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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most of the diseases nowadays coming from unhealthy food and not practicing sport which lead to spending a lot of money for management and improving healthcare. As far as I'm concerned I agree that issue is spreading all over the world and care need to be taken to minimize it.

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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular buildings has changed over time.

The tables display the changes in the ground floor construction from 1958 to the present.

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University should enrol equal numbers of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

The ratio between male and female students in certain subjects have big distinguish, while some perspectives consider it as the obligation of educational institutions to even the number, I personaly disagree with such opinions since I am in favour of demolishing gender discrimination as a profoundly solution.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Several people belief that strict punishment for driving offences are the solution to decreasing traffic accident. On the other hand, others argue that other measures would be more efficient in increasing road safety. Both arguments has potential and threat. To my way of thinking. other measures is more creative than strict punishment. So, it has more benefit for all parties, either for the law enforcer or for the driver.

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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measure can you suggest to make it easier?

People often have a hard time coping with new situations that happened in their life as they have been used to what they currently have. In my perspective, this happens because we are too familiar with the old situations. In order to deal with new circumstances, people will have to be prepared and ready to face it.

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Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

Few people open that learning and medical services should charge no money from people while some other groups believe that government must take care of these expenses. In my perspective, the cost of basic schooling until grade 12 and health care services should be covered by higher authorities to some extent which I will explain with examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic: Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

The law in both the United kingdom and Australia prohibits juries to get information on the defendant's past criminal records by doing this they believe it protects offenders from being accused and giving them a fair verdict , however , some lawyers think it's more reasonable to get the full picture before making the final decision , I personally agree with the last statement as knowing the past , can provide more fairness those who were never involved in criminal activity and also give the juries better prospective on the situation .

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessery to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Many people believe that punishment is an effective tool to teach children to differentiate between right and wrong from a young age. However, various others think that this method might have a bigger downside. Therefore, it’s of the upmost importance to discuss both sides.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.

Modern ways of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time which is people spend on meeting with their friends.This has had a bad influence on their social life. I believe that spending a great deal of time with their phones may bring benefits,,still I see no great merit in that occasion.

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in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between two cities. other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The usage of transportation budget, is a common argument amongst many countries. When it comes to the construction of new railways, many believe that the funds used should instead be directed towards the improvement of existing public transport. However, it is important to consider the fact that the answer to this issue, is highly dependent on the particular situation of each individual country. Therefore, we must analyse in which cases either option would be suitable.

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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education plays a vital role in individual's life. Some people say that the traditional method of teaching is a good for children . While , others argued that we can change method with technology uigradation. I am agree with this statemen t and i will discuss the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Buying from the supermarkets in comparison with small local shops become common in this era. The reason behind this tendency is less price and variety of products available in the supermarket. Although I accept that there are some drawbacks to this phenomenon, I believe it is a constructive approach.

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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

There are many new phenomenons that are widespread in cities and it is an important subject to concern for all. Long hour delays of transporters or long journey times are one of those. Problems that cause this vary from outdated infrastructure to overpopulation. I will explain and give Some solutions in this essay. First of all, there are many types of public transport that could cause delays such as old buses and cars, especially in big cities. We can replace them with new ones to reduce the traffic and prevent ruining a day for many people that want to go to school or work. Secondly, overpopulation could affect the quality of the amenities too. By this we mean using infrastructure over and over again by a huge amount of people may cause many technical problems. For instance, many country dwellers daily use old public transportations to go to their work. Governments should think about some ways to solve this issue. Facilities renovation is an effective way that states could do. For...

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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this period of inflation, it is often thought that the governments have to provide every member of society with a little amount of takings to live on, especially if the individuals were jobless. I am in complete agreement with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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The health benefits of physical activities are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them exercise regularly?

Nowadays, most the government and the developer applications around the world have already made the campaign to be aware of the health issue and encourage their community to carry out activities that augment of health benefits including physical activities. This essay will discuss why some folks rarely to perform work-out activities and how the government collaborates to the technology developer in order to push them to preserve their strength.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education but other people claim that it is the individual's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Numerous people reckon government should pay for our health and education. Other people say that we should be responsible for ourselves. Everyone has their own opinion. This essay discuss both views. And I give my own opinion.

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Many historic buildings are being distroyed or damaged. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to preserve the buildings?

History is an integral part of human evolution, and we the new generation learn about history through historic buildings, folk songs, written documents and so on. Folk songs and written documents are easier to store and inherit to the next generation than historic buildings which are being distroyed either by nature or humans. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons for this and give some ideas about what should be done to preserve the building.

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Is money or job satisfaction more important to consider when choosing a career?

The argument when money or job satisfaction go first highly depends of the age of individuals regardless of the career they choose from. Although, it is clear that there are some professions which are better paid than others, it is the experience that determines how well paid a candidate can get.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Food has been considered the fuel of human beings and, with water, it is the most important element to survive. Moreover, it is becoming a central topic of discussion in our society because nowadays the quality of food is decreased due to overfarming of animals and crops. Thus, it is agreed in the educational system that students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. This essay analyses the importance of a deep understanding of this topic in our society, which has to be considered at the same level as other subjects, and the approach of countries that already have given importance to this topic.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree

Technology is improving globally. Technology will help students in learning and understanding in a faster ways we can ever think of. Technology also helps students to have access to different knowledge. The use of internet has served as a means of sensitisation and also a means of improving learning in the world.

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