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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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courses in music and art should be compulsory for student in high school. Do you agree or disagree with the idea?

The phenomenon of playing musical instruments and drawing should be taught as a necessary subject in high school has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I disagree that increasing more compulsory subjects for students.

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Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students, but it also ha a significant number of disadvantages. Discuss both sides of the arguments and give opinion.

In this contemporary era,it is undoubtedly true that nowadays a number of class have the chance to application in foreign countries although some learners will get some advantages and drawbacks to studying in a different nations.However,this essay will further elaborate on reasons for the same in upcoming paragraphs.Which will lead to a logical conclusion.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ART (EX. PAINTING, MUSIC, POETRY, ETC.) CAN BE MADE BY EVERYONE WHEREAS OTHERS BELIEVE THAT IT CAN ONLY BE MADE BY THOSE WITH SPECIAL ABILITY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Art is very important to our society for a long time ago. It's already there in our culture before we are even born. In this essay. I will talk about my views and opinion on this matter.

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Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past. Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

There is no doubt that written language is nowadays permeated into by such an enormous number of non-formal words. While some people argue that the heedless of using language would bring extremely terrible consequences, there are those who fervently believe that this trend would be of tremendous convenience. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate how it is unwise to overlook the benefits of the way people using language formally and the dark side of the discussion topic.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

There are many numbers of people living in a house by renting these days all over the world. I prefer borrowing the house because it has some good merits for saving big money than buying a house. But also there are several demerits of this subject. In this essay, I will discuss benefits and analyse the reason of the importance of renting houses adding some negative points also.

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Art considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate and turn their focus to science and technology. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the art?

It is certainly true that with the proliferation of high-tech media, society wants to learn more about technology. Some humans hold the opinion that art plays an important to show the culture of a number of countries all over the world , but nowadays citizens are paying attention to science and automation instead of art. This essay will substantiate reasons for this change in society as well as solutions to encourage more folk towards arts.

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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

Nowadays,a high number of people use the best of technologies such as computers,laptops and telephones at home for work and exac‌tly business.I think although this telecommunication is harmful to our health,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for the below reasons.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion

Museum is built to deliver knowledge and information, however, it is argued that it should be entertaining or educational. In my opinion, it might need both of them.

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Machines have taken over domestic jobs that used to be done by hand. What are the advantages and disadvantage of this? Give examples from your own experience.

In this era, the expansion of technology has made our life easier and more comfortable. There are so many technologies in various sectors, this essay will try to elaborate about the advantages and disadvantages about using technology in our home.

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Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company. To what extent do you agree?

Both charts depict a total time for internal training courses of a financial company in hours per year, as well as a survey for its feedback that is shown in percentage.

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forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diaphragm represents information about the amount of forested land in millions of hectares in particular parts of the earth. Looking from an overall perspective, there are three main trends, turning to data about Africa and South America there is a downward trend, while in Europe and ,Asia the opposite pattern is saw. In North America and Oceania, despite small fluctuations during the time of an investigation, the figures remain stable.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities ( for example , helping at home or at work ) Others believe that outside of school children should be free to enjoy their lives . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that all offspring encourage additional responsibilities . For instance, apartment cleaning and other works. But others don't agree sentence , oppositely , they claim that chiildren shuold be independent.

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Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by book reading. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people who have children feel that watching tv and playing computer games must be prohibited for their children while encouraging them to read a lot of books. This essays disagrees with this statement, and will try to explain more about the reason.

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In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large number of students ,but now with the development of the technology for education many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. Agree or disagree

In today's perpetually transforming epoch. Education is an essential thing for people's bright future. However, in the past, teachers prefer to a lecture in Big crow, but now due to technological improvements in education. Few mankind proclaims that there is not any justification for joining classes. Are you shall give some disagreement view in forthcoming

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

Evaluating students is one of the most important criteria of teaching and learning. In the past, continual assessments are the most effective part of the evaluation process of students. However, the ever-increasing tendency of taking exams sometimes surpasses the popularity of continual assessment. The exam has both benefits and drawbacks and this essay will explore both side.

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As well as money, social responsibilities should consider in business. Do you agree?

Several companies now they are required personal information when applicants fill in the application. some people believe that this isn't necessary , on the other hand, it is helpful to hire the right candidates.

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Defrostation is a serious problem facing our environment nowadays,discuss its causes and solutions suggested for this problem.

These days many country had a pollution in their city, not only that in the countryside is also get a trouble in defrostation. Government has very huge role in decition of regulation on it. This problem will discus on causes and solution.

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The unlimited use of cars may causes many problems. What are those? Solution?

Impact of media influence affecting health behaviours and violence for example (A pornographic site) is a website with pornographic video or image content. Talking to strangers through chat programs, which can result in harm and sexual violence ranging from being seduced to being raped or subjected to robbery, (propaganda), in which the website will market a variety of goods such as cosmetics, food supplements and computer equipment using exaggerated advertising messages to persuade customers Including those who play violent computer games often mistaken for agility training. contributing to the usage of violence in daily life. Create strategies for battling, pursuing, trouncing, attacking, and murdering one another using a variety of techniques and weapons. even if it's a game-related action that isn't an actual action. However, if the behaviour is frequently repeated, it will result in the daily absorption of violence into the mind. which will make athlete's combative Behavior shi...

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicine intended for human use , while other argue that it is cruel to do that . Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

In today's perpetually transforming epoch. The using of antibiotic has been increased around the world. However, humankind proclaim that it is vital to use animals for testing vaccines and other medical products and then use on people. While other assert that it is very wrong for animals. I will discuss the both view and then give my opinion in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, a lot of parents have worked for a long time on work and did not have any time to accompany their children. Consequently, many younger ones had negative behaviours to have. Therefore, I strongly believe that parental guidance should need to run for all parents participating. This essay will expound on my views and supply some examples.

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