IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 453

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

IN this modern world, in numerous area fewer people want to become teachers, especially in secondary educations. Along with this essay I am going to discuss the reason this phenomenon and give some solutions to solve this problems before arriving at the sum up.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food nowadays. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

Many people prefer restaurant food than cooking at home however I believe it has more disadvantages than advantages. This essay will first demonstrate eating outside has disadvantages like wasting more money and eating unhealthy food, followed by an analysis of how the primary advantages, namely saves time, is not valid.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Studies will receive more personal benefits about education than social benefits if they pay money for their study in universities. This essay agree on this opinion and will give some reasons about the writer’s point

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university educatio benefits individuals rather than society. to what extent do you agree or disagree

The majority of people believe that students should spend their money on studying due to the advantage of education at academy better than society. This writer totally agrees with this statement and the reasons will be explained below.

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Students should pay pull cost for their own study, because universityeducation benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe that students should pay full cost for their own study because the advantages of university education bing to individuals rather than society. This writer agreed with this agrued, through this essay I will figure out the reasons why I agree with this statement.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society.

It is said that a full cost paying for university courses will bring more student advantages than public one. From my point of view, I agree with this statement because this can enhance student knowledge and their valuable worth.

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Government should spend more money on education or sports and recreation .Do you agree or disagree?

Many people belive that government should allocate a higher presentage of money for education than the extra curricular activities such as sports and recreations.Im totally agree with this argument and in my following easy i will discuss the statement in deeply.

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Environmental problems are increasing in developing countries. what are some possible solutions for this issue

Many developing countries have faced air and water pollution because of industry and construction. Using solar and wild energy and taking some steps to improve air quality through filtrations could be optimal solutions for this issue.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While plastics from packaging was accused for its negative impact on destroying the environemnt, it is widely debated whether the manufacturers and supermarkets should be responsible for reducing the amount of packaging of goods or not, others argue that the clients themselves need to avoid buying products with overpackaging instead. Both point of views and reason why I agree with the former statement will be further discussed in this essay.

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Write an email to the local government in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Provide information about where you live. Explain the problem and how it affects your life. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

I am writing this email concerning a current problem in my community, located in Marpole, South Vancouver. I have been living here for more than two years, and this is a quiet and peaceful neighbourhood. In this zone, there are several green areas where I can walk, and spend time with my kids and pets becoming a the perfect place to live.

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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, education is really important for children. Some people think that studying foreign has more and more beneficial choices for a student’s home country. I think, both studying abroad and home country are have some good experiments for everyone. In my opinion, I disagree with the above statement because I strongly trust in the students, which are hard working , the boys and the girls will find the way to prove their skill no matter what they have faced.They can pass it with their mindset.

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Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?

The increase number of crimes average in cultured places is higher than pastoral areas undoubtedly, most of people around the world afraid of it. This is mainly because of the lack of local citizens and the huge number of people. There are a several solutions which should be implemented to deal with raising crimes rate in urban areas rather than rural areas.

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The only reason why people work hard is to eanr money and there is no another reason for doing so. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

Nowadays, we are living in the advents of new high-tech, and work hard is vital factor that improve social-life. Some public consider work-a-bee is a bread and butter instead of others reason for doing so. In this essay, I will discuss the rationales behind these two views before showing why I favor the latter statement.

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Give me an approximate score out of 9 for Ielts based on this question: some people believe that professional such as doctors and engineers should work in the country where they did their training. Other believe that they should be free to work in another country they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the beginning, working in another country was always an area of debate and has become more controversial. People are divided into two groups, some of them claiming that country job opportunities should give the priority to its population while others reject this notion. In my opinion, It could has both positives and negatives for many reasons. My point of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with suitable conclusion.

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Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of debate with regards to technological inventions. The general view, when it comes to this subject matter has been a fascinating response, as well as having contradictory opinion. Technological inventions have split public opinion, with various means being examined and dissected. The main purpose of this essay is to discuss both sides of the arguments, and analyse them in details.

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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In temporary days, with the era of high technological development and industrial revolution,.. children watching TV is being concerned on the populations from different parts of the world. The vast majority debated that television programmes have negative impact on youngster while others believe that it is positive for their development. This author agrues that televison will bring bad effect for children development comprehensive. This essay will give both benefit and drawback for this issue.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays because of many reasons such as hard situations in life it is a good idea to permit children to make their own choices. This lead to better decisions making outcome for their future. However others have an opinion that if children make their own choices on everyday subjects it can have negative consequences in different aspect in community such as individual personality. We will consider both sides of the discussion in this essay.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

The main focus of school it should be only in academic and examnination without another skills such as cooking, dressmaking and woodwork because these skill was a role of family. From my point of view I agree in this idea with many reasons,described in the following paraagraph.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

In the modern era, a majority of individuals are taking interest in foreign movies and its popularity is rising day by day. It is also seen that due to this trend locally produced. fibers are not watched by many people. There are several reasons behind this and I think that the Governments should not ve help the local film industries by providing money to them.

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Some people say that increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some would say that the best method for solving the traffic and pollution problem that is being caused by petrol use is to inflate its charge. This essay disagrees with that statement because it can because it harms lower middle-class society who need petrol in their everyday work. Furthermore, there is a better solution to stop the rising traffic and pollution dilemma. For example, the procurement of public transport.

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