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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert or antarctica . What are the benefits and disadvantages of people visiting there .

As far as tourists visiting places that have some hard situations nowadays, some problems and advantages have arisen. I will argue about both sides in this essay.

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is sometimes argued that shopping malls and manufacturers should buy more packaged products but many people think that they have the responsibility to sell products without packaging will improve the environment but packaged products are used for necessary situations.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree¿

There is no denying the fact that most people today are trying to find a satisfactory job for them. While it is a commonly held belief that high salary is much crucial than job satisfaction, this is also an argument opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that high salary is not important than job satisfaction.

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The private car as their course means of transportation is relied by most of the people

The private car as their course means of transportation is relied by most of the people. Nowadays, the amount of cars will increase and it will have a greater impact for environment. This essay will envoy about the problem and solution for people who use a car as private car.

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Global warming is one of the one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing at the alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

There is a growing concern about global warming effects and sea rates drastically going higher in the 21st century. This worrying phenomenon needs to be analysed thoroughly. This essay will discuss the adversities associated with these changes and possible ways to treat the situation.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, society have two opinions about being healthy: exercises and balanced diet. But what is the most effective method for dealing with insalubrious lifestyle? Some people believe that exercises or balanced diet the only one approach of them is the key of being healthy. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and draw a conclusion where I will tell you my own opinion.

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People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisements. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is clear that people's lives fulled by advertisments in moden societies and it can has a negative affect on their lives. I disagree completely and I will explain some negative impacts as wwll as some positive affects on their lives.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people rergad this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important learning and taking responsiblities? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Since a long time ago, children has been offered to help adults do simple tasks with a certain amount of pay. While more and more people start allowing children learn the value of work and money, there can be many misconduct for the kind of labour done under the gray area. This essay will talk about finding the balance between both views and state several opinions in regards to this.

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Nowadays, some consumers are less influenced by advertising than in the past.What are the reasons?Is it a positive or negative development?

In many countries,some people are beginning to less influenced by advertising has become a topic of debate. That is because the internet make any goods’s information be widely known by people right now.I am strongly agree that is a positive development.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

The Entertainment industry indeed plays a crucial role in the world. Nowadays, in many nations crime fiction series are quite popular of the genere. Intrigue is the main cause for these crime drama are renowned. This tendency may affect psychologically on children and teens. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Smoking is major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a frequent topic of discussion. As we know, we have a plenty of massive illness and demise around the world. Due to the fact that, vaping is a predominant reason. Status quo, in the interest of the society wellness. Regimes ought to inhibit cigarettes and tobacco goods. I totally confirm to this opinion.

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Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability while others believe that there are more important factors involved in success in sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

A number of individuals stated that with only physical abilities can bring success because it is widely thought by these people that only skillful players have a good influence on the certain sector of sport whereas those opposed this assumes that there are more major keys that lead to success in these. This author thinks the same with the latter statement due to the fact that not only a certain aspect can make way for success.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

A lot of people choose the films which made in other countries than locally created films.In this essay I will write my opinion with examples.

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The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?

These days, mainly responsibility lie with our young generation of technological developments. But what is the most effective method for dealing with new technologies. Some people believe that the latest technological development require new ideas. I completely agree with this statement, and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples

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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

News are playing a major part in the human life. Because it can only the communication between the man and society. Recently most of the media and newspapers are focusing priority to deliver the worse event to public rather of knowledgeable news. This essay is going to discuss about the factors and causes of this statement.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Today’s the most recent trend is celebrities are making more profit to compare with the politicians. This essay is going to discuss about the specific causes of this statement. In my suggestion, this is an adverse decline for the nation economy.

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Today, the high sales of popular customer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modernization world advertisement is one of the important part of it. This is the platform to connect the product and the consumer. Most of the famous products are selling through the advertisement and people tend to buy that product even that is not required. I strongly support this statement by below mentioned points.

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Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous, Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Space research scientists are thinking there might be a chance for other culture of life style is available on the other planet in the solar system and need to communicate with them and sharing ideas will give a good result. Whereas others are opposing this point because it is possible to give a negative result on the earth. This essay is going to discuss about the both views of the scientists.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statemants?

Todays, we have choices that are more than enough. I will explain why I agree and about finding this matter how change our life.

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In today's generation, many discusses about the good and bad activities that people take part in on a daily basis, even after knowing the potential harmful effects, millions take part in these negative activities. This essay will discuss about the causes and some of the potential solutions using reasons and examples, to express my viewpoint.

In today's generation, many discusses about the good and bad activities that people take part in on a daily basis, even after knowing the potential harmful effects, millions take part in these negative activities. This essay will discuss about the causes and some of the potential solutions using reasons and examples, to express my viewpoint.

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