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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some believe the invention of computer should be considered as the most important industry of the last century, although there is another idea that mentions other inventions had more capability to be known as the best. I am in agreement with the first group. The invention of computer in the last century can be accounted as a revolution in science and more than it, in human life. The utilities and abilities of this newborn technology created new branches of science like internet, Internatinal technology, computer sciences, video games and unlimited fields which changed and promoted human life to a higher level in comparison to the past history. The growth of new sciences which derived from computer science would create so many new jobs and make the life easier for people. Nowadays living without computer involvement is unbearable and to some extent impossible. However there is another opinion which says we had more important inventions in the last century. Some suggest cinema as the ...

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

In the past few decades, people are more and more interested in relocation, particularly from a village to a city. This migration may be extremely challenging for each individual and governments may invest in improving the urban life in several ways.

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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

In this day and age, some people believe that students should mainly focus on developing their academic performance in order to pass their exams and reach their goals instead of other soft skills such as cooking or dressing. From my point of view, I equally agree and disagree with this statement and this essay will pinpoint my own perspective.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology is advancing rapidly due to the expansion of science. Many countries in this world are in the race to achieve their aim of scientific knowledge. Some societies believe that science should improve human being lives. In my perspective, I strongly agree with this idea which will be discussed the reasons later on.

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Some people believe school children should be given multiple vacations while others think they should get one long vacation. Discuss advantages for both and give your opinion.

Vacations is most crucial part of children to boots their energy and continue to focus on academic area. People having a different opinion regarding the holiday, many individuals believed that multiple vacation would be helpful as contrasted other argue that single long break is more helpful. If asked, there are number of pros and I will discuss my opinion in ensuring paragraph.

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In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Nowadays, due to the fact that in many places large chain stores are taking over the marketplace and it is almost impossible for small businesses to compete with them. It has both merits and drawbacks.

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The benefits and drawbacks of studying at international schools. Agree or dissagree

International schools is a part of enhancement education in country. There are many tipes schools in this world from private schools, state schools and International Schools. There are different curriculum every part in types at school. we can define schools based on the experience from people, or others. I agree every schools have positive sides and negative sides.

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owadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Technology has altered the way people communicate. Therefore, it is claimed how smartphones as one of the cutting-edge breakthroughs have enabled people to feel closer, and the positive outcome is saving money.

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new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transformaing th elives of costumers. to waht extand do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Technology development in recent times has massively impacted consumer behavior and their lives. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement in two respects, first gadgets likely make the process simpler that affect human's mobility and health, and second, technology changes will lead to disruptions in industries in order to win the market competition.

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Some people think robots are very important to humans' future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some say that humanoids are very crucial for the development of humanity, while others would argue that there are danger and deleterious effects of this trend for our people. This essays discusses both view and then I will give my opinion.

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Some people think that the government should decide which subject should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

The majority of society opines that the government ought to decide what subjects students should take at the University, while others reckon that learners should be admitted to enrol for subjects that they aim for. However, this essay will describes both stances with lucid examples.

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Parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to bring up children? What consequences could this way of parenting pose on children as they get older?

It's a common belief that indulging children with doing whatever they want and buying things whatever they ask for has been becoming a parenting approach in many families. From my perspective, this is not a good way to raise kids because of having certain negative impacts upon them in the future.

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Adult youths are often called up for working development of communities. Some people say that they should be paid other say that they should not be pair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Young people often obtain a calling up for contributiion communities' development. I strongly believe this case in one hand brings positive impact such as raising awareness in society and training their capabilities social, but in another hand, it also has negative impact such as make youth be exploited illegally without obtaining any funding.

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•Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, there are increasing popularity to take part in sports. Some people believe that it is necessary to evolve in sports which are played in teams, like soccer, rather than taking part in individual sports like swimming. From my personal perspective, both types of sports have their own merits and people should take part in both sports played in teams and individual sports.

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proportion of males and females in Australia in different age groups who did daily exercise in 2010.

The given chart illustrates the proportion of males and females in Australia in different age groups who did daily exercise in 2010.

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Nowadays most people read books online and there is decline in number of people reading paperback books. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Globalisation can have a lot of consequences, one of them is reading. Furthermore, some people like to read books online. In this essay, I do not totally agree with this statement. In my opinion, I prefer to read online rather than paper because it is very simple. On the other hand, I believe based on the paper I read, when some people read use paper it can be more memorable than using online books.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Eating too much fast food causes a lot of health problems and numbers are rapidly increase day by day in many counties. Governments try to solve this problem by imposing a higher taxes on this kind of food. Since eating junk food has become kind of addiction almost comparable to alcohol and drug addiction, I find this solution not effective.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that prices of sugary products should be increased in order to prevent people getting health problems. This essay completely agrees with this statement because by increasing the price of high sugar products, these will not be profitable for the consumers, also individuals will be aware of how harmful these products are.

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Online, people write product reviews and opinions about services. Is it a good thing or bad thing?

Today, when people buy a huge amount of goods by the internet, it is undeniable that online sales and services become essential part of our life. In this case, some people argue that writing a online reviews about product is beneficial, while others consider it negatively for business.

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Under British and Australia laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record . This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

Several barristers supposed that all the defendant's past criminal records should be given to a jury before they make a decision about the particular illegal case. While this may work to a certain extent, I think it also has its dark sides.

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