IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 768

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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these days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or study. there are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. do advantages outweight its disadvantages?

Intro As travel and movement between countries of the worlds becomes simpler, people are increasingly moving away from their homes in search of a better life. There are clearly advantages to moving countries, as the process itself is difficult and otherwise nobody would do it, however once in-country there are definitely challenges for newcomers. As a migrant, I believe that the advantages do outweigh the issues faced when moving to a new country, whether for work or travel. p1 advantages Benefits to moving to another country for work or study - Life improvement -- Access to opportunities not available in home country --- e.g. Higher paid jobs / better work conditions, study in a field not available/ very difficult to access at home -- Better lifestyle --- e.g. Better balance between work hours and leisure time p2 disadvantages Disadvantages of moving to another country for work or study - Difficulty with integration into a new society -- Language and customs can be a s...

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well others say that teachers only teach students academic subjects discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that, teachers should take responsibility of children behavioural develoment as well,whereas other think teachers are only concentrate on teaching academic subjects like maths, science and english.I believe teachers should contribute to social ,moral,behavioural and academic growth of their students,inorder to make them better humanbeing in all aspects of their life.

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more and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.How can government make urban life better for everyone?

Over the period of time, urbanisation has increased at an alarming rate.The main purpose of people moving to cities is to avail themselves of the facilities and opportunities that a city offers which will hence, upgrade their lifestyle. However, with growing population in the city, people are facing problems on a daily basis.

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Some People Say That It Is Possible To Tell A Lot About A Person’s Culture And Character From Their Choice Of Clothing. do agree or disagree

It is a very common debate that we can depict someone's personality through their costume because mostly people wears according to their traditional dresses. I believe we can tell the traditions through their dress, but we cannot depict someone’s personality. For example, Arab man’s outfit is jubalia and women outfit is abays so we can tell they belong from a country where they follow to cover their bodies and their outfit shows that they are Muslims, but we cannot be sure If he/she is a good person he is not a liar or practicing Muslim.

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In many countries, people are spending more time in their workplace. Why is this? Is this a negative or positive development?

More and more employees are find themselves working long hours these days. This is mainly due to the evolving nature of industry in the 21st century and its decidedly not a positive change.

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Today, TV channels broadcast man’s sport shows more than women’s sports shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal showtime for women’s sport and men’s sport?

Tournaments are events involving both human genders. In recent times, male game programs have been aired more frequently than female athletic events. This essay would examine why both sexes should be given a fair chance of having their activities reported by visual media agencies.

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

Today's modern world evolves host of advertisement around. Is it a good sign? Let's discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the hoardings around us. A brand, either bread or a car need to reach everyone, can be possible, only by advertisements. Every year, small companies as well as corporate have their own slice of budget to promote their products in the form of ads.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The pie charts illustrate the way that a British school spent its annual budget in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Many people purchase and use their own vehicle in most of the developed countries. Some people think that the advantages for everyone is more than the drawbacks for the environment. In this essay, I will cosider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Nowadays, we are living in a time when many people may say that the level of violence in television and movies is extremely big and it might affect our social life.

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It is important for travellers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with, however briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so? What do you think is the main disadvantage of not doing so?

It is argued that travellers and businessmen must educate themselves on the culture they interact with. Every culture is uniqe and has its own principles, as humans we are responsible to understand and respect the cultures we come into contact with. Natives welcoming you to their country and being a role model is one of the advantages, whereas, being despised and hated by the people and receiving backlash is the disadvatngae.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The two charts here illustrate the purpose of the study among students of various ages (from under 26 to over 49) and the aid they received from the employers. The ratio between the support of different employers is determined using percentages.

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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that youngsters should continue their education in university.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, technical advancement has impacted the lives of human beings in one way or other. One of the major example of this scientific development is the introduction of robots in the modern era which has eliminated the need of mankind in the jobs sector. This essay will discuss about the differences of work done by robots and a person.

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Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Going to university seems like an inevitable process for every youngsters, however, more and more people are concerned about the method how every youngster get the permission to the universities equally. Whether students from poor families and remote areas should receive privileges to go to universities is still a controversial issue. I personally do not agree some groups of students should have any privilege to access to universities.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with the view?

Nowadays, arts are gaining popularity in many countries because of the increasing investments of the Government. Some people are of the opinion that this investment is ineffective and can be spent in other core sectors for betterment of the society. However, it is the responsibility of the government to ensure the use of arts to a certain degree especially in the core sectors such as healthcare and tourism for economic growth and development of the society.

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Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we become more and more accustomed to the technological innovation, and we get used to Internet social media in our life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and give my own point of view.

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Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People have different views about the exploitation on animals which could benefit mankind's living. While some think animals should not becoming the offerings for scientific studies, I firmly believed that those human being should exploit these livestocks for prolong their lifespan when necessary.

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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People think that wild life conservation is must for every animals. But some people believe that it is not necessery to protect every wild animal. Every living creature has equal right to live on the earth. No one has right to kill the animals whether they are big or small or danger and non danger. As per my opinion every wild animal should be protected. I will discuss both views that why we should protect the animals.

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In some countries people's weight has significantly increased while their level of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest to solve this problem?

Food culture is varied in different countries. There is an substantially increase in weight of people in some regions. In this essay, I will discuss what the issue will be cause and provide some solutions can improve this problem.

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