation? Give your opinion with relevant examples?

Some argue that kids are being forced by their mom and dad to succeed, while others think that they should be taught the importance of being cooperative instead. Although imposing the importance of success in children can force them to work hard, I believe that cooperation is more important because it teaches them to work on a team.

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Some feel that students should not have to take standardized tests in school to what extent do you agree ot disagree?

Some people believe that taking standardized tests from school children should not be suggested. I do not agree with this idea and children should be examined by standardized tests. Given standardized tests with clear guide and criteria would be necessary because it helps to right evaluation for teachers and suitable exam preparation for students

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing sof skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Music plays an important role in society, also it one of the form of an entertainment. Some artists explain their ideas or talk about social problems in music. People listen music to take the rest and visit concerts as social activity. In the essay explained how music can play important role in society and also be an entertainment.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals think making differences in their lives are challenging and they prefer to stay in their comfort zone, while others believe that doing change is good opportunity to improve theuir lives. I support the latter idea and this essay will delve into both perspectives with some supporting ideas.

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Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Undeniably, Our planet faces many challenges and environmental issues become critical in today's world. In others word, impact of human activities on the green areas and animal extincs is more than humans imaginary. In according to some, there is no hope to save this planet, while other people think some necessary measures are requirement. I strongly believe that taking actions can be effective although, maybe there is a little hope.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communicate had has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In today's digital age, the internet has become an integral part of children's lives, providing them with unruled access to information and opportunities for social interaction. However, the unsupervised use of the internet among young children can have some facilities .

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computers do not help children learn more effectively. On the contrary the use of computer has a negative effect on children’s physical and mental development. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers are common digital devices nowadays and it is used in helping children to learn. However, some people believe that computers are not helpful for children to learn more and it would cause adverse effects on the physical and mental development of children. I disagree this statement absolutely.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subject. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

Nowadays, society is increasingly developing in every aspect, and the problem in study also grows. Some university students desire to fine-tune knowledge from diverse methods others learn. On the contrary, teenagers consider emphasis on learning essential subjects. I will discuss the rationales behind these two views before showing why I favor the former one.

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The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?

Thanks to the worldwide modernize, many people have been allowed to live in comfortably compare to the past centuries. However, the globe still exist with many urbans made in past centuries that were more relaxing for folks in those days than they are in present. In this essay, I will explore the reasons behind this trend and conclude that there are also other remdical mesures to solve these issues.

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The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities. What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries, the cities are facing many difficulties because numerous individuals prefer moving into the rural areas to living in urban areas. Certainly, there are many reasons why this issues happened and this essay will first look at the root causes before turning to the solutions.

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