IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 744

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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School is a great place to reduce the overweight problem, do you agree?

In my opinion,men and women shouldhave the same educational opportunities.However,do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every universitysubject.

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Some people argue that because the Internet makes it so easy for children to access facts, schools should not focus on teaching facts. Instead, they should focus on developing children’s skills and potential, and their relationships with other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there are growing arguments for tailoring teaching strategies because facts could be easily accessed on the internet by children to work on their studies. For a variety of reasons, I strongly agree that the education system should not focus on teaching facts instead of attaching importance to skill and potential.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead

İn our modern world education is one of the most important factors in a person’s life. Though some people believe that education is necessary for society, others think the practice is urgent to find a good job. I believe there are far more advantages of education than its disadvantages, which will be analyzed in this essay.

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Nowadays genetically modified food is widespread all over the world. While proponents of GM crops ensure that these foods are safe for human consumption and help to increase food supplies, others argue that their effects on health have not been studied long enough. Describe pros and cons of genetically modified foods.

It is debated that genetically modified food provides stability to food supplies and it is also safe for humans, while opponents are concern that it has not passed long time enough to prove the safety. In this essay, I will discuss the risk of non-natural food that it brings, and the advantage that it provides to the community.

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There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparent. why do these exist? does it cause problem in yout community, in your opinion?

Each generation creates new ways of living, making things easier, and children in this 21st century, begin with their career in technology as compared to their parent or grandparents, thus it brings a change in their mindset. In the looming paragraphs, I will discuss why these difference arises between them and does it cause an issue for society.

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The pictures show the process of making string hoppers.

The diagram presents the process of making string hoppers, traditional Sri Lankan noodles. In general, there are a total of six main steps in the process to make string hoppers beginning with grinding rice into flour to make the dough and ending with using the steamer to boil the string hoppers.

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The percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20 percent in last ten years. discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution

Overweight is one of the major health problems that we have in the present time. The most unfortunate issue with this is that the number of obese children has increased by almost 20 percent in last ten years. This is a huge burden of disease for children, their families, and the governments as overweight is one of the main risk factors of chronic diseases such as diabetes, hypertension, cholesterol, and heart diseases in the future. This essay will discuss possible causes and effects of this major health issue and will provide a solution at the end.

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Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the great method to achieve success in professional and personal life is to complete the tertiary education, and others think that otherwise. In my opinion, studying higher education is better gate to accomplish successful in life.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

There is no denying the fact that there are many issues in live in cities. The question is, should the governments encourage people to move to the towns? In this essay I am going to write about some problems in cities, which people face them everyday.

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Cultures around the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Different cultures in the world are becoming more comparable. In my opinion from this view different cultures are mixed each other due to the improved of social media. This maybe negative impact of culture.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans make a comparison between the actual structure of Southwest Airport and how it will be next year after the planned redevelopment. Overall, the airport will be enlarged and more facilities are expected such as a Skytrain to simplify access to the gates.

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The visuals give information about the number of spacecrafts launched by various national governments between 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission. Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the most important information in the visuals.

The pie chart provide data regarding the number of spacecrafts launched by different nations and bar graph indicates the percentage wise distribution of spacecrafts depending on their purpose from 1957 to 2007.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides. (Discussion essay)

The rate at which serious crimes are increasing daily is alarming and detrimental to the safety of society, and hence to control such irresponsible acts serious punishments and penalties are to be implemented. Some argue that execution of the criminals/delinquents is the best solution to curb felony, while others argue that resorting to other punishments and penalties would help better. This essay discusses the rationale behind both the views.

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Nowadays because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some argue that in the era of digitalization, technology has allowed the production of films to professionals as well as to ordinary people. There is enough compelling evidence to dwell on this argument. This essay argues why more positive transition is required because it creates employment opportunities and distinguished genres of movies.

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Some old people today's struggle with the use of modern technology such as smartphone and computers. what is the cause of this? what are the some possible solutions?

In the cutting-edge era, the older citizen does a lot of effort to learn electronic gadgets like cell phones and computers. This essay intends to explicate some of the reasons and solutions to alleviate them and my viewpoints will be highlighted in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What measures can government and individuals take tackle this issue ?

Recently, ecology problems are one of the most important topics. There is many factors which lead to this issues but one of th emost significant it is people and their factories, agricultural works and vehicles . Moreover, two thirds of our society know about the influence from our pollution on our earth, but no one does not want to do something with this. From my point of view, there is many persons who can try to solve this problem and now, i would try to say what they can do.

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The plans below show the site of airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The diagrams depict the layout of what Southwest Airport looks like currently and how it will be reconstructed a year from now.

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In the future all cars, bues and trucks will be driverless. The only people traevelling inside these vehichcles will be passengers. Do you think the adventages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As technology is constantly changing and evolving, in the future, the automobile industry will not require any driver to operate, as transportation will be done only by the passengers. This essay will demonstrate how self-driving transportation can be beneficial but will also show that this can lead to such problems. Whilst, acknowledging that there are benefits, the essay will argue that the disadvantages of the driverless automobile outweigh the advantages.

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Moreand more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into workevery day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to theenvironment. What measures do youthink could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distances intowork?

The number of people leaving rural areas to live in the suburb is increasing day by day. However, most factories and companies are located in the central area. Therefore, workers have to travel a long distance to go to their workplace, which results in traffic jam and pollutions. And in this essay, some solutions will be included.

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Today family members eat fewer meals together. What is your opinion on this?

Nowadays, there are various issues that occur in a family. One of it is not eating meals together. Some people say that having meals together with your family is very vital for bonding while others say it is not. In my opinion, a family that eats together, bonds forever.

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