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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that some urgent problems in modern society can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the modern world people face lots of problems. A few among the mass say that some urgent issues in society can only be solved with international cooperation. I agree with the abovementioned statement and my point of view regarding this explain in the following paragraph.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Nowadays, growing number of salaried professionals are moving from developing countries to developed nations. This essay will discuss what problems it cause including loss of expertise and loss of revenue to the source country. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving infrastructure and salaries.

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More and more plastic waste is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans on the world. What problems does it cause? What are the solutions?

Presently, a large amount of plastic waste is used by population. The trouble situation causes to pollut over the world such as urban areas as well as rural areas and oceans. In this essay, I will discuss a series problem and provide with relevant solutions to the questions.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and ilegal drugs, and at an early age, some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the cause and effects of widespread drug abuse by young people. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Nowadays, there's a problem in our socitie due to there are some drugs that are legal and other's don't. In history there are always been this kind of sustances but there were againt the law. The conflict is that allowing some , create an easy acces to it, speccially adolecents.

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People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people have different opinions on whether the youths should be allowed to drive a car. In my opinion, I strongly believe that children should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive.

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Nowadays the internet and smartphones are being used by public in order to transfer money to friends, family and businesses

Nowadays the internet and smartphones are being used by public in order to transfer money to friends, family and businesses. In my opinion this is one of the greatest development in human history, mainly because it was game changer for many banks.

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could this problem be solved?

It is a fact that fewer people want to become teachers. There can be several reasons that stand out and also few visible influences too. Both aspects will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

University is a place for the student who has been graduated from high school to gain further knowledge and education. While others may think that university is not always worth it to society. I personally do not agree with the people have that opinion to pursue young people to work as car mechanics or builders instead of going to university.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Zoos are the place for any types of animal that are shown for visitor which has purposes to entertain and educate for those who interested in. Zoos are build by approval of governments with aim to look after the forest habitat but other people think that government should take care of animal in their habitat instead of zoo. From my point of view, zoos have more a merit in protecting the animal than preserving the animal in origin habitat as they are not fully monitored by an institution of zoo.

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When the time comes to commence full-time employment, individuals who have graduated from university deserve a higher salary than those who have not. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the debate about how much payment should be given to the employee is becoming increasingly an argumentative issue. Some people said that workers, who have graduated from university, should gain a salary higher than employees,who are not. In this ,eassy I absutuerly agree with this statement because people who have a degree are guaranteed that they learnt and spent more money to have the degree.

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Many people working longer hours, leaving little time for leisure activities. What are the advantages and disadvantages..

Presently, during working hours it become challenging to find a break in-between a work in order to complete the target. More than 70% of employees from every field will extend their time and spending a few hours with family. Due to this various pros and cons are existing which is provided in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

There is no doubt that family is main reason of development and growth of any society.Health relations between indivduals will result in health productive community. Recently, The importance of family parties and the amount of money spended in these event has now become more controversial with many claim that it is worth spending while other reject this notion.This eassy will illustrates both sides and their supporting arguements.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures

Nowaday, with the development of the technology, people have more and more accesses to many music. Some people believe that music is beneficial to make people from various cultures and ages together. In my eyes, I totally agree this outlook.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often thought that reading stories in books more essential than watching TV or other playing games on technological devices. In my opinion, I strongly agree that reading stories in books is very beneficial for children.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the social concerns today relates to the nation’s development. While it is commonly suggested that economic progress is their most important goal, others believe that other types of progress are equally important for a country. In my opinion, every type must be considered.

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Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweight its disadvantages.

Health services has improved over the period of time and it is an important necessity for a person to live a happy life. Privatization of health care has helped to improve the quality and delivery of services to all people. Private companies have increased the cost of services gradually and this has created a financial burden for ordinary individuals. This eassy will discuss about advantages and disadvantages of privatization of health services.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

The use of mobile calls up is increasing dramatically worldwide. The majority of the young generation spends most second daily using handsets. This essay will discuss the cause of this situation and will elaborate on the negative impact of this situation.

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According to some people, it would be better if industries are established in regions outside the urban area. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

More and more people are advocating for shifting of industries from the city area to the outskirts of it since it is playing pivotal role in spreading pollution across the metro area. Relocating them to a remote place from the city has certain benefits along with few drawbacks. Both its pros and the cons are explained in the following paragraphs.

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Eating sweet sustenances produces corrosive in the mouth which can cause tooth rot.

Our body has a complex mechanism, anything in excess is harmful to the body.Having a sweet-tooth is not to worry about but consuming sweets very often may harm tooth since they contain many additives which have damaging effects.

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In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves? Give reasons for your answer.

In ancient ages,sports people mainly focuses to get a victory and make be world champions by breaking records but nowadays the trend of earning prize money and fame has been more popular. In this , essay i will discuss how this changing scenario will affect attitudes toward sports and what kind of messages will be delivered to the younger generations.

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