IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of people argue that Olympic games are captivating events that bring country together. Others have opinion a waste of cost and the money can be acceptable spending on other things. There are same benefits making tournament Olympic games not only it can cooperate different countries with the competition. And It also got a relationship by joined the events. However, it requires much money to develop sport facilities.

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In many countries, the level of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The increase in crime in certain society has been changing during the last century on different scales. Every nation has a specific socio-economic system which is the main cause of inequality worldwide ending in a vast number of crimes due to the poverty nowadays. This essay will discuss the different causes of crime and how individuals can manage them to reduce their consequences.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. Whatare its causes, and what solutions can solution

It is an irrefutable fact that in the contemporary world, children are facing some health problem such as obesity which is usually find in adult individuals. Such a trend could bring about various problems,which demand immediate consideration. This essay will examine the reasons like use of mobile phones and eating processed food and solutions for this trend like more physical moments and healthy diet by using examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Human activity has a damage to different plants and animals. Some people strongly support that is cannot be changed, whereas there others believe that, with persistent working to improve this situation to better side can be taken a change to positive side.

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

We live in the world that has a various cultural difference. Cultures have been occurred due to maintaining the habits and routines of people who lives each other in society. On the other hand, culture is affected by religions, wars, circumstances et cetera. Cultures influence the values of different ages. Every person has a great value and that is not discussible. However, according to some cultures, old people have a higher value than youth. On the contrary, other cultures value the youth more. As a result, we have a two sort of cultures to giving value on different ages.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can couse serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays the rate of emigration has increased significantly and knowing a foreign language plays an important role in that. Moreover, speaking in other languages can be so hard and cause serious problems which depend on that. Honestly, I believe the differences between main languages are so important and maybe can cause many huge problems and put migrators in bad troubles.

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Some people think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Other working people think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Childrencare is a controversial issue nowadays, so some folks prefer centres for nursing their children, while others dislike the idea of centres also they encourge the notion of keeping kids under supervision of a family members like grandparents. In this essay, I shall elaborate on also I reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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Some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world,Others feel that these organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based Discuss both sides and give your own view.

These days, people's lifestyles have been changing from the past and most people have a good situation, while some people are really poor; as a result, both governments and people found different kinds of charities to help these populations and people have various ideas about the charities work. a group of people believe that thes oragnizations ought to aid global population, but another one prefers to help people who live in their countries. In my opinion, when we have poor people in their country it is important that help them; moreover, the second choice must be other people.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friend s who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals think it is prefer to select firend's who constantly have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is righteous to have friends who time to time disagree with them. this essay will dicuss and articulate both the aspects, along with my opinion and relevant examples and a logical conlusion.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some nations, people have become significantly interested in the background of the place in which they live. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this behaviour, likewise the way in which they can do the research about.

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The continued rise in the world`s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Some people think that there are no greater problems than rising population density . Although, there are bunch of different problems that I write down below. I particularly agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent time students have burden of studies. Therefore, some people feel that after school, children should spend time with their favourite activities and enjoy their lives. Some humankind think totally opposite. They think students have to do extra curricular things apart from their studies. In this matter I would like to discuss both views and give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries older people are being encouraged to work longer and not to retire. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement age.

In some countries lacking young human resources, the elderly will be encouraged to work longer and not retire.In the following passages,I will show the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think that having sports in schools is not effective, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is very important for education. In my view, I disagree with the first belief, because sport is very vast in our life. In this essay, I will explain why sports are very essential.

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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Because of we are living in the era of Renaissance nowadays, the forest has become the main victim unfortunately, in this essay, I shall elaborate on also I shall reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, the purchasing process is easier than in decades. It is expected that with the fast technology and developing systems. The people take monetary from each other to cover they needs even less can return money back or not. In my opinion this behavior is not suitable for me because the debt will let the person spend money without knowing the consequences.

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In many countries, women are now able to join the armed forces on an equal basis. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy or air force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays one of the important questions all over the world is the question of equality between men and women. We can divide all the countries for 3 groups in this question. Some countries allow women to join the army on the equal basis, in other countries the army service is compalsory for both sexes, and the third are avoid the army service for women. I am convinensed that an army must be professional, with the equal rights for man and women, without compalsory military service at all, for several reason.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

People wanting goverment to spend money on other planets is a useless idea because it will waste lots of money without any outcome. I will discuss both view in this essay.

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Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think that other factors such as television, friend, music have the biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In society, families hold the biggest influence over their child’s education and enhancement. Otherwise, other factors such as friend, television, and child’s outside environment also play a huge part on their development. This essay will discuss both opinions.

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Some would argue that most of the employees who wear a uniform at the office gives good impression. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Several people have an opinion that generally a worker who dresses gives uniform at the office that is giving perspective outstanding impression. I totally agree with the statement, because wearing the same costume shows solid teamwork and branding company.

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