IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 485

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages to study abroad?

There is a significant rise in number of undergraduates those who are studying in the other part of the world for their higher education.Although there will be a cultural,communal hindrance while abroad,they will get better career opportunities that will help in their future growth.In my opinion the students should prefer to study in abroad inspite of the troubles and challenges that they will experience inevitably.

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

Currently, thanks to technological developments, traditional methods of teaching such as teachers are gradually being replaced by new technology platforms. This essay will discuss both positives and negatives of this new approach.

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph gives information about the average number of carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.

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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

It was a fact that using a a bicycle is eco-friendly but nowadays riding a bike for transportation is not famous anymore. It would happen because of lack of infrastructure and safety concerns. There are some significant solutions to these problems.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A number of people suggest that children should be allowed to make their own decisions in everyday lives, while others claim that this may result in the development of selfishness. From my perspective, adults need to understand why children should make their own choices.

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Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Water is sold at the market, vending machines, and from the tap of every home. However, as a form of natural resource, it is argued that water should not be sold in the free market. Instead, opinions arise on legalising the sales of bottled water. Meanwhile, water sold in bottles are not directly transferred from the river and involves a various process of purification which involves the hiring of workers. On the other hand, it is also true that water is a basic need and a natural resource that individuals should have access to.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that children who are in the field of allowance to get their own choices on three basic needs (such as food,clothes andto entertainment)seems to be the best result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes while for some people,making decisions about these matters depending on their parents is very important for childrens.

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Sompe poeple believe that bicycles are the best mode of transport in the cities, while others disgaree. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both views and give your own opinion.

In today's, world the usage of motor vehicles has increased so much and due to this the pollution in the environment has also increased because of this problem people are using bicycles more than usual and also the usage of public transport has increased similarly there are some benefits and demerits of using bicycle lets discuss some in the following paragraph.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encouragmore people to take an interest in the artiststs?

In earlier days people are mostly engaged in different forms of art activities.But now the situation has changed and people are more inclined towards other sectors like science, technology and business.

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Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

Pets are human's best friend. Not only they give a company to lonely person but also protect their property. However keeping a pet have both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a neccessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative. Discuss your both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, most of people live in a modern world and they choose modern life-styles. They spend lots of time with their cellphones or on the internet. These modern people send emails or types letters in their computers instead of write it down by their own hand. Therefore, some people suggest that the handwriting is going to be extinct and no need to be taught in schools anymore. Please let me stand opposite side of this idea.

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“Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Some people opine that the vast numbers of online platforms such as mail boxes or facebook are replaced instead of real-connection amongst the society,however, they possibly have not considered to benefcials of the technology advancement ,for example,internet networking have shorthen the long distances between international students and relatives that they would prefer to talk with their relatives through an online spaces ,in addition ,mail-boxes and social medias have accelerated the inter personal connections with the speed in any place and anytime,so,I completely disagree with this statement that it assumed the modern communication have limited the real-relationship and I am going to bring some pieces of the evidence to confirm my opinion.

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Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have a unique view of their own and opinion by emotion and feeling about different type of movies and TV programmes being shown outside or not.Today, i will discuss about the two sides apply to the situation we are having here.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some say that thus is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is a fact that, nowadays, there is a widespread use of technology, such as computers and the internet, in academic fields. A lot of people believe that this practice could be beneficial to students and teachers, because of effective and affordable learning as well as easy access to information. However, others have negative opinions as this method could arise numerous problems, such as eyesight issues and a lack of human interaction.

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Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that recently women has become prefer to make good career rather than have a children, so they will have children later in life. It happen because some of them believe that they must work as a proffesionals after they finish their education, and make good money. Women made their choice due to the bill of the debt they have during studying in collegge.

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Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that the death penalty benefits a nation. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view. The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that the death penalty is an effective deterrent to serious crime. This is because it instils fear of carrying out serious crimes as people would not want to lose their life as a result of that. For example, people who are thinking of murder or committing violent acts will think twice before doing so. As a result of this policy, crime rate would go down. Another reason for my position is that the government will be able to spend less money on keeping the criminal in prison. If the criminal is jailed for many years or for life, the government would need to pay for the enormous expenses involved such as the cost of food for the prisoners and the salaries for the prison officers. However, with the death sentence, the prisoner will spend less time in prison and this woul...

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Some people believe that rich countries should provide poor countries with help that is not financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we live on the globalization era which it has been widely claimed that some individuals have the ideas that developed countries should support nonfinancial aids to developing nations. From my point of view, I totally agree with the statement and my reasons will be discussed in detail.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Advantages/Disadvantages

It’s often said that, learning multiple language has always been best for a child, it builds a new character and children can get an exposure about the new culture by learning their linguistic. It has proven that many people believes that a children should learn a foreign language in primary school in place of secondary school. This Essay will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of learning foreign language in primary school is an essential part or not.

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Early technological developments helped people more than recent technological developments do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this fast-paced world, machinery development plays a massive role in on a day to day lifestyle, starting right from an electronic toothbrush in the morning till we rest in a bed we use multiple useful gadgets.

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There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university?

While university education is no longer considered a luxury nowadays, in the past, only priviliged individuals were able to do so. To that extent, many people believe that it has a positive impact on the community, others, however, believe that the quality of education is deteriorating because of it. In this essay, I will explain the positive impact of the increasing amount of students going to universities as well as the drawbacks.

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