IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 452

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people have succeeded in their entire life due to a luck factor which is beyond their control. In my opinion, even though some individuals believe it is a pivotal factor in reaching goals, I disagree with this perspective since many other foremost aspects help them to meet their desire.

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Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, all the product prices are increasing day by day. Middle-class families face insignificant difficulties in life and they start their own business. It is more beneficial for the employee rather than working in under the industries. I completely agree with this phenomenon and show my own views in further paragraphs.

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Lots of people are throwing away food, what are the reasons for this and how can food wastage is reduced?

People migrate from one place to another in hunt of a better life. The urban areas across the globe are sprawling as people are moving there from their rural settlements. Some individuals prefer to reside in modern cities while others prefer to stay back in their village. This essay will discuss both these views and will completely agree with the former choice. There are several benefits of moving to a metropolitan town. To begin with, there are ample job opportunities available in a city as compared to the villages. The reason behind this is the presence of large multi national corporations in these areas. For example, no large organisation sets up their office in the suburbs and hence, every candidate tends to move closer to the main city. Moreover, developed cities provide a safer lifestyle. The law and order situation is in control and the number of crimes is comparatively lesser as compared to the rural settlements. Technological advancements like CCTV cameras and...

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An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause ? what can be done to deal with this situation

It is evident that jobs in developing countries likely provide less salaries including for teachers and doctors than those in developed ones; thus, some professionals from poorer areas tend to work in better ones nowadays. Yet this phenomenon causes several problems, including lack of experts and lack of service quality, which should be addressed by taking some measures such as giving higher earnings for them.

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Advertisements cause more harm than benefit both to individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is sometimes argued that both individuals and society are influenced by advertisements and are suffered some problems. I generally agree with this claim because companies overstate their products or service to make customers buy or use their things. These action stimulate people's impulsive buying and cause offences.

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Many people complain about stress at work. How can employers reduce stress and what can employees do on their own to resolve this problem?

One of the most important and common problem at workplace is stress. Many workers worry about it and do complain about work stress to the management. This essay will discuss various menthols on employers can reduce stress and how to deal with it using a pragmatic approach.

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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, everyone has a gadget mainly used to communicate without face meetings. It has simple characteristics such as short or essential. Many people think it badly impacted on the survival of syntax and alphabets. I do not agree with this view because this way is only used for the practical situation. In reality, the person who implemented instant conversation is also aware of the grammar and spelling on formal occasions.

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Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. What the causes of it & is it a psetive or negative development?

Across countries, it have been considered that computer are becoming popular among younger people. This essay will discuss severals reasons towards this happened and why it is not a beneficial enlargement for the greenhorn generations.

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that the advancement of technology has been developed significantly nowadays, and it plays an essential role in our daily lives. From my point of view, it provides both benefits and drawbacks, described in the following paragraphs.

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Many people think that group or team activities can be more useful for life than those activities which are done alone.

Many people think that group or team activities can be more useful for life than those activities which are done alone. It seems that argues under that statement will never end. But I totally agree with that!

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in their advertising,businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, companies usually introduce their production by an advertisement that they assert their materials are new.I personally advocate this practice.

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An increasing number of larger shopping areas, malls and department stores are leading to the decline of smaller corner shops. what are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping in larger shopping centers rather than smaller, more traditional shops?

Shopping from malls is very popular across the world. The trend is growing exponentially day to day.There are numerous benefits for both customers and sellers such as economic and social. Despite the advantages, shopping in plazas has disadvantages.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In the technology era a large number of citizens tend to read electronic books instead of printed books. Several benefits will be gotten by readers like more economical, and simple. However, reading e-books has some drawbacks like uncomfortable eyesight which will be discussed in upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?

Many individuals think governments should not levy taxes on the salaries of citizens, while some say the money they earned is supposed to pay tax to the nation. From my perspective, I personally believe that keeping all the money we have got is usually more equitable. In this essay, I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

There are many different methods of raising children all over the world, depending on parents’ believes and cultures. But the major argument is about punishing children to teach them how to distinguish between right and wrong. most people believe children should not be punished, but others think chastening is a good method to help them recognize the true path.

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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

I am writing this letter to you about the item I have purchased online through your company's website, which is not in a condition to you.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packing of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that manufacturers and supermarkets should reduce the amount of packaging of goods.

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Some people believer thar purcjase base on their need not advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some may think that purchasing should be done when it's required, but in ,contrast some may think that it should be done based on advertisements. I concise at the given statement, and will be discussing it.

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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, such as sky diving and rock climbing.Do you agree or disagree?

Some people love to live adventurous life and like to explore the nature and do the thrilling activities. According to some, sports like sky diving and rock climbing should be banned which could hurt physically. As per me these sports should never banned. Although, these activities are some what dangerous but give chances to explore the nature and if it is done under supervision with proper support they are less dangerous .

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising is one of the most used methods of introducing products to us customers and persuading us to purchase their product, but many suggest that this method is no longer effective, since people nowadays neglect most of the advert. If advertising is truly unreliable, why does the company still use them?

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