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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes commited by young people in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest?

Recently, the number of crime cases commited by young generation in urban areas has been increased. This essay will elaborate the main factor behind this issue and offer some possible solutions to tackle the issue.

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Some people believe that robots will replace classroom teacher in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computers are become the most significant part of education. And this situation is predicted to lead no need for teachers in the future. I strongly beleive that computers are the best tools for getting higher level of education quailty, however they can never totally replace teachers. In this essay, I will share some theories and perceptions about this situation and support them with valid arguments. On the one hand, it is inevitable fact that computers are so useful for educational purposes. For instance, teachers have an limited knowledge about some certain matter, however, computers can provide limitless information about anything. Especially, new intelligent robot has recently announced called Chat GPT. This robot has tons of features for any field. For educational purposes, it can be helpful for students as well as teacher in terms of exploring something new or doing significant experiments. According to the one of recent survery of Unversity of Harvard, Chat GPT will...

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's time cash plays an great role in a ever life, and it is important to earn the cash but by getting more income a people does not get happy. Things like a sucess, knowledge, good health, a family love, a friends love and much more can also brings the joy.

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Some countries focus on health care and education benefits while others on infrastructure and employment. Which do you think would be more beneficial for the population? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.

Few nations prefer to invest in providing educational or health provisions, whilst some opine that a good structure of buildings and better job opportunities are more beneficial to bring prosperity. From my perspective, all four components play a fundamental role in the overall development of the nation.

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Today many people do no know their neighbours. Why is this. What can be done about this.

There is no gainsaying the fact that individuals do not interact with their co-tenants. Althugh, there are wide array of reasons which breed this tribulation, certain praiseworthy steps can be taken to ameliorate this issue.

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Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, As the world continues to undergo rapid changes, people tend to prefer fast alterntives that enable them to accomplish their tasks rapidly. Food is no different. For many people, purchasing ready meal much easier and less time-consuming. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why many people would rather eat-out to cook at home, and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

According to the recent ,research it has been observed that most of the company meetings and employment trainings are happening online these days. No doubt this approach brings many benefits to individuals like a decline in traffic and saving transportation time. ,However this idea also minimizes the in-person gathering.

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“Có người cho rằng tăng trưởng kinh tế là cách duy nhất để chấm dứt đói nghèo, trong khi những người khác lại cho rằng tăng trưởng kinh tế đang hủy hoại môi trường nên phải dừng lại. Thảo luận về cả hai quan điểm và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn.”

Phát triển kinh tế giải quyết được nhiều vấn đề đói nghèo.Bên cạnh đórằng, Nó đang gây tổn hại và phá hủymôi trường Mà còn.Cái nàybài tiểu luận sẽ giải thích thêm về tác động kinh tế đối vớimôi trườngvà hữu ích cho con người. Chúng ta có thể dễ dàng nhận thấy công nghiệp hóa của các nước đang ngày càng phát triển như Mỹ, Đức, Nhật Bản,Trung Quốc… mà đitayTRONGtayvới họMà cònthuộc về các quốc gia hàng đầu về khí thải và ô nhiễmmôi trường. Trên mộttay, Kinh tế phát triển đã giải quyết hầu hết các vấn đề đói nghèo như tạo ra nhiều công ăn việc làm cho người dân, giúp họ cải thiện cuộc sống và gia đình. Lấy thực tế từTrung Quốc, nhiều năm về trước,Trung Quốclà một đất nước quá nghèo và quá đông dân. Nhưng ngày nay, Đô thị hóa đã giúpTrung Quốctrở thành một siêu quốc gia về kinh tế, và The Lives ofTrung Quốccon người tiến bộ nhanh chóng.

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Many people decide on career path early on their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have satisfying working life?

The majority of people choose to get an early start on their career and keep to it. They think it is better for a satisfying working life. of course, this has pros and cons and I will talk about it in this essay.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advatages of this topic outweigh the disadvantages

Learning a non-native language is crucial. However, it is debatable whether to start learning from early academy days or after higher institute, but from my ,perspective students should begin the education of secondary language from the first day of school so the advantages are more than disadvantages.

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Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?

Considering one of the most significant problem in the world - increasing productivity of agriculture to feed growing population - it can be said that all alternatives as organic food are worht any resourses, including money, time and etc. As a result, some persons consider that price for such products is quite understandable and berable. So, only partly do I.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Sugar-based drinks are so popular among youngsters. However, in recent times, individuals are drinking large amounts of sugar-based canes. In this essay, I will explain why consumption increased, and suggest some steps that can mitigate the issue.

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Some think that the government should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that retirees should get financial support from the government. However, some people think that they are able of serving themselves. In my opinion, both of these are necessary.

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

millennium has ushered mankind to ever increasing need of maintaining one’s image. It seems easier to people to get same by purchasing apparels and cosmetics. I intend to explore merits and demerits of this tendency in upcoming segments.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Sometimes parents give their children freedom to make their own decision on everyday matters. Some people say it is a wrong idea because in the future these children more likely to think only about themselves, I think it plays a crucial role in the development of children.

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Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education comes from parent plays an importance in the growing process of children. And each parent will have different actions and Smacking children is also a way to teach them when they are spoiled. In my point of view, I disagreed that Smacking is a good way to control Children. The effects of Smacking on children and some serious issues will prove this.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's topic, few people believe that the adolescent group should do their part for the community in the meantime without getting paid. As well they do trust that it will benefit them and society. In my opinion, I agree that teenagers taking part in volunteering will help in their personal growth.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In the recent years, There is a trend of having external cuisine instead of the domestic one. There is a multitude of reasons contributing to this issue, so several measures must be taken to surge the turnover of the local cuisine.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that plastic pollution is one of the serious and growing issues to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss what negative impacts plastic products has on the earth, and also outline what measures government and individuals can take to deal with this important matter.

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