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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many young children are spending large amount of time in front of screens. What are the causes of this and what other problems does it lead to?

Nowadays, the vast majority of kids have an addiction of using their phones. This essay will elaborate the negative impacts of this habit and the reasons for this dilemma.

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Some people believe that sports is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

In this 21st century, doibg physical activities has become very essential part of human being's life. Few folks think that playing games should be a important part for students in their school life. Whereas, some believe that it should be a optional in schools. In this essay, I will discuss both sides as well as I will share my opinion.

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The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor pepople become poorer. What problems could this situation cause ? What are solutions to address thise problems?

It is true that the gap between the rich and the poor is growing wider in the world. While the problems that result are complex, fundamental solutions based on government and hiring departments should be adopted to tackle this problem.

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In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.

With the current technological era, urbanization has increased to the next level, ultimately resulting in concentrated facilities in cities. In this scenario, there is a view that young professionals should work in countryside areas to fill the gap, while the other perspective is there should be freedom to choose, where one wants to work. In my opinion, the choice of work should be according to personal interest instead of compulsion.

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The world has turned into a global village, where everyone is busy pursuing their dreams and building careers. They do not have time for having and raising children. In the past there were less opportunities for work, and society was focused towards having a family, that is why there was less difference

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Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views ad give your opinion.

The are an ongoing debate over whether testing medicines on animals is right thing to do or not. Some people claim that it is not ethically right to experiment with lives of the little ones, while others believe that it is the only way to ensure that medicine won't harm the consumer. This essay will elucidate both sides of this argument and provide a personal opinion.

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Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that his is improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many people are influenced towards money and property to live in society. Other people argued that this kind of living standard are improving our lives. In my opinion, both are important in their own structure . In this essay i would like to describe my view as worth considering.

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The death penalty should be abolished in all countries.Do you agree or disagree?

In morden era if the punishment globally stop punishing against all crimes.are you agree or disagree with above statement?

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The government should spend money in promoting sports and art in school, rather than sponsoring professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government ought to fund school sports and art, while others believe that professional sports and art competitions shoud be funded. I think that both sides have a merits and government should allocate funds according to the requirements either schools or community.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, you can travel to every corner of the earth by airplane. Sometimes this ways of travelling quite expensive, but it is less time consuming. However, i am totally disagree with the statement like air travel should be banned, although it is a main reason behind poppution and sort out if fuel. The main reasons with examples further elaborated in ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a burning topic is being discussed in between people that there are more benefits of financial aid or practicle g and advice from international organizations for under develeopment countries. While my notion is alligning with first statement but let's explore about both arguments.

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Some people think studenti should study the science of food and how to prepare it.Others thinks students should spend time on important subjects .Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is argued that food science and food preparation are crucial to learn, while others believe that focusing on the other important subjects is valuable. In this essay will discuss the both views and explain my perspective of this statement.

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Some people think that the Olympic Games are an exciting event and can promote the communication between different countries, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the Olympic games are not worthy, while others believe it is a best way to increase the communication among other countries. I think the Olympic games allow the country to make an identity worldwide and due to international relationships helps to gain some donations from the developed countries to make a good future of sports.

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Topic: Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Numerous amount of individuals are moving out from their town and even their countries to have different work experience. Some people argue is it worth it do get from your comfort zone for a job opportunity. In this essay I am going to discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of this.

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The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion problems in cities is to provide free bus service 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, nowadays there are more vehicles on the road than it is in the past, and this is the main cause of traffic. If I questioned, I strongly agree with this viewpoint as free transportation is not a reasonable solution. The reasons to support this with relevant examples are illustrated in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some argue that success in life is determind by where a person is born and how he or she grow up. Others believe that these factors have no effect on personal success. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, many of them believe that success of one individuals depends on their place of birth whereas one part of society think that there are no connections between your personal success and place of birth.This essay tend to discuss both the views with appropriate examples.

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Fast-paced modern lifestyles have led to people eating more and more fast food at the expense of more traditional meals. Do the advantages of eating more fast food outweigh the disadvantages?

The changeable contemporary environment leads to more consumption of junk food than local cuisine. Although it has several benefits such as convenience and less time,its drawbacks have a impact on health and the extinction of traditional meals. This essay will provide details about the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that parents play significant role to teach their children on how to function as dependable member of society, while other entrusts educational institution is the best place to play this role. Although the latter opinion is beneficial in some cases, I believe that household also have significant impact on children’s mindset and environment which is important element to develop them into prestige member of the society.

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Some people think schools should teach students to form good behaviour in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no deny that education sector is playing fundamental role in human life. Whereas many people have different outlook regarding that institutions must guide pupils about good manners and other courses as well. I am totally agreed by this statement, and this essay will elucidate some points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

There is an opinion that the printing industry could be in decline because of the popularity of electronic device. While lots of people switch to reading online, there are still individuals prefer their novels and journals in print. This essay will exam the prospect of printing business and provide author's opinion.

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