IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 685

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many working people get little or no exercise either

A large number of people do not exercise enough or do not exercise at all in their work and even in their free time and that results in getting health problems . These days a lot of people are following the sedentary lifestyle where they depend on technology to get them whatever they want . The government should organise different kinds of competitions that require movement and reward the winner with amount of money .

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Recently, some companies assert that their products which they produce, are totally modern and beneficial. As far as I am concerned, drawbacks outweigh benefits which I will demonstrate in the following essay.

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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

Where planned trips to remote areas and communities can be positive or negative is a controversial issue. From my point of view, these tours can improve both the financial and social state of rural residents whereas city dwellers may have a chance to spend some quality time in a fresh and clean environment, which in turn can lead to higher levers of appreciation and respect for nature.

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In many contries, shopping onlines is replacing shopping at stores. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

The majority of nations prefer online buying rather than shopping offline. E-commerce is convenient and favorable. But there are drawbacks to be considered.

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, some parents demand their children work hard on their studies. These days` youngsters lack spare time and are under a myriad of control to be responsible for their studies. The problem of this issue and appropriate solutions will be provided in the following essay.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

University education is the key to getting a good job, while others believe that it is more useful to have experiences and soft skills. In my opinion, university education plays an important role in academic jobs, besides, experience and soft skills are also the same useful in our business.

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Some people think that robot technology is very important for our future. Others believe that robots are a dangerous invention and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While the bar chart provides information about the revenue of five different exporting items in 2015 and in 2016, the table depicts the variations of the proportion in five categories from 2015 and 2016.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the child’s education while others argue it is not so. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and opine

It is often argued by a substantial proportion of individuals think that competitive recreations have many positive effects on children's education. However, others believe that it is not good for toddlers. This essay will discuss both views as far as I am in the favour of former notion.

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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the Literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and History of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to ,some it is more vital that children learn their own country’s literature and history rather than that of the world. I strongly disagree that world history and literature weigh far less then one single country. On the one hand, it is crucial that people should be aware of their nation’s past and literature. This contributes a great margin of help the youth plan their future correctly. Particularly, knowing the consequences of the mistakes made by their ancestors, they could try to take the right action. If they are limited with the knowledge of their own history, they may feel like an outsider in their native land. Moreover, if they are not familiar with their the literature they might miss out on the rich and ever-developing culture. On the other hand, as world literature and history widen one’s horizon it is important to be aware of them. Reading books written by international authors forces the reader to think from multiple perspective...

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Some people think that wild animals should not be keept in zoos. Others people believe that therebare good reason for having zoos

Some individuals trust that animals are safe in a zoo because they were protected from many diseases and prey from other animals. On the other hand,most citizens believe that it was totally wrong to hold wild animals in zoos. I will discuss relevant reasons in the upcoming paragraph.

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. . explain why you would like the job . give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ . say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

I am writing in regard to a post that you published in the "Daily Life" magazine one week ago. I would love to be considered for the position you are looking to fill because I adore working with kids. Back in Argentina, I spent almost every day going to my sister's house and helping her to take care of my niece. I also consider that Australia has a lot of beautiful outdoor spaces, which I love to go and visit with your kid.

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The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages and disadvantages of convenience food?

Nearly every field of the world we live in,has evolved to a modren form.Convenience food is one such product of modernized food industry,and its advantages and disadvantages are usually debated.The benefits include time saving,while the drawbacks are health hazards and people turning away from organic food.

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Nowadays, some people like to give help to the local community. Other people prefer to give money to national and international organizations. Discuss both methods and give your own opinion on which is better.

Nowadays people like to help the local community and it has proved to become helpful for the pupils who do not have the basic shelter, food to eat. we will discussing about recieveing the help from local community and some prefer to give there money to national and international organisations.

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There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this perpetually transforming epoch, several inventions helps human being to evolve with passing time such as wheel.A fraction of individuals opine that internet is the most meaningful innovative thing made by humans.I completely disagree with above notions.In the forthcoming paragraphs i have elobareted such reasons regarding this issue.

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Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views.

Everyone wants to know about the real life of a public figure, hence, keeps them interested to read a related piece of work in a newspaper or on a tv channel about them, which ultimately results in a higher rating of these sources. However, a category of society believes that it is unethical to reveal their personal details in public, as it is annoying for them. Permission may be granted after careful consideration of the pros and cons of both views which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views

Although some individuals believe that the media have the right to print people's private life, this essay believes that citizens have the right to have a private life to have a healthy way of living and they need stronger regulations to protect people's privacy.

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Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children. Others believe that the media is a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that parents influence the behaviour of their children, while others suggest that media have a big impact on their development characters. In my opinion, I partially agree with both points of view because each factor participates in developing the personality of children.

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Some people think it's better ro choose friends who always

Some people argue that it's better to have friends who always agree with their opinion while others think that it's great to have friends who don't always agree with them . Some people believe that it's better that friends always agree with their opinions on the other hand some of them argue that it's better to have friends who don't always agree with their opinions. I think that having friends Who have the same opinions as mine means That Our personalities are similar which is an awesome thing because of that we can rely more on each other and understand is an each other better.Some people argue that it's better to have friends who always agree with you . people like to talk to others who have a different mind of them due to the fact that they can share different thoughts and understand that every person has a different way of seeing things . For ,example a friend of mine has almost the opposite opinions of mine and that always makes me very amazed about her way of thinking thus I ...

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The three pictures below show three different kinds of bridges. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given images illustrate three distinct types of overpasses, namely arch, concrete girder and suspension.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some parts of the world it is oftenly argued that buying a home is more important than renting a home. While there are several justifiable reasons for this decision, it can not be underestimated the benefits of buying a property over the renting one.

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