IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that dancing is an important subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.What are positive and negative sides of art at school?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience or knowledge. Write about 180-220 words.

In today's fast-paced world, individuals hold diverse opinions on wide range of topics. The issue of dancing as an vital subject that should be included in school curriculum, opinions are divided, with some supporting it and others oppose it. The positive effects of including this subject at school is that it act as an physical exercise for students and it also help certain scholars to have their career from this subject. On the other hand, the negative effects are lack on concentration on major subjects, along with this learners can face more stressful life.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

The legality of rejecting job applicants based on their age varies from country to country. In some places, laws prohibit to make a discrimination in employement practices in order to make a fair and equal enough in the working environemnet.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that some students believe that invest all their time to learn main subjects encourage them for a better qualification, somehow, I strongly hold the view that students should pay attention to all subjects equally.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Global citizens throughout this planet have a tendency to take beneficial features of high-tach facilities in order to maintain contact with friends or relatives, moreover is get latest data through online newspaper. This writer is completely agrees with the mentioned viewpoint and will explain why during the essays.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the dis advantages?

Social media are being used every day to contact with people in around the world and keep track of new events. This writer believes that the advantages include keep in touch with other people and entertaining outweigh it disadvantages is leading to the laziness of it users.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage p

In modern era , usage of car has skyrocketed. People having car has increased drastically in the span of thirty years and it lead to a problem of big traffic jams in numerous metero cities all over the world. If questioned, I think it is true to a large extent. My position is further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explainations as well as some precautions that the authorities can take to dismotivate individuals from driving their own cars.

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Some people think that punishment is the best way of teaching children to behave well. Others believe that it is better to reward children for good be haviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common thought that punishment is the best way to teach children for good behavior, but the others belief that give children present when they have good behavior. While there are admitted several benefit when punish childrent for teaching children, but I believe that the best way to teach them is give children their reward for their behave well.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Many student in Europe got to schools that foucus on the professional and technical skill so that they can play a creative role in the socity.

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Some people think it is necessary to use animals to test medicines or products intended for human use. Others, however, criticize this as animal cruelty. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Using animals in laboratories as an object for medical reasons or production has been discussed in the last decades. some people believe it is essential to prevent harming human generation. Though, some others argue it is a case of animal abuse. In my opinion, torturing any living creature for any reason is far from humanity and must be banned.

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recent years, The number of crimes committed by young people in major City throughout the world is increasing. discuss this issue. give reason and suggest some solutions.

Nowadays, as technology became advanced, the quantity of criminal cases have increase significantly, especially in millenial generation. However, some scientists research the reason behind this case while the government tries to find the solution from this chaos.

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Organizing tours to promote places and communities is becoming more and more popularity. Is it positive or negative development for the local people and environment?

Recently, organizing tours has gained certain popularity among the public. It is widely-proposed that it can promote places and communities. This article mainly aims at the analysis of the drawbacks of this phenomenon for local people and the environment.

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The below gives information about rail transport in four counties in 2007.

The table illustrates detailed data about the railway how many people used and how many cargo carriers in 2007. Cargo units are measured in billions of tons.

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Successful company is used advertising to make more sales what can make an advertisement effective do you think advertisement is a bad thing or a both thing for society.

Promotion, is a thing which is used for presenting support to anything or activity. Advertising is a commercial subject and mainly used by businesses to improve there sales. There are several ways to enhance the effectivity of advertisement. It delivers both positive and negative aspects to the society. In the following paragraph, I will explore the method of making perfect advertisement and the effects on citizens.

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On one hand, nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. On the other hand, nuclear weapons are a potent threat to world peace. Do the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the risks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technologies is a topic that always cause doubting amongst people, because there are a lot of benefits of this technology, however, at the same time there are risks that humanity faceing while using nuclear innovations. Overall, nuclear power generates cheap and clear energy, that can provide millions of people and do not harm eco system. On other hand, nuclear technologies are the most dangerous productions, that have been ever created.

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is very important that primary school children are necessary for taking knowledge of how to grow vegetables and keep animals as a pets.In the forthcoming paragraph, I will explain why these learning things advantages over disadvantages.

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some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The opinion is divided on whether it is better to live in hot climate or not. Although, a number people suggest otherwise, however, I believe that living in the warmer regions have greater benefits. This essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion thereafter.

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Nowadays the trend of eating ready made food is increasing. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

In this hectic world, eating habits face challenges and become a concern. Most of people prefere to have fast and ready meals, so This trend have been growth . I think although, ready and fast cooked meals might be time-saving, it would be harmful for body and people's health.

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The limited budgets of governments, especially those in developing countries, are better spent on health and education than on employment-generating projects. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe governments need to invest on health care and better educational system specially in poorer countries, rather than providing more job apportunity for the community . The essay might disagree becuase having a job has a significant impact on every aspect of life, particularly on well-being and education.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

People, by and large, utilize social networking daily to contact other people and look for news. In spite of the abundance of data and the place for talking with strange people online ,this writer believes that overusing it and credibility of the information seem to exceed the benefits.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

Many individuals through out the world use social network everyday to contact with other people and gets news notifications. This writer believes the benefits of wide selection and convenience outweigh the drawback of be unconfident.

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