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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that hosting an international sports eventsis a good for the country while some people think it's bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The debate on whether it's good for a country to host an international sports event is good for a country or not. I believe that there are numerous beneficial outcomes that could come from such activities. For instance, economical growths, state of the art roads and stadium. On the other hand, those who don't agree, believe that it will bring scrutiny from bad press which will overshadow the main event and Also, redundant structures left behind after the main event.

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Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Discuss both views and express your support.

“A proper residence selection is one of the toughest decisions among the university students,” asserted the minister of education in an interview. Whether a person prefers living in a dormitory or a house in the town, there are several positive aspects for each of these choices. In what follows, the advantages of both of these choices will be elaborated on.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. Why do you think this is, and how can they be encouraged to study? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a common case that lots of young people hang out with their old pals or classmates outside and do other intriguing things rather than learn something after leaving school, which leads to influence their personal development and career path in the future.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialised facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is a common practice in some countries to build specialised facilities for the purpose of training top athletes, rather than providing sports facilities that are accessible to everyone. The question is whether this is a positive or negative development.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment ) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children as part of milestones of human development have a great tendency of improving not only their cognitive development but also emotional development. That is an inevitable process that happens in their life because at that moment children tend to be more curious. Some people say that letting children make their own wishes on a daily basis such as edible material, attire, and amusement activities is more than likely to become selfish when considering their preferences. However,others assume that it is really important for children to start independent stuff based on their choices. I would like to explain more on both views and make the following reasons that are connected with those views.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How this problem can be overcome?

An increasing number of individuals have been having difficulty keeping equal jobs and alternative parts of their lives since the 21st century began. A primary reason why social phenomena are continuously existing is fierce competition currently. In my view, social media and ordinary people are mainly responsible to address these modern issues.

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At present time , employees fail to communicate or to maintain synergy in work place due to theoretical knowledge in educational institutions. To what extent do you agree ?

In today's world, many employees fail to communicate or to maintain synergy in work place as they lack these skills. Dependency on theoretical knowledge instead of obtaining practical knowledge in educational institutions can be identified as one of the major cause of this problem.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries were used to donate a charitable sum of money to poorer countries but it does not resolve the poverty issue. There are other means to reach out a helping hand aside from financial aid support. Therefore, I extremely agree on the same view.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals believe that newspapers are a great source of learning. However, some others claim that the internet is a great innovation of gather information. In my own point of view, The latter reason is more reliable. This essay will further elaborate on both notions with a logical Conclusion.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Retirement age has been a controversial topic in the last 10 years because of differences between sex genders (women retire before men), differences in type of works and people with special health conditions.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education plays a significant role in a kid's life. As some argue that home faculty is the best option for learners' growth whereas some disagree on the same. I will discuss both views points in this essay.

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many people like having a fixed daily routine, while other people enjoy a change in their life. mention both views and write your opinion.

In the contemporary world there are two ways of doing things one having a fixed schedule of doing things and the other having no definite routine in life. In this essay we shall look in to both the sides and analyse why having a day to day planning is important than not having any plan.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nobody would dispute the fact that some teenagers spend most of their leisure time on their gadgets, and their behaviours no doubt influenced due to some reasons. In my opinion, while smart devices could provide benefits to our life, I believe it is prominent not to overuse it.

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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

School leavers are facing difficult choices after graduating.

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The information about the number of men and women working in 6 sectors in Freedonia in 1975 and 1995 is depicted by the graph.

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Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views, and give your own opinion.

In the current generation, most people like to have a variety of pets in their homes.Especially, children fond of their pet animals and they will spend most of their time with their pets some people avoid having a pet in the house.It is not necessary to grow pets in their home and this is fully based on their needs and desire.Let us discuss about these both views and my opinion in that essay.

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Nowadays in many countries the proportion of older population is higher that of younger people. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people argue that older population is most popular that younger people. The positive impact for the the country is lots of experience, while the negative impact is lack of power for doing some activities.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast transport for cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Certain people in some nation have the view that it is important to invest huge amount of money on building new railway tracks for quick transport for towns. Some perceive the capital should be used to better the already existing public transport.

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Human society has made great technological progress in the last 100 years. Some people think this also has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

During the last century the way we live changed a lot, this is partially due to all the new inventions and discoverings. However, it is common thought that not every progress made has actually improven our day to day life, moreover some devolpment even made things worse. I am a firm supporter of change and I actually believe that going forward in time we as humans tend to make the world a overall better place, for example, elevating life standars or finding new energy sources .

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People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that governments should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more and wider roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

there are several perspectives to solve traffic ,especially in huge cities. some people have this viewpoint that the government must develop public transportation such as the train and subway lines. in contrast, other groups think if the state increase the figure of bigger roads will be able to decline traffics.

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