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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Crime has been rising amongst young population in many countries. Provide cause and solution.

Nowadays, in many parts of the world, adolescents tend to perform serious misconduct against the legislation. The lack of opportunity for further education after high school, which led to unemployment, may be a prominent reason behind the issue. Despite this, providing aid for further studies and training may help overcome the rise of crime rates among the youth. This essay will discuss aforementioned causes and solutions to the issue.

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What effects smoking has on human body? Should be banned in public places?

There is no doubt that smoking is hazardous to human body and can lead to various diseases. Moreover, there is a vast majority of people, who are of the opinion that smoking should be prohibited in public places. In my opinion, though smoking is harmful for human beings, still should be banned completely.

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Prison is the best way punishment. Do you agree or disagree?

Prison can never be a best way to punish.If you have to discipline someone and you decide to do it through other way,it can be accepted.being confined to a particular place would not totally work in all cases to show you do not agree with a partcular act.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has the technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In comparison to other global industries, the healthcare industry has one of the most complex infrastructures, with changing relationships between patients and clinicians therefore, there is a continuous demand to update health professionals' knowledge of healthcare quality and management so I had made my decision and spent two years studying hospitals administration academic diploma at KFS university.

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Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The enthusiastic life simulates the urban developments in building more public parks than shopping malls. I partly agree with this viewpoint for its benefit to citizen’s health, but it cannot be denied the revenues of shopping malls.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. with this view

Child care is considered as one of the most important as well as a complicated job for any parent. It involves a variety of factors such as understanding kids' behaviour, needs, wishes and so on. It is not a skill that generates instantly when one becomes a parent. I strongly believe that every parent must take a class which helps them to be good parents.

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Many Countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Migration from countryside to urban areas has been a popular phenomenon in many nations of the world for many years. There are some reasons and impacts on city’s residents which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ on whether children should be given homework. While there are strong arguments against this statement, I support the people who agree with homework.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowdays,human beings prefer different movie categories from comedy to paranormal activities.In several countries,books and serials that involve crime and drama are becoming more admirable compering to others.In this ,essay I will elaborate the reasons that made this phenomena happen and my opinion on it.

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Some people think happiness/emotional health is a way to have a good life. Others feel that Physicalhealth is a better way of having good live... Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a pervasive notion these days that it is crucial to be healthy in order to be fully happy with you life. While there is an opinion that phisical health importance prevails over the mental state, others claim that mental well-being is vital. In this essay, I will examine both views and give my opinion that both aspects are relevant for being completely satisatisfied with your health.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem

Recent advances in science and technology have contributed immensely to the development of the agricultural sector. H owever, that it h as been obse rved a larger percentage of the world population suffer from hunger. This is as a result of the lack of manpower and scarcity of farmlands for cultivation . ese along with solutions discussed in the will be next paragraphs.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotions and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products.

Huge companies have a lot of finances to promote their brand, therefore society tends to buy products from famous companies. There are many issues that this tendency could bring to us. In my opinion the most important are decreasing number of small and middle business companies and monopolization of global markets by a few corporations. In this essay I will explain my thoughts and provide relevant examples of them as well as propose some solutions.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Television is one of the best medium to influence youngsters to learn about outside world. It is believed, children learn much faster through the use of technology. However, in recent past, the content creators have resorted to showcase more voilence on television. Sparing the thought how regressively it may impact thought process of adolescents.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, time management skill has been highly requested in school and companies. With this ability people is free to choose different path but get the same result at the due date. It is agreed that students should be authorized to decide their own period to study and to play, being able to manage their time. Analysing the fact that students are the future workforce as well as that they need to learn to be independent will explain this.

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With the development of online media, there is no future for the radio. To what extent do you agree?

The widespread using of the Internet-based media might become a reason for radio’s dying.

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Do exams hold any value of a student’s intelligence? Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, many people claimed that tests are made to test your intelligence. But, actually, tests are made to test the abilities, not your brilliance and they don’t relate to your intelligence. I do not agree that exams show the value of a student’s intelligence. The word “intelligence” is from the Latin word “intellegere” ,which means “to understand”. But for a long time, people can define what is “intelligence”. In my opinion, intelligence is how much knowledge you have. The exams only test’s their memorization and it also depends on the examiner. Firstly, tests only show how well your teacher teaches you. For example, if you passed your test excellently and at the top, it means that your teacher taught you well and you understood better than others. There are 9 types of intelligence but they do not mention that intelligence depends on grades. Secondly, the words you write on papers at school do not help you in real life. The only way to measure how smart they are is how t...

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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The idea that, whether dwelling in horizontal areas or in vertical ones is more beneficial, remains a source of controversy. While some individuals say that they prefer living in horizontal central, I would argue that it would be better to reside in high-rise building areas. On the one hand, a horizontal city has its own notable merits. Firstly, the service expenditure in their accommodation is not as costly as in the vertical city. On account of the fact that the security charge or elevator fees will not be included if they reside in merely a double-storied building. Secondly, it is widely acknowledged that each person is capable of extricating easily from emergency cases such as fire, construction collapse and avoiding elevator accidents. Furthermore, the comfortable and roomy living space in vertical centrals makes a major contribution to render an enjoyable life that helps to release their stress and strain. On the other hand, I strongly believe that living in verti...

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a work place every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the pandemic outbreak of coronavirus, most of the workmen are unable to get back to offices and adopted a culture of working from home. I believe that this work from home environment benefits a lot of employees. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In few countries the existence and growth of supermarkets are posing a competition for several small, local enterprises. Some people consider that the loss of local businesses can bring severe impacts on local communities. In my opinion, I agree that the closure of local businesses can affect the livelihoods of local communities. However, I believe that supermarkets can support small businesses.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A vital aspect of every child’s growth is acquiring knowledge and it is thought that learning a new language is one of the most important issues. Some scientists recommend that children start learning a foreign language at primary school but as far as I am concerned teaching a new language at a very young age might not be as beneficial as they say.

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