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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern time, choosing the place to live plays a vital role in the life of everybody , especially young people. Somebody believed that metropolis are the suitable place to live whereas another disagree with this statement. It is the opinion of this writer that the latter choice is the best option.

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Many people believe that teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by several individuals that by the end of 2050, the classroom will not accommodate learners and tutors. Although I accept that online courses are making this trend real up to some extent, I disagree with this assumption of completely eradicating the existence of schools.

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An increasingly number of professionals , such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poorer countries yo work in developed countries . What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation ?

Nowadays, many professionals such as doctors or teachers prefer to live in developing countries so they leave their own home and country . In my ,opinion this is largely because of inexpensive payment and lack of modern work devices and the best solution lies in increasing employment and salary for professionals and creating a comfortable and well-equipped workplace.

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Part 1: The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the changes that will happen to the layout of the sports centre at the present time and how it will be redeveloped in future of a university.

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Rich country often gives money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore developed country should give other types of help to the poorer countries rather than financial aid. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Affluent counties frequently donate financial aid to underprivileged regions, however these efforts are futile. Consequently, there should be other kinds of asassistance rather than monetary help. I completely agree with this view as given money is wasted inappropriately and should be given in other forms.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the people who have the professional jobs like doctors, laywers, or engineers have to work only in the country where they have studied and others think that the professionals have the right to choose the country where they work.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the changes which took place in the public park, Grange Park, from 1920 to today.

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It is widely believed that parents should teach their children to be good members of society,but there is a strong

It is widely believed that parents should teach their children to be good members of society,but there is a strong argument among people that school is the right place to educate children.

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Nowadays an increasing number of people change their careers during their work life period. What are the reasons behind this trend? Is it a generally positive or negative development?

Having a successful career is very crucial for survival in this competitive world. The trend of changing job professions is becoming popular among people. High compeition in job market and high income are some of the causes. This essay will discuss how changing career is advantageous for society.

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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. your email Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In the email give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

I recently bought some apparel from your online store, and I am writing this email because of the unsatisfactory products that I received. I purchased a medium light blue sweater, two medium T-shirts and a pair of shoes.

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It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Nowadays there are more fathers stayed at the home to take care of children and women go out for thier work. some mankind belive that naurturing of child is duty of mother and fathers are not suitable for this job. I personally disagree with this notion as both parents are equally important to nurture a child. This essay will further elaborate my views.

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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, many people outlive for several years in contrast to the past. As a result of long living, the term of ageing population has been shown. Whilst many people see that the ageing population makes many problems and obstacles for the organizations, others think that there are advantages to the country for having like these elderly people. I absolutely agree with the pros of having old people.

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Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is assumed by a growing number of people that learning at home is more beneficial than studying in the classroom. I completely disagree with this view. Learning at school does not only develop social skills but also builds other features in the personality.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reason for this? What can be done to solve the problem.

Paying attention to lessons at school or focusing on certain subjects can be challenging to students due to many factors nowadays. As a matter of fact, old fashioned teaching methods and the duration of the lessons are the most significant reasons for interest lost in subjects, even for the whole concept of a school.

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Some people think children should attend extra classes after the school, while other disagree. Discuss both opinions and give your own view.

There is cut-throat competition in today's world. Everyone wants his child to be extraordinarily intelligent. So, they send their children to extra classes. But I believe if your child lacks in studies then only you send your child for tutions. Otherwise, let him spend his time in some other activities. In this ,essay we will discuss both the pros and cons of extra classes.

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It is strongly believed by some that it is aim of parents to upbring their offspring how to behave in society

It is strongly believed by some that it is aim of parents to upbring their offspring how to behave in society. Although, people who are against this opinion think that this process should happen in schools. This essay mostly tend to agree with the first statement. However, both points of views will be discussed.

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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the Countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that municipalities are the best places worth living, while others think that it is preferable to spend life in the surroundings. This writer will explore whether the former opinion is the best choice.

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Nowadays, there are so many professionals (like doctors and teachers) prefer to work overseas rather than in their own developing countries Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Whilst of many skilled people prefer to work in another country than their own country. Many professionals said that working in a foreign country is because they can get more money and higher equipment than in their country. This essay will explain this issue and I will give some suggestions for the government to come out of these problems.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.

Some people argue that science should necessary in our lives. because that provides more convenience and comfortable in our lives. I strongly believe that tech development will enhance our lifestyle.

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Some people think cities are the best place to live in. Others prefer to live in countryside. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In a state-of-the-art society, many individuals believe that metropolitans are the best place to dwell. while another is keen on living in rural field. This writer is inclined to support the idea that living in urban areas has plenty of benefits.

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