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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academics subjects. Discuss both vies and give your opinion.

There’s been a complex inquisition about whether Physical Educations classes should be compulsory for all school-age children or they should use their spare time for extra academic purpose. In one hand, studies show the lack of outdoor activities has increased both obesity in teenagers and enhanced their screen time on smart phones and computers, leading to lesser moments spent building meaningful relationships or developing life skills. On the other side, it has also given opportunity to optimize academics side and prepare better for the competitive professional life ahead of them.

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While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life, there is a tendency for people to move out. What problems do big cities have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There are several individuals who decide on moving to urban parts of a country in pursuit of a promising career and happiness. While there are positive factors that motivate them for this move, negative aspects such as the high cost of living and pollution often drives them out off the city life.

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problem. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems.

There is no doubt that cosmopolitan cities are facing different issues. Poor housing and pollution are the most dangerous; however, these can be effectively controlled by setting a planned city outside the centre of the town.

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In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Earlier, people use to commit a crime and they were sentenced as per the law of the land. Nowadays, few countries have started showcasing on television and other communication mediums, in order to make the people aware of the consequences of committing a crime. In my opinion, the isadvantages outweigh the advantages .

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

In many countries, a huge number of students are choosing to not study science subjects. In this essay, I will discuss the factors causing this problem and the effects it has on society.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology is expanding its wings faster than the speed of light. Humans are heavily dependent on internet of things (IOT). Smart devices are able to encroach into our homes and personal spaces. Many people believe that getting closer to the technology is helpful while others think that it has many drawbacks than positive impact. In this essay, I will discuss both positve and negative sides of this domination and conclude this essay with my opinion.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is believed that tablets and other computers provided by schools tend to replace books and printed materials. Without any doubts this trend has not only positive influence on educational process but also a negative impact on student's health.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of technology. It is disagreed that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom students with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with technology will prove this. Firstly, a robotic teacher made with artificial intelligence would lack sufficient control over its classroom students. For instance, it is widely known that kids need to be thoroughly watched by their teachers to be sure that they take their class works seriously and do not fool around when classes are going on. Sadly, this is a task robotic teachers will be incapable of carrying out. Therefore, this makes it clear that classroom teachers will never be totally substituted for technology. Secondly, the learning process of students would be disrup...

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Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, many students have been chosing reputed universities as guarantee that they will find a well-paying jobs in the future. I do not agree with it, this essay will explain why traditionally univerty can not ensure a high salary to theses students in the future.

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Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

in my point of view, we can not leave never it died also as soon as possible the government have to invest capital in that important culture, every rick country has to spend fund with art, this is my opinion, also I believe that many people agree with me, but in addition,I'm going to explain both points in that essay with some examples.

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way. While others prefer one-on-one instruction. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

From my point of view, learning in a group is the most effective way,this is because when you are in a class,for example , people can help you if you have a problem and two brains think better than one, in that essay I am going to defend my point and show another idea about this controrvesion topic.

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Some people consider playing sports is beneficial for schoolchildren. Some, however, believe sport activities also have some drawbacks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children playing sports.

Beyond doubt,sports play an important role in school children's life. They learn self discipline, hard work, resilience & teamwork. Sports also help in social bonding. Hence i personally believe that sports are cardinal. However,sports carry both advantage and disadvantage in the children's life which I have jotted down below.

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Shopping has become a new favorite pastime for the younger generation. Why is this the case? Should we encourage them to develop other hobbies too?

With the advent of multi-cultural societies and rapid changes being made in lifestyles, people’s choice of spending their free time has changed considerably. While some people opine that adolescence must spend their time following different hobbies others prefer to spend their quality time shopping. I will substantiate the reason for this trend in the following paragraphs. Owing not only to gigantic shopping malls but also glossy advertisement many teenagers are being lured towards shopping culture. First of all, as trade has started to bloom more and more products are being easily made available to the masses. In addition to this, either the items are available at a reduced rate or there is competition in the market. Secondly, the government has not only reduced the taxes on many imported products but also has increased trade from foreign countries. For example, my friend is fond of perfumes which he purchases easily from foreign brands which were not possible ...

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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

People have different opinions regarding what should be the purpose of wedding. Some people believe you could only marry if there is affection between individuals, while others think, people should marry a rich individual. This essay would discuss both opinions and reach to the conclusion.

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It was predicted that people in the 21st century would have much more free time than in the past. To what extent has this prediction come true?

The latest technology has made life much easier as compared to ancient times by providing various electronic gadgets. Some people claim that the current generation has more free time rather than in the past decades. In my opinion, people have a more hectic schedule in the 21st century. Let me elaborate in detail with some relevant examples.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Recently, countries are divided over the issue related to the impact of rules on governing a child behaviour. There are some who believes that children should follow strict behaviour guidelines, whereas others feel that they should remain a free bird and act according to their whims and fancies. This essay concurs with the former idea as it helps in building their character and keep them on the right path. In the essay, both the points will not only be discussed in greater details, but also supported with necessary examples.

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Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

Nobody can deny that there is an increasing trend of students, specifically from developing countries, moving abroad for higher studies. While this might entail several advantages for the students themselves, there is a certain section of people who believe otherwise. I am firmly in support of utilising any opportunity by youngsters for international studies In the below discourse, I will provide my enlightened standpoint on this topic.

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Stress illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What are the causes and solutions for this?

Nowadays, one can notice a surge in the number of people suffering from stress-related diseases. This essay will discuss the main causes of anxiety-related sicknesses including increased working hours and job pressures. This essay will also suggest solution to these problems such as improving one's work-life balance and devoting some time towards meditation.

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Buying things in the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this ways outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the internet is the key to everything. You can buy whatever you want online, without going anywhere. I believe the shopping experience changed for good and we can see more advantages than disadvantages in this new world.

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some individual feel that working from home, while of benfits to employee, is actually a drawbacks for employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that telecommuting is only beneficial to workers, whereas it causes negative impacts on employers. Regarding this statement, I advocate the former but disagree with the latter point.

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