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Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is controversial whether lawbreakers should be sent to prison or whether it is better to choose the talented crowd for good causes and make them productive. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail.
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The major cities in around the world continue growth, the more problems they may have. What the problems young people are caused by develop? What can be done to solve this?

As the population grows, cities must be expanded in order to provide enough area for people to land in. This change mainly affects the younger generation because they will need extra facilities to be able to live conveniently. In the following paragraphs I will discuss different aspects of the development of cities.
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some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Toys, nowadays, became an integral part of childhood. As children grow and develop, benefits of playthings such as assisting to educate child, raise kid as intelligent, inquisitive and clever. Despite that, improperly selected child game may lead to aggression, problems with focus and can cause serious health issues.
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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The advancement of healthcare and technology, in my opinion, have a positive impact in raising the society's quality of life, and their awareness about health in general. That is why, I disagree with the notion that people will have a lower standard for their health in the future, because the trends actually indicate the opposite is true.
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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Social media creates an illusion of school being peaceful. Bullying has become a major concern for a lot of schools. This essay will discuss the causes of bullying and propose solutions regarding this matter.
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In most countries, the number of people owning their private car is on the rise. Is this positive or negative development?

Nowadays people tend to buy their own car. We realize that, the number of people who buy their own car is getting increase. In my view, they are more negative effects on development than positive ones.
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It is easier for wealthy people to maintain food health than it is for people who do not have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Keeping healthy is one of good ways to blessing your life. People said that rich people are more capable to take care of their health than the poor one.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In recent times, advertising has become a go to for everyone, in as much as it is not something new, in recent decades it is even more intensed with the continous rise of social media platforms such as instagram, twitter, facebook just to name a few. I cannot agree that advertising encourages us to buy things that we do not need, even though it may be the case for a few, we cannot over look the importance of advertisement in keeping us in the know of recent development.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The sustainability of the ecosystem has always drawn great concern from all over the world. Some people claim that contemporarily the major environmental problem lies in the extinction of certain species, while others harbour the idea that there are more urgent ecological issues which require our effort.
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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it

In our contemporary world, business is on the move and competition is very high so communities involved in the business engage in advertising their products .
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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that having an enjoyable job is more important than earning a lot of money while others disagree and believes that a good salary will ensure a better life. This essay  completely agrees with the concept that an enjoyable job is more important than earning a handsome amount of money because one who loves to do his job will do better than a person who does not loves his job.
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We have become a disposable society, preferring to buy new products rather than repair existing items. Why do you think this is? How can this trend be reversed?

Nowadays, it is quite a common phenomenon to buy new products rather than repair current ones. I do agree with this statement. This essay will discuss the reasons leading to this trend, and what changes need to be taken in order to reverse this trend at the end.
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Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that government should encourage in science more than other subjects to increase country's development. It might be true that when their citizens have obtain a science knowledge. It will develop their nation either way. I agree with the view of this issue will be discussed in detail .
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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

A major drawback in metro cities today is the traffic congestion caused due to increasing number of cars. Nowadays, people have become dependent on travelling with their personal vehicle, rather than utilising the public transportation. This over dependency on car causes two main problems: increased air pollution and traffic jams on roads. In this essay, I will analyse the problems and provide possible solutions to it.
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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider that high-skilled workers, such as doctors and enginneers, should contribute by working in the country where they did thier training . However, others, including myself, beleive that they should go to another country to work whenever they want. This essay focses on both views, and then, I ended up my opinion that professionals shold be free to work in different countries.
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More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how they can be addressed?

Nowadays appliying of jankfood prodacts for feeding at home spreads on families more through curent time. This is mainly becouse ofthe lack of time in the pace of modern life people rither use products of fastfood then coock by nature ingredients. There are number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with cohisions of unhealthy feeding. This essay will axemine the main causes of such behavior and posible solutions of this problem.
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Does renting a house have more advantanes or disadvantage?

The phenomenon of people tending to rent a place temporarily for the purpose of occupancy has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I personally believe that its benefits can outweigh the drawbacks.
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People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building. What are the possible causes and solutions?

In this modern time, less interaction between neighbours is becoming widespread and as an effect is doing harm to the community. This essay will discuss the causes and provide possible solutions to this emerging problem.
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In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women. What are the advantages and disadvantages of women joining the workforce?

These days, is commom that most part of women have a job career. Many of them, especially young professionals, enjoy to make money. However, there are pros and cons to considerate before deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss why is so popular women working in the companies and some of challenges to be overcome.
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Today’s generation have stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

Stress had never been a part of our lives.Contemporary people believe that they have more stress than the previous one. In this , an essay I will argue both sides and explain why I see nowadays culture as a more stressful life in terms of working competition and living costs skyrocketing.
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