IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views. and give your opinion.

Money is very important for the survival of human beings. Without money, one cannot buy food, shelter and clothing which are the basic needs of people. Many people believe money is a very important factor to reach happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. This has always been a big debate and I will give my opinion throughout the essay.

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Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why hapiness is difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

A certain segment of individuals argues that money can not buy happiness. In my opinion, it is possible for people to be happy even without having money and only aspects of life can create a vital role in creating happiness.

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Some people think that to be successful, you need to get a university education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals believe that education plays a vital role to become successful in life while other argue that a degree is not necessary to achieve life goals. In the forthcoming ,paragraphs we will discuss both views of the essay.

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Some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, in this modern era population has been increasing day by day.Public face numerous kinds of issues with their housing and transportation conjunction. I completely agree with this phenomenon and discuss it in upcoming paragraphs.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

The question of whether the games has the some importance for adults as for children or not, is the subject of the following essay. In my point of view this statement is true for the reasons listened below.

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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believes that the news shouldn't share details of the crimes, while some other's thinks they should. While being properly informed about the events around us is important, this thesis believes that providing sensitive information to public might cause increase in crime and violence.

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some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world/ Others feel that those organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, a large number of charities are helping an enormous number of people globally. Some people advise that charities should help people in need no matter where they are from in the world, while other people claim that those fund organisations should only help the people living in their domestic country. In this essay, I will look at both views and I will explain my reasons why I think that organisations should help the community globally along with in domestic country is better.

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Some people think that an employee should change his career or field of work at least once. However, other think that employees should not change his career and stay in the job for the entire life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Changing the job roles from one field to another field is the upcoming trend in today world. While many people suggest it is a good choice and an equal amount of people are against it. The essay will argue on the above mentioned statement which relates to changing careers is not advisable using a pragmatic approach.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops In town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays , technology become online platform to do shopping without go there and also any kinf of things we can perchase so it impacts on local shops and one day , it will close in the country I do not agree with the statement.

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Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Lately, there are many discussions around productivity and the preferences of each individual's work style.There debate is around which is better, either collaborating or working alone. In my opinion, individual work brings the benefits of autonomy and focus while a good collaboration is beneficial in terms of workload and the quality of output.

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some people feel that entertainers such as film stars,pop musicians or sports persons are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Entertainers are an important part of society and they entertain individuals in different ways.It is believed by a few individuals that they are getting more than they deserve,which according to me, is not a correct statement at all.I thought that they ought to be highly paid along with the educators and welfare workers.

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that nowadays people get older in the early stage of their life due to severe illness or any medical conditions, which may affect the budget of the healthcare system. But I fully disagree with this notion that the community has to pay their own expenses for their well-being.

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Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that universities should offer only career-oriented courses rather than teaching arts subjects like philosophy, which is thought to be expensive and less-productive. I think practical courses can be given more focus, but arts subjects should remain as an option for those who demand.

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Some young people are leaving the country to anothers, leaving only old people in the country. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Moving to another region sounds like a big deal for young people, and hence it has been a trend in recent times.This has lead to several issues which are highlighted in the essay whilist providing some solutions.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawback

These day, it has become a prevalent phenomenon that many people decide to studying out of the home town, thanks to the advancement of technology and transportation under gloabalization. I believe that benefits of this trend are outweighed by its disadvantages.

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Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, our planet is heavily affected by human activities. A small portion of the world believes that it is not possible to prevent nature from destroying but others think , there are some possibilities to overcome it. In this essay , I will discuss both views and will give my impression of them.

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Many people believe that strong tradition helps to civilise a nation and that governments should therefore subsidise musicians, theatre companies, actors and artists. Explain whether you agree or disagree with this statement and what you think governments should do to promote the traditional cultural heritage of a country.

Many countries’ cultures are preserved by the strong tradition inherent in the music, art and theatre of that country. It has been argued that the government should pay to promote the uniqueness of a country’s culture by subsidising the artists, musicians and actors which keep culture alive. I agree that a government should fund its citizens’ cultural pursuits, since part of a government’s ,responsibility includes the preservation of its people’s own unique cultural traditions. If a government wants to preserve and maintain the art and music which is historically traditional to its country, then it must take steps to ensure that those traditions are valued and fostered. Firstly, a government can help maintain the cultural traditions of a country by using tax money to build theatres, music and concert halls, galleries and museums. By providing venues for artists, musicians and actors to practice, perform and exhibit their arts, the government is helping people come together...

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Some people believe that families of politicians should not be allowed to study or seek medical attention abroad. Do you agree or disagree?

In every progressive society it is a common expectation that the leaders be accountable to those they lead. It is for this reason that many people share the opinion that families of the running class should be banned from seeking health care services and education overseas and I strongly agree with them. Firstly, because this restriction will force the leaders to improve the local health care system and academic institutions. Secondly, it will reduce the cost of governance.

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Some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Entertainers,such as,actors,sportsmen,singers,influencers are becoming increasingly popular in several parts of the world.A few people believe that,this part of the society receives a higher income compared to the other working sectors.Considering the workload and the stress,people are of the view that Doctors,Nurses,Firefighters should be paid significantly greater income than the entertainers considering the stress,workload and the dedication to become a part of the crucial team.In this essay,I will firstly express my views regarding this issue, followed by the varieties of job that certainly should require a higher pay.

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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patient do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly.

The doctors Suggest that over- aged citizens do exercise daily but some patient have not follow exercises in routine. Intense to discuss the benefits as well as causes of workout.

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