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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Why?

It is an undeniable fact that the adoption of fossil efficiency is increasing over time in the world. This situation would bring a negative situation to the people and environment, unless renewable origin, such as air and solar resources, are promoted. However, the improvement of alternative efficiency would definitely have several merits which will be elaborated on this essay.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Immersing into our modern era, office rooms are slipped into distinctive departments, substituted open- space style dominantly. In general, the cornerstone of this statement reforms almost the prior hazards.

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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

The emergence of the internet in the world's civilization has resulted to convenient ways of doing business and communication.No doubt the internet is one of the magnificent innovations that mankind has managed to come up with regardless of its demerits in certain areas of operation.

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The information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries

The given table elaborates on the indicators of the Canadian, German and British populace aged 65 and over from 1998 and projected figures for 2030.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothing. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, there is a substantial data that teenagers tend to commit offences in the different countries. The reasons of their behaviour can be various. In this essay, the most probable motives will be discussed and explained.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town adn cities closing . do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, digital sales is a global trend growing day by day. Many people think that online shopping increase will end up in the shutdown of stores in the community and cities. I personally do not agree with this idea because some men and women might prefer buying in a physical store, meanwhile, other individuals enjoy having the opportunity to buy through a website.

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one problem faced by almost every city is traffic congestion. what do you think the cuses are? what solutions can you suggest?

Undoubtedly, with the advancement in technology the transportation increasing day by day which is main reason of traffic and some rules can reduce it to some level. In this essay we will discuss other reasons of this problem with relevant solution.

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The improvements in technology currently bring about harmful effects on the environment. While some people believe having simpler lives is the only solution, I would argue that technological advances can help to tackle these environmental problems.

In These days technology is reached skys and improved the complete human lifestyle in history, however development in tech has lead to harmful effects on the ecosystem and people's health, In my ,opinion there are more of disadvantages than advantages to the environment to improving automation.

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Many peopl work for long hours ,leaving very little time

These days working for long hours has been a major issue for people due to the fact that they have little time to do leisure activities .Working for long hours has many disadvantages and advantages such as the amount of money that comes from working overtime on the other hand it can lead to burnout.

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The picture shows the process of making wool. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The given chart illustrates how to manufacture wool. In general, the process has 12 steps, starting with rearing sheep and ending with industrial goods. Additionally, it is divided into two main different operations with the purpose of making recycled string and jackets or carpets.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

The increase of violence in the world is rising every year. This essay will argue that the two main causes of this are related with poverty and the rise of gender violence. In addiction, we are going to suggest that goverment programs and educational changes are the most viable solutions.

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People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is true to say skills are important very much in order to live in globalised world however some people believe only focus on particular skills in life since it is the finest path to be victorious I partially agree with the notion because I believe it is vital to concentrate on the single skill but also want to try to learn some other skills

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In today’s world, it’s private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Squabbling between private and government companies should invest in scientific search in today's aeon. Controversy exists as it whether it's advantageous in case private sectors take control of it. In this monograph, I will weigh up the merits and demerits and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some commendators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

The tradition of joint family is mitigating rapidly in this moderanized world and individuals choose not to live with the old people of the house. Nevertheless, many families prefer to have their grandparents under one roof. I still believe to live in a home having grandparents.

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Some people believe that advertisement persue them to buy thing, others think that they do not mind it.Both view and your opinion.

Now a days, advertisement play a significant role in our life. few people believe that advertising on the television tempt people to buy things. However, some people make sure that it would not be necessary to get a random product. This essay will discuss both the views and my opinion regarding advertisement in the upcoming passage.

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Some people say that the Olympic games no longer have a role to play in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

I would like to differ from peoples opinion about Olympic games has no role in the 21st century. This is a very debatable statement. I would like to put in my view point on why I disagree with the above statement.

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Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, technology plays a vital role and made our life easier, but at the same time, the negative impact is Increasing simultaneously. People are more interested in seeing films and playing games which affect a negative impact on society because of violent content. Some people convince that they are part of the relaxation, while others reject this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate more detail and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both views and give you’re opinion.

These days, people are concentrating more on studies to lead a better future. Few people think that their education qualities depends on the professors. On the other hand, they believe that the behaviour of the student in more concern than the other. This essay will discuss both

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimentin with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologist claim that parents and other membes of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and effects of widspread drug use by young people. Make recommendation you feel are necessary to help fight drug abuse.

In recent yeare, the usage of legal and ilegal drug has increased among children and it is thoght that it creats from many reasons which can be pacified. This will discuss about reasons of using drug and its effect on human life as well as its solution.

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modern scientist need specialist in certain fields not in others. some people think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the expertise in some fields are crucial, plenty of debates happened in the public whether the government should dismiss their funds to students who studied less relevant subjects and focused on students that studied subjects, which has more impacts to the society. In this essay, the author will analyze the cost and benefit of this policy suggestion.

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