IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 633

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people think that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it

In certain part of the world, people prefer to buy a home rather than rent it. I inclined to believe that owning a place to live in is the most important part of life.

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many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement or not?

many people said that it is prefer owning their home to renting it. The writer disagrees with this statement and will explain why in the following essay.

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The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

In last 50 years technology has been increasing crucially as well as it connect with every human day to day life. While some of these trend have been pros, other one has been drawbacks. In this essay, i will examine both views and explain why I feel that technology makes our life easily and industrialized rather than difficulty.

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Formal examination has become the most common way to assessing a student's performance. Do you think it's a positive or negative development, in your view?

A Formal examination is utilized by various educational institutions to access the calibre of students and assign them a performance grade. Although, it's a traditional but it is the most acceptable approach in schools and colleges. I agree with the view of conducting formal examinations.

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many people hold the view that it is better buy their home than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

People nowadays believe that there is better to buy their house than rent it. I agree with this opportunity for two reasons. The first house is a property which can be leased for the next generation and improve personal income. The second reason is home is the place where we have time for family and have a plenty of memories in our whole life. The writer will explain more following this statement.

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many people hold the wiew that it is better to buy their hơm rather than rent it. do you agree with this statement or not?

It is often said that their own properties such as home is more convenient than hire one. It is opinion of this writer that rent houses never be great as buy home and will give more detail for the choice in next paragraph.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles . Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time . Dicuss two views and give your opinion .

It is often said that it is necessary to use free time for hobbies that enhance genius , for instance doing puzzles and reading books . Others believe that relaxing the intellect during leisure activities is more important . This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and conclude that the former choice is the best option .

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in the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passedengers

All kinds of transportation such as cars, buses and trucks will have the technology of driverless vehicles in the future. Individuals will not have the option of driving while using it on their transport. I believe this will have less chances to be a good option for people. New technology will cause many problems in terms of the environmental sector and government spending will be affected by that.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

It is held a view that buying a home is better than rent it. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because it not only provides financial security and stability, but it also offers the ability to enjoy the independence and convenience of a comfortable lifestyle.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy thier home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

Many individuals have their opinion that purchasing homes instead of renting accommodations. I totally agree with this statement.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather they rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not ?

There are many individual’s point of views that is more suitable to purchase homes instead of renting them. The writing totally agrees with that statement which will be discussed through this essay.

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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. 1.describe what this book was about 2.explain how this book influenced you 3.say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

I would lıke to talk about the most influenced to me book. its called What Men Live By by the Tolstoy.

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Some people think that it is better to take part in team sports, while others believe that individual sports are better. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that sports are very important in our lives ,whether played in a team or individually.While it is a commonly held belief that playing in a team is better,there is also an argument that individual sports are better.This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Question: Traffic congestion in many cities in the world makes it difficult for people to get in and out of cities, and to move around inside them. Why do you think this is happening? What could be done to solve these problems?

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Nowadays families are not close as they used to What the cause and how to solve this problem

Familiy bond has become less strong not like before which people are familiar with each other and participate all their days. In this essay I will discuss the reasons and solutions for this problems.

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Some feel that government should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Health preservation plays a vital role in human life and the government should take it into consideration. It is argued by some people's health protection is more important than other aspects. While I firmly believe that there are several sectors such as environmental conservation and education which are a mutual effect on each other as the government keep the same balance among them.

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Men occupy most of the top-level jobs. Should government reserve more jobs for women? Give your opinion.

Our society seems to be a bit biased on the topic of providing top jobs to women. Though we pretend to show equal rights to women still trends tell a different story. let's discuss further to find out the best possible solution along with my opinion.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is not fair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern world, it has become allocating exceptional budgets for athletes around the world are extraordinary. While some people believe that it is important to appreciate successful players, others argue that there are other professions that have paramount importance and should gain better salaries than athletes. This essay will discuss both views and I am against the view that spending considerable amounts for sports players.

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Should parents be obliged to immunize thier children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

As medical science advances, many countries have mandated infants and young children to be vaccinated in order to have immunity against certain diseases. On the other hand, there is minority voice advocating for parents to have the rights to decide if their children will receive vaccination. Personally, I believe in parents should be in the driving seat when it comes to getting their children vaccinated.

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some people think that the developments involving the internet have brought people closer together. while others think that people and communities have become more isolated Discuss both views and give your opinion

At Present, social media have asiginifant influence on our daily life, while some people view that internet have led to more connected communities and became a pivotal factor in social interaction. Other people argue that internet is the reason of people’s solitary amonge the communities. This essay will discuss both points of view, and argue in favour of the former.

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