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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays due to better internet facility, some people love to watch films at their home using advanced gadgets. While there is a group of people who thinks that in order to get the feel of a movie, cinema is the best option. In this letter, I will discuss both these views and then will share my opinion on this.

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City living 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

In the age of modernization and globalization, there are more and more people flocking to big cities, seeking for a more comfortable life. However, whether being a citizen is a good choice? This essay is aimed at discussing this question before giving an honest answer for it.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes may health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Sugar is the main ingredient which is contained in the various consumer’s goods, especially food and beverage. People believe that the high level of sugar cause the obesity and heart decease. In addition, they think that the best solution is to cut down the sugary consumption in term of increasing the price of sweets. I personally agree with these idea. This following paragraphs will discuss about how sugar affect to human’s health, and how to control it.

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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person's decision making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

With the pace of 21st-century technology is leapt to the level which was unimaginable few decades ago due to which People have many options in every field . Although Some people argue that aids have a strong effect on a person's choice while purchasing anything, others consider that there is negligible effect on their decision . I agree with those who claim that it affects little their commitment.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is noticeable that consuming fast food on a prolonged basis will develope various dieseaes. To tackle this problem, some countries plan to increase tax on fast food. However, higher tax would improve this situation or not.

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

There is now a proclivity in several cities to convert public places as parks into gardens, supporting the locals to plant fruit and vegetables. From my perspective, the merits are overshadowed by the demerits in this trend.

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Governments prohibiting the underage children for getting fulltime jobs in certain countries. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern society, Education and children are more and more essential for the development of the world in the future. Thus, I strongly agree with the statement that the government should impose a ban on hiring underage children for working.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, technology has improved rapidly. Such improvement brings positive and negative effects to humankind. According to some parties, the modern technology connects and gathers people. However, other parties believe that technology must be blamed to drive people apart. I will enunciate both views in the following paragraphs below.

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The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people believe that the efficient functioning of society relies on rules and laws, so the society would not operate well if the human were free to do whatever they wanted. But other people do not think so. From my standpoint, I reckon that society will not be operated if people were free to do whatever they wanted.

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Some people think its ok to benefit from animals, while others think they should not be exploited. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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It is said that travel broadens the mind. What can we learn by travelling to other countries? Should we first explore our own countries? What do you think?

In modern days, countries are now not bounded by borders, thanks to advanced technology and transportation. We now can easily learn more about other nations' culture by travelling abroad, for example. However, some people believe that exploring our own countries is top priority. In my opinion, learning about native countries is not a necessary thing in nowadays. This essay will discuss the reasons why we don't have to discover our countries anymore as well as the reasons and benefits of going to another nation.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Working is the main source to support financial aspect of each individual. Self-employed according to the majority is more better than under organization or company. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forward several disadvantages for this issue.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries especially in rich countries discuss ways to solve the problem provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, many governments budget money for the sports industry. Why do you think governments are funding sports so heavily? Do you think this is an appropriate investment?

It is true that many governments invest their money in the sports industry. While there are various reasons that the governments spend their budget, it is actually a positive development because sports can entertain people, encouraging their fitness and stimulate the economy.

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Technological improvement has made our life more comfortable than ever before. Some people argue that this is a positive trend, while others say that it is leading to a negative consequence. Discuss advantages and disadvantages, and then give your opinion.

Argument goes that people are getting more and more dependent on technology. Though the technological revolution has both advantages like advanced communication and automation, and disadvantages like cyber-crime and obesity, this essay considers this unprecedented innovation as a huge blessing for people. Followed by opinion of the essay, an illustration on both advantages and disadvantages of technological improvement is given below.

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Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitudes towards international tourism?

Due to the arising of globalization, the act of international traveling has become phenomenal and improved locals'lives; still, many in the argument of this had put their nation under not-positive effects. This essay will provide you with a multi-dimension view, a thorough judgment about the former-mentioned issue, alongside some measures to tackle the negative opinion about tourists from overseas.

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Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Food is essential for the functioning of various functions in the body. It is believed by humankind that receiving food from various regions should be restricted and should give importance to the own regional foods. This essay will argue with the statement and will deliver the views.

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In some rich countries, the number of children at secondary or high school who are the science subject is declining. What effect might this have on the children's and their countries future? How can children be encouraged to study science?

Education is one of the most crucial parts of people's lives. According to this, there are many factors that have led to decreasing in studying science. However, a number of solutions have also been put forward to inspired students to learn science. This essay will examine the effect that could occur and how children can be inspired.

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Some people think that the environment may be destroyed because of tourism. Others, however, believe that it is a way to preserve nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that the ecosystem might be annihilated by travelling, whereas others believe that it is an approach to natural safety. Although natural conservation can be justified for several reasons, I would agree that the tourists destroying the environment is of greater significance because of poor visitor awareness.

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The news media have too much influence on peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In todays era, advanced technology have too much effect on individuals life and it has nega influences. Although, mass media update people with every news, yet drawbacks cannot be ignored such as increasing violence.

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