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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Everybody should stay at school until age 18 to what extent do you agree or disagree

Schooling is a part of every childrens' life to uplift knowledge and skills.However,It is argued that everybody should stay at school untilage 18.It is hard to disregard the topic.I partially agree with the given notion and further it will be discussed.

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Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impart on their development. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?

In the modern world, there have many causes why children are spending time with people lower than before ,and this action is very important for their growth and behavior. In my opinion, I think is negative for children. This essay will discuss about this situation.

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In many country today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime friction and TV crime dramas?

There is no denying the fact that nowadays crime stories and TV crime dramas are becoming more fameous in numerous countries. This essay will discuss the reasons behind why these books and TV shows are popular and express my opinion.

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People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live, rather than for their own benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes argued that each individual should take care of their physical condition instead of their own profits in order to take responsibility for a society. Personally, I completely agree that minding our own health to enhance the general public would be a good idea.

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More and more information about the lives of celebrities is found in newspaper, magazines, online. What is happening? what are disadvantages for reading public? Provide reasons for your anwer include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, information about lives style of superstar is being fasted access via media social and media print. Overall, this essay will proved statement about the drawbacks of social lifestyle of celebrities such as a high lifestyle and a lack of education.

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In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development.

In contemporary time, Western clothes such as suits, jeans are becoming more and more popular among the people rather than traditional costumes. There are several reasons leading to this evolution, this essay will discuss both positive and negative side of this trend.

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Some childeren spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many nations have been faced with this problem that the increasing use of smartphones in children activity. I personally disagree with the view and its influence the negative effects of the children who play with smartphones and will explore more of the bad effects of this situation.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays power, wealthvand money are notdivided equally among people. Because, Some laid-back individuals claim that we should be convinced of our possessions and professional statuse while some ambitious believe that by doing our best and working hard as much as possible we will have a more wealthy and pleasurable life. Also, I think so and in this essay, I will delve into these two attitudes.

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In many cities, the population is encouraged to use public transportation rather than private transport In your opinion, what are the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport?

Nowadays people are increasing transportation day by day either public or private moreover, some people believe that using metro in metropolitian city not only offer some fritful benefits but also offer worst impact in the people lives. In this essay, as per my perspective mass transit have huge pros than cons and i will describe in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers Why is it the case and what can be done to deal with this?

In numerous countries, the rate of juvenile delinquents is said to be increasing. The root cause of this is the lack of parental skills in educating children yet it can be tackled by the government conducting various courses for parents on how to nurture their children effectively.

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In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only. know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

earlier period, the number of individuals stayed at tiny villages where everybody knew each other. Total people stay in big cities where they are just acquainted with a number of individuals in their area. This trend includes both pros and cons, which will be discussed in this essay.

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The grwoth of online shopping will one day Lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?

All of the markets that in towns and cities will eventually be closed due to the growth of online shopping. In my opinion, many shops in urban areas will be closed but not all of it.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Taking adventure on some tasks, that people cannot achieve yet, is essential for maturing mental strengthens and elevating one's status in the area of expertise. Personally, based on the reason I will illustrate in the following paragraphs, I strongly insist that taking risk is beneficial to one's personal development.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates a project for the development of the southwest wing of an airport.

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People do not read newspapers anymore. Do you think its a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, most people quit reading newspapers and get used to using digital sources like websites. Personally, I strongly think it has positive effects for a variety of reasons.

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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a languange unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extent do you agree?

İt is known that if learn to new language fluent, this is so important is go to the country which is we want to learn their language. İt is so important to do practical, i strongly believe that it is possibile both. This essay i will expline learn to by with and without travel.

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Some people think that the inteernet has brought people closer togethert while others that people and communities are bbecome more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As a result of an increase in the access to the internet, the online communication become more popular. There are two opinions about this situation, some people consider it a good opportunity to keep in touch witch many people. However, another group see it as a cause of isolated communities. I am going to discuss both opinions and create my own.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays many first-tier universities around the World establish different entrance examinations or educational Olympiads in order to access the best of the best students to the courses. Such practice has both pros and cons, therefore all consequences in this essay are explained and supported with examples.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that change impact on people’s lives dramaticlly. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals like routine and stay in the same life pattern, there is also an argument that people prefer change and try a new thing every time.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities throughout the world involves enormous expenditure. This money would bring more benefits if it was used to provide new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Renovation is one of the major needs of every country's government.In the major cities, there are more old buildings,however, there is an argument about restoring that waste money that had to spend on new houses and a transport system.I partially agree with this statement.

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