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This letter your work officce does not have any cafteria for staff.

I hope this letter is for you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing this letter with the crucial purpose of complaining, about I work office does not have any cafeteria for staff. I ask you to organize a cafeteria.
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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What do you think are the causes of this development and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Nowadays, in several countries, the majority of the traditional ceremonies have not been paid attention to by individuals. This issue has two main reasons, so in the following, I will discuss ways that can help us avoid the disappearance of many important celebrations.
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More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is negative or positive development?

Lots of individuals these days reside in small space home or dwells with no outdoor area. In my opinion this is an negative development. living in small space leads to congestiona and invite health problems like breathing disorder, irritability and so onas there is no air or ventilation . life also become tedious if humans lives in these area.
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Some people think watching TV and films makes children more creative. Others think that it can actually lower their creativity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought that watching TV and films makes children more creative. Some people argue that it can actually lower their creativity. In my point of view, I partly agree with this phenomenon.
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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages shouldn’t be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, many countries rely heavily on tourism as a primary source of their income, however, its drawbacks ought not to be underestimated. I am firmly convinced that tourism can cause an imlicit threat to tourist attractions and their environment as well as economic vulnerability to it.
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The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the social media it is the most popular things to communicate through Internet nowadays. However, majority of people replace it to face-to-face contact in everyday life. I am completely convinced that the advantages of this outweigh its disadvatages. The main benefit os this is
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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

One of the discussed issues nowadays is that the students that choose science lessons are not enough. It is undeniable that science become an essential part of our life. In this essay, I will explain some reasons and effects on society.
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Some people believe that parents should limit their children hours of watching tv and playing computer games, but encourage to read books. Do you agree or disagree

Reading books now has a declining trend while there are sharp increase among children playing computer games or watching TV. Several reason might be that reading a book would require patient and slower time to get the reward (such as the conflict resolution or getting the answer that book has offered), on the other hand such computer games offer fastest reward through solving serial mini-task troughout the game. As a gen-Z, I still agree with previous generation that children should read more book, while also concentiously limit their screen time. Here is some point of view I had regarding this topic.
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As water is a valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Water is the most important element in our life. Ministry of water and enviroment globally have to control how the people consume water. I strongly agree with this statement.
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Nowadays, human impact animal enviroment by bad practices. Therefore, some animals like tiger and rhino are in danger of disappearing. Accordingly, government should implement rules that improve and educate the society to safe animal life.

Nowadays, human impact animal enviroment by bad practices. Therefore, some animals like tiger and rhino are in danger of disappearing. Accordingly, government should implement rules that improve and educate the society to safe animal life.
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If a product is good can meet people's needs, people will buy it. Advertisement in the media is no more than form of entertainment. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?

Nowadays, advertisement is one of the main companies' instruments to show consumers that a product is good or useful. However, some people consider that it is no more than just a usual entertainment which media use to fill the TV time. In my opinion, advertising is very important and plays a crucial role in the modern market and, in this essay, I am going to prove it with several arguments.
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Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social and working needs. However, unlimited use of cars causes a number of problems. What are some of these problems? What can be done to reduce the use of them?

During the last few decades cars have become extremely popular and made people’s lives much more comfortable. However, oversupply of vehicles may cause some certain problems and, in this essay, I am going to write about these issues and try to offer appropriate solutions. In addition, I am going to offer one of the possible ways how to reduce a number of transports.
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. anlar topic EXAMPLE Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the Fast food disadvantages?

After time all cars, buses and trucks will be driver machines, into the transport will be travellers , this news shocked the population, because this system will raise unemployment, and the job chances will be reduced. On the other hand, they depend on tools that provides comfort for the driver. In my opinion, development is beneficial but not always, because opportunities for work in the future will be very less.
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Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays pepole are more serious for health and many governments are taking on this first priorities than other things. This essay, I am going with formal views, It is help to provide the healthy life to people.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outwiegh the disadvantages?

Some researchers have an opinion that it is better for children to study foreign languages at primary schools as it promotes learning abilities and elevates the personality of children. whereas teaching them a foreign language in high school will create challenges for them in learning and may prove detrimental to their personality development.
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With traffic jams and pollution increasing every year in big cities, some people say that public transport should be free in big cities to help reduce these problems which are caused by cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I strongly, agree that public transport should be free in big cities which can help in reducing pollution because most pollution is caused due to cars.
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Some people believe that the government should provide free education at all levels. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In contemporary society, the cost of learning at a desired level is getting more over-priced. So, it is unaffordable for the majority of people to discover at their level. There is a gigantic belief that the government should propose a free education to learn at any level. I strongly believe that the government should organize schools or organizations for people to learn, although they have financial problems.
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Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others think the opposite is happening. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays quaility and type of technologies are increasing. However, it can birth problem that between the poor public and the rich people. This essay will discuss about both side of this situation.
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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives so then it is a waste of time to read news paper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays news is a great source of information, some people would say it's a waste of time to consume media like newspaper and television. there are two issues to be dealt with one is that news may be fake or untrustworthy, and the other is that news may be outdated and just not relevant.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many ideas for what is the main environment problem of our time. Some people say that the main environmental problem in this period is the moss of particular species of plants and animals. While others believe that there are more important environmental problems.
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