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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that Olympics games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Many individuals believe that Olympic games are interesting festivals which bring other countries together. Other people think that the Olympics is a waste of resources which is better to spend on another thing. This writer gravitates to the idea that the Olympics are exciting events that bring other nations together.

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The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The statement content that the greatness of individuals can be decided only by precedence rather than contemporaries is a complex and contentious one. While it is fact that the value of any greatness and acheivement mainly depends on the perspective developed later, it is also important to acknowledge that the contemporaries are playing a crucial role in reaching greatness.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In today's digital age, there is a rise in customer who are curious, which lead to spend money on imported food more than local food. However, this can be tackled by increasing tax on imported food, including focuses of traditional food.

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Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students. Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is

A claim contend that educators should take into consideration of students' opinions, which is based on the reason that students can be more involved in classes and result in increase in efficiency is a complex one. In my point of view, while it is important to listen from students and make moderate adjustments of current teaching methods, it is also necessary to ensure students are not taking advantages by only learning the ones they prefer, but also

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Many offices and schools have open-space design these days. DO you think this is a positive or negative development?

Presently, a mjority of building such as offces and schools have open area design instead of indvidual rooms. In my opinion .this is a negative development which can lead to lack of privecy ,potentially harmful siuation,also Easy spread of illnessand it ishard staff to concentrate.

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Many people work long hour, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages and disadvantages:

In these days, due to cost of high standard living people are doing shifts for extra hours as well as some masses doing double shifts to fullfill their expenses or desires and have not enough time for recreational activities. I will expl the both merits and demerits of this statement in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing enviromental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Investing money in tackling environmental and housing problems or preventing illnesses and diseases is a highly debate subject. This writer believes that investing money in environment is more beneficial due to its profit and maintenance.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is positive or negative trend?

In recents day, many people have illness, prefering using the alternative medicines or treatments to conventional medical treatments. This trend can bring a positive result, but it's negative impact of it on health that need to be considered. Therefore i strongly believe that this situation is an negative development.

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Much of the food people eat gets transported from farms thousands of miles away. Some believe it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate food from local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

many food that people have eaten have been supplied from far farms. several individuals believe it could be better for atmosphere and financal if human just ate food from neighbor farmers. this writer firmly contends that society should enjoy cuisine from local area to save money and protect our health from toxic things.

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Some people think eating meat is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that many health issues are from sweet food and drink goods so it is should be more high price to inspire people to have less sweet products. I absolutely disagree in this passage because this approach is not effective in curbing sugar intake and sugar products have a good point for patients and.

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Video games are very popular with children. However, some parents feel that video games can have a negative impact on their children, but others believe that they may have some positive effects. How do you feel about children playing video games? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Video games as a learning tool: Discuss how certain video games can be educational and assist in developing cognitive skills such as problem-solving, strategic thinking and hand-eye coordination.

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having single career is old fashioned now people work in multiple careers to earn more income,and continious learning is the new trend ,to whtextend do you agree?

As with the advancement of technology , people's way of living has been changing rapidly.Now it is considered,that spending your whole life with one career is not a good choice,everyone has to learn different ways of earning as well and professional learning should be extended throughout life.I agree with this notion and the following essay will discuss it in detail.

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Some people believe that it is better to live in a city than in a rural area. Others argue that life in the countryside is preferable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people assume that are many benefits to living in a city than a rural area, however, is lot of community say living in the countryside preferable. I will discuss a couple of things above according to my opinion from environmental, personal, and economic perspectives.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some asserts that it is cumpolsory for individuals with specified jobs to work in the same continent where they performed the training, others suggest that freedom should be given to each person. Through this essay, I will elaborate both sides of opinion regarding this matter.

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At the peresent time , the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outhweigh the disadvantages?

As far as have been told , the percentage of younger adults are more than older people at these days and that`s a really good situation for every country because of the benefits which a young society could have.

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THE NUMBER OF FILMS PRODUCED IN FIVE COUNTRIES IN THREE YEARS

The given bar chart demonstrates information pertaining to numbers in the production of films in five specific nations during the course of three years.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people said that the most essential goal of science is to provide better life for the people. I couldn't agree more with the statement. Inventions based on improving people's live will last longer unlike the others which came from ill intentions.

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In many countries, there is a shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the countryside. Other argue for the regeneration of the cities. What are the advantages and Disadvantages of building new towns in the countryside?

Numerous nations are facing shortage of housing problem in result of rapid growth of pupulation. People are arguing whether building new town in suburban areas or regenerating the existing one would be better for the future. I believe optimizing countryside will give immediate solutions for the urgency although the development may disadvantages local people from the area.

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Some people say that large companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Large companies can play a significant role in shaping local communities, and one aspect that can greatly benefit these communities is the provision of sport and social facilities. This essay will agree with this view and discuss the importance of large companies contributing to the well-being of their local communities by offering such facilities.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

As far as it is said that the matter of air pollution and growing traffic, the best solution is to increase the petrol cost I agree with this opinion, and I will explain some other ways for these issues.

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