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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the reasons behind this trend? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own

These days, the professionals' migration has been increased more tremendously than ever before due to the globalisation. As a result, many professionals such as doctors and teachers are moved to developed nations from their poorer countries for employment. Better lifestyle and hike earnings are the reasons behind this trend and some solutions can be overcome this tendency. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the last two or three decades, the language transcription application has been improvised more tremendously than ever before due to the innovation of the technology. Despite learn a second language is still required. I completely agree with this statement because translation software discourages further interaction to others. Besides, learn a new linguistic can connect with the locals who speaks same accent. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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Despite the growing number of gyms and fitness centres, more and more people are leading a sedentary lifestyle in the modern society. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest

Eventhough, many fitness related infrastructure facilities are available in modern cities, people become more and more inactive due to their busy life style.This essay discusses that, this has become a pressing issue as it creates many adverse impacts on people's well-being.However, the government and the private sector interventions to increase public awareness on this regard may help to solve the problem.
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The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

The given diagrams show the average income and spending on groceries and clothes in 2010 and 2013 by middle-class families and to which products the money was allocated in 2010.
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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

In recent times, a massive population is competing with young people for the similar job positions. Unemployment and inflation are the two major reasons behind this problem. To curb this problem, government support and establishment of new infrastructures are needed.
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Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that arts subjects such as painting or drawing must not be a must for secondary scholars. I agree with this opinion to a greater extent, and in this essay im going to explain my reasons.
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Some people think student should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think student should spend time on other important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some assert that the studying of food making should be taught as main subject in the school curriculm while others believe that students might concentrate on essential subjects such as math, physics, chemistry,.. Because both viewpoints are justifiable, I personally lean towards the latter.
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Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some peope believe that the demonstration of action, gore and fighting scenes in visual media is negatively our children and adults as it makes them vulnreble to develop aggressive traits. This essay completely agree with this viewpoint because an increased exposure to such media have negative consequences on our youth and also it also motivate people to engage in criminal activities who have propensity towards crime.
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Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many factories and retail busineses are encouraged by the authority to shift to rural areas from big towns. This essay discusses the demerits and merits of this development while also stating why I believe that it is mostly a positive development.
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The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices on individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?

The increase in the cost of living has a great impact on people and society. If the cost of living increases, but people's wages do not increase, then it will be very difficult for people to live.One of the reasons for the increase in the cost of living is tourists, because when tourists come, they bring foreign currency to the country they come to, and this causes the cost of living to increase.Another reason for the increase in the cost of living is the depreciation of the currency.Over time, the national currency depreciates, and as it depreciates, so does the cost of living.
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With the advent of social media, more people are getting their news online instead of from print media. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who read news online.

Nowadays, a huge part of new generation is addicted to the portal of news as they don't want to spend their time reading newspapers. However, there are some advantages for certain areas where the internet is the main problem. The aim of this essay is to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages which is relevant to people who read newspaper online or print media.
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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical serious in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle individually and globally?

Over the last two or three decades, pollution has been raised rapidly than ever before. Contamination of air, water and soil are the complicated issues that it takes millions of years to restore. This essay will present the main causes and a few solutions to overcome this trouble of an individual as well as global.
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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people have little to gain from the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

My motivation in participating in the CrossCulture Program is to increase my network, especially with NGO networks abroad, enrich my mindset by understanding the culture in Germany, and improve my ability to process information related to the environment. These three things are my main goals in participating in this activity. Surely this activity will improve my ability to serve my current organization -Forest Watch Indonesia- and benefit the community and the environment. These three things are very sustainable with each other and can be achieved by participating in the Cross-Cultural Program. I believe I can achieve all of them by joining this program. For example, I am currently working at Forest Watch Indonesia as a GIS Specialist. My job allows me to calculate which areas are affected by deforestation. This is then linked to my ability to provide information to people who need this data. This ability will improve over time with the CrossCulture Program. I will do my best to imp...
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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

It is often thought that an increase in living standards of a country are of great benefit to the city but not the rural areas. There are two major issues this can cause and effective resoltuions for such problems.
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Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?

Some people argue that money is the must needed thing, while on the flip side they argue that money is not eveything there are few other factors which are eqivalently important in everyones life. This esaay will examine both the sides and argue in favour of the latter.
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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree with this option?

Junk food is undoubtedly everywhere nowadays. And countries with higher income tend to have more junk food chain than those with lower income. It is in those places too that the health problem caused by unhealthy food occurs the most. Although viable, the idea of increasing the tax imposed to this type of food would not solve this issue at hand, as wealthy people could just afford to buy them anyway. If any, it could produce an unnecessary side effect to other sector such as the overall economy of said country. Therefore, I am more inclined to disagree with the notion of increasing the tax for this type of food.
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In many cities, the population is encouraged to use public transportation rather than private transport In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport?

Over the last two or three decades, private vehicle ownership has been increased more tremendously than ever before due to the innovation of the technology. In contrast, in many towns, people are motivated to use the public transportation instead of private vehicles. There are plenty of benefits and drawbacks of using the public transport. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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In many countries around the worls life expectancy is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays,across the world ,It is a reality that lifespan is going to be longer than before ,and this issue is connected with hope and concerns of humans for living ,for exploring in positive side , more years to be active in good health would flourished societies in progress ,alongside, families would be more confident to live together ,however, in negative side , there are more demands and needs to address of population inflation ,so, I will discuss more in following sentences.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, the level of sugar is considerably high in packed products for eating and drinking which causes a lot of health issues. In order to prevent these health problems, some people think that the prices of foods that contain high sugar must increased to persuade people less sugar intake. I also definitely agree with them.
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Many museums and historic sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. What are the causes of this? What can be done for museums and historic sites to attract more local visitors?

Over the last two or three decades, historical places have been unpopularised more tremendously among the population than ever before. As a result, many museums and historic places are explored by tourists as compared to the local inhabitants. There are some reasons for this tendency and there are some possible solutions to attract more local residents to visit these locations. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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