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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that famous people can help draw attention to important social issues. Others believe that the celebrities can make the problems seem less important.

In recent years, whether the celebrities can have the positve effects to vital social issues has been in the spotlight of public attention. While there are some people argue that the celebrites can make serious problems seem less important, I assert that they can provide to draw attention to significant issues. In this essay, the reasons for my belief will be elaborated.

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People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

Nowadays, people from all over the world are always busy with their work schedule to cover life, so that they have no more time with their family. This essay will state several reasons connected with the above topic, which leads to some consequences.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries try their best to help third-world countries to overcome their poverty in the shape of money. But personally, I'm afraid I have to disagree with this statement and I will discuss some reasons in the essay.

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Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

Of course, to reach a more sophisticated and more developed society, daily inquiries are essential and crucial. Although any government pays attention to such an important issue, it doesn't seem to be enough, to support post-graduate research. However, good financial donations , sometimes, are allocated to less worthy projects. In this essay, we are going to discuss and take into account the pros and cons of this weak policy of some dignitaries.

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Considering that adults spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important. What factors contributes to job satisfaction ? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees ?

There is no doubt that elder person spend more time at work, due to some responsibilities and other factors, as well job satisfactions is played major role at work. This essay will explain regarding factors contributes for job pleasure, and practically expections of work gratifications for all workers.

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A poor infrastructure hinders under developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. To what extent do you agree?

The most countries fail to grow their lack of adequate infrastructure. Few individuals believe that should be first situatation tackled assist through foreign. I partily agree with this satetement. This essay will explanation on agree and disagree on stop the progress on foriegn aid.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and techology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

There are many subjects in university that people can choose, however some of them argued which subjects are better for their future. Science and technology are the most known as powerful subjects than the other. But, not all students can be enjoyed with those learning process, they prefer to enroll the class that they want. This wiritng will be given both views and authors' opinions.

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People today are spending more and more time outside of the home. What are the reasons for this trend? What effects is it having on individuals and society?

In this contemporary era, no one hardly likes to utilise time with family. It is believed that spending myriad hours outside the accommodation is mostly preferred by a group of individuals. Although, several causes of this phenomenon are hectic schedules and the influence of peer groups which largely disturb the family relations of individuals and distract the younger generation in the community.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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With Increasing Populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

In the recent age, the amount of populations in some countries grow at an astonishing rate and directly impact to result in growing urban areas that it can treated the excistence of natural wonderful spots. I believe that protecting the condition of natural beauty spots is the beneficial to keep the attraction of tourism in a country and to become an obligation both government and citizen. This essay will explain elaborately some benefits of save natural beauty places and some approaches to overcome it.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that more sports facilities in the community would be a better way to improve public health, whilst others believed that it will be result in small effect on people health. In my opinion, I agree building more sports facilities is not an only solution for that and others factors need to be taking into account.

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Student should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

there is an ever-increasing use of technology,such as tablets and laptops.it is often argued that this is a positive development,whilst others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications.this essay agrees that an increase in technology is beneficial to students and education.

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Today, more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this Modern era, technology is the key source for everything. Mobile phones are only used for the purpose of communication. Nowadays, people are so dependent on their digital devices which leads to an antisocial behaviour and depression. On the other hand, mobile phones helps a person to complete a task instantly.

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There are more new towns nowadays, it is more important to include public parks and sports for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern towns are becoming more and more in fashion. The number of them is radically increasing, and as a result, the expectation to have more of sports centers and parks is rising. I broady agree with such expectation as long as keeping balance among all the needs of the citizens is regarded.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented maps show the improvement of an airport within one year. Overall, it can be seen a more built area and the development of new facilities.

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Some people think that in school discipline should be the job of teacher whereas some believe it is the parent's accountability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There are certain arguments regarding whether or not teaching children self-control should be the responsibility of teachers or parents, some claim that schools should advise students on how to prepare themselves while others state that guardians should be the ones who give youngsters their wisdom. The following essay will discuss both perspectives as well as give my own on this matter.

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Many people use distance-learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Loads of people are studying at their accommodations by using distance-learning programs. On the flip side, it is believed that it is not able to claim the gain as much as studying at college or university by a fair portion of people. In my aspect, I strongly disagree with the second idea.

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Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion?

The debate regarding the curriculum of educational institutions often revolves around whether schools should focus on imparting practical skills essential for students' future careers or concentrate exclusively on teaching academic subjects. Although both perspectives have their merits, it is crucial to strike a balance between practical skills and academic subjects to provide students with a comprehensive and well-rounded education. Practical skills play a pivotal role in the application of theoretical knowledge in real-life situations. Advocates of this perspective argue that nurturing practical abilities in students can prepare them better for the job market and specific careers. By acquiring hands-on experience, students can gain a deeper understanding of theoretical concepts, enabling them to make more informed decisions when faced with real-world challenges. On the other hand, proponents of focusing on academic subjects argue that these disciplines provide students with a stro...

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture gives information about how the future plans for the university sports centre will be built compared to the present. This writing will be given the details development of this layout.

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?

It is becoming increasingly common for people to decide to start their own business rather than working for a company or organization. Although there are some advantages to their own business, I believe that the drawbacks often outweighs any benefits.

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