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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Human activities can be split into two main categories, one is what is beneficial with positive impact and the other which has a negative impact, especially on plants and animals.

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Some people think that it's good for a country's culture if people watch some imported film or TV programs while some people argue that it could be better if people watch films of their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Watching TV programs and films is a kind of thriller for each one of us, however some folks tend to watch local drama and TV shows, others would prefer watching imported films, I would support the second trend for numerous reasons. In this essay, I am going to discuss these two viewpoints and explain mine.

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What is your favorite activity? Why do you like this activity? The last time that you did this activity?

In the last year, my favourite activity was playing a famous mobile game called Pubg. I used to play this game every day for four years without being interrupted. I made friends by it from all around the Middle East. we used to talk, made short videos, play and do activities with a group of people we were not known them. Pubg it's a common game that anyone can involved in easily, while it's not the only game but it is the most popular war game in the App store and google store. Also, I was pleased to watch the challenges matches and championships through YouTube and Facebook Live. It was one of my hobbies that I admired, it made me feel enthusiastic and higher my adrenaline. It was incredible and takes all your attention to get the win, I stopped playing Pubg since I changed my phone, and then my goals changed actually. I stark to make my whole focus into something that could be useful for me in future. So I am about a year didn’t play Pubg, and this is was my favourite activity.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

There are several institutions very precise about their uniforms and aspects of their learners. On the other hand, other schools which are most likely private ones are flexible in terms of appearance. In my opinion, attiring uniforms for pupils has benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, because of competition in sense of everything, parents teach their childs to be more competive, while others think that kids should know how to cooperate with others.

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People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recent years,many family structure has changed into nuclear family the role division of the family also have a change.In my perspective I don’t think these changes are positive since it will affect the Kiel’s growth .

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Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous if government forbid the sale of bottled water. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that this trend has many drawbacks.

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n most parts of the world people are living longer. What are the possible causes of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?

People tend to live longer in most parts of the world. Prolonged life is directly related to a healthy lifestyle. Another significant role is played by new inventions and research in the field of medicine and technology. No doubt, these innovations helped many people in living a sustainable healthy life by finding cures for many diseases whereas, vaccines are considered as true lifesavers by some people. However, there are many advantages of living a longer life but the disadvantages outweigh them. In this essay, I will highlight some of the cons of longer living.

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Many parents believe that children should attend extra classes after school hours while some disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is every parents dream to see their children excel in their academics, and therefore some parents resort to having their children attend classes after school hours. This seems to be a solution especially to those students who are slow learners. Secondly, this could be helpful in helping these learners revise their work.One the other hand this could be exhausting to the children, and there will be no time for other extracurricular activities. In my opinion I believe allowing time for extra classes after school hours could bring more harm than good.

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Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

Patriotisim is a power which keeps people united and peacefull. However, these days citiezens tend to question patriotism. Is this love for the country is always a positive aspect, but maybe it will bring more trouble than help? In this essay I will dvelve in this topic uncovering advanteges and disadvantages of patriotism.

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Some People Think That It Is A Waste Of Time For High School Students To Study Literature To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon of more and more high school students consider Literature not suitable for the modern world has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I totally agree that studying Literature is completely useless to young folks.

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Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as the resources are limited. While others think we can use as much as we want. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays humanity faced a lot of environmental problems as a result of technological and industrial development. One of such problems is the fresh water shortage.

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet, has made it possible for many people to work from their home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Modern technology plays a vital role in people's lives. At the present time, many people work online without the need to leave their homes, In this essay, I will outline both upsides and downsides of the online approach.

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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Over the last few ,decades there have been a significant changes in the world. In the modern era, some are thinking that parents should teach the rule to the children, that control the problem created by them. To some extent it is right, but too much control might irritate the youngsters. Therefore, following this essay will explain my viewpoint in detail and will reach to a proper conclusion.

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People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than those who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people argue that creativity is one of the most crucial qualities which could be gained. It is said that only extraordinary humans could lead the world. In fact, people having original ideas are generally more valued than people who are able to copy well. However, sometimes stolen innovations could be realized much better than initial versions.

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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

some people believe that elderly people have more experience about living life. While others claim that having living life experience is not the only thing required in the modern world. I partially disagree with the statement that we should not follow older generation ideas,the analysis contained within the following paragraphs of the essay will contain the reasons to follow ideas and not follow them.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports eventsis a good for the country while some people think it's bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The debate on whether it's good for a country to host an international sports event is good for a country or not. I believe that there are numerous beneficial outcomes that could come from such activities. For instance, economical growths, state of the art roads and stadium. On the other hand, those who don't agree, believe that it will bring scrutiny from bad press which will overshadow the main event and Also, redundant structures left behind after the main event.

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Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Discuss both views and express your support.

“A proper residence selection is one of the toughest decisions among the university students,” asserted the minister of education in an interview. Whether a person prefers living in a dormitory or a house in the town, there are several positive aspects for each of these choices. In what follows, the advantages of both of these choices will be elaborated on.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. Why do you think this is, and how can they be encouraged to study? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a common case that lots of young people hang out with their old pals or classmates outside and do other intriguing things rather than learn something after leaving school, which leads to influence their personal development and career path in the future.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialised facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is a common practice in some countries to build specialised facilities for the purpose of training top athletes, rather than providing sports facilities that are accessible to everyone. The question is whether this is a positive or negative development.

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