IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the beginning, in this our modern world in this period of technology revolution there are many alternative treatment ways for many different medical issues. I believe that the advantages could outweigh the disadvantages depend upon the condition itself. My point of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with suitable conclusion.

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some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In today'society, the issue of whether the punishments should be fixed or based on their situation and their personality has sparked a degree of controversy among people. This essay will justify it with argumentation.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, some universities want to add some different subjects to their main course. Others believe it is more important to give all their time to studying for a qualification. I here discuss both views and get my opinion.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding weddings, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views.

In the present society some of them are believed that pay out more money on behalf of the wedding functions, birth day parties are unnecessary money wasting activities. But some of them are believing that these are necessary social activities. I completely agree with the first statement and I am going to elaborate on both perspectives in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries, small shops are closing. Give your reasons about this. Is it positive or negative? Give examples from your knowledge and experience.

People are winding up their local shops in various countries across the world, and there are many reasons behind this move like modernisation, I belive that this not a positive move, rather it has many drawbacks.

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Why teenagers are on the rise doing criminal activities worldwide?what are the causes and possible solutions

I agree with the statements that teenagers are mosty involved in criminal activities. As teenagers are immature,they don't knows whats wrong or whats right moreever,poverty may be another reason for that. And lack of proper guidances,they donot know the conesquences for doing that dangerous activity.

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Some people believe that hard word is more important than talent. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an intense debate about the validity of non_academic education today. However,lots of individuals think that material related to the hand jobs like arts and mechanics should be omitted from the kindergartens schedule as well as kids must focus on formal subjects.so, l believe in the latter view because l think that the next years will depend on non ordinary jobs.

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

IN this modern world, in numerous area fewer people want to become teachers, especially in secondary educations. Along with this essay I am going to discuss the reason this phenomenon and give some solutions to solve this problems before arriving at the sum up.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food nowadays. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

Many people prefer restaurant food than cooking at home however I believe it has more disadvantages than advantages. This essay will first demonstrate eating outside has disadvantages like wasting more money and eating unhealthy food, followed by an analysis of how the primary advantages, namely saves time, is not valid.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Studies will receive more personal benefits about education than social benefits if they pay money for their study in universities. This essay agree on this opinion and will give some reasons about the writer’s point

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university educatio benefits individuals rather than society. to what extent do you agree or disagree

The majority of people believe that students should spend their money on studying due to the advantage of education at academy better than society. This writer totally agrees with this statement and the reasons will be explained below.

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Students should pay pull cost for their own study, because universityeducation benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe that students should pay full cost for their own study because the advantages of university education bing to individuals rather than society. This writer agreed with this agrued, through this essay I will figure out the reasons why I agree with this statement.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society.

It is said that a full cost paying for university courses will bring more student advantages than public one. From my point of view, I agree with this statement because this can enhance student knowledge and their valuable worth.

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Government should spend more money on education or sports and recreation .Do you agree or disagree?

Many people belive that government should allocate a higher presentage of money for education than the extra curricular activities such as sports and recreations.Im totally agree with this argument and in my following easy i will discuss the statement in deeply.

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Environmental problems are increasing in developing countries. what are some possible solutions for this issue

Many developing countries have faced air and water pollution because of industry and construction. Using solar and wild energy and taking some steps to improve air quality through filtrations could be optimal solutions for this issue.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While plastics from packaging was accused for its negative impact on destroying the environemnt, it is widely debated whether the manufacturers and supermarkets should be responsible for reducing the amount of packaging of goods or not, others argue that the clients themselves need to avoid buying products with overpackaging instead. Both point of views and reason why I agree with the former statement will be further discussed in this essay.

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Write an email to the local government in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Provide information about where you live. Explain the problem and how it affects your life. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

I am writing this email concerning a current problem in my community, located in Marpole, South Vancouver. I have been living here for more than two years, and this is a quiet and peaceful neighbourhood. In this zone, there are several green areas where I can walk, and spend time with my kids and pets becoming a the perfect place to live.

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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, education is really important for children. Some people think that studying foreign has more and more beneficial choices for a student’s home country. I think, both studying abroad and home country are have some good experiments for everyone. In my opinion, I disagree with the above statement because I strongly trust in the students, which are hard working , the boys and the girls will find the way to prove their skill no matter what they have faced.They can pass it with their mindset.

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Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?

The increase number of crimes average in cultured places is higher than pastoral areas undoubtedly, most of people around the world afraid of it. This is mainly because of the lack of local citizens and the huge number of people. There are a several solutions which should be implemented to deal with raising crimes rate in urban areas rather than rural areas.

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The only reason why people work hard is to eanr money and there is no another reason for doing so. To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

Nowadays, we are living in the advents of new high-tech, and work hard is vital factor that improve social-life. Some public consider work-a-bee is a bread and butter instead of others reason for doing so. In this essay, I will discuss the rationales behind these two views before showing why I favor the latter statement.

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