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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low cost passengers'flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that there is a necessary for governments to increase the air taxes because of an irrefutable fact that travelling by plane is attributed to a vast majority of issues, partly due to the low-budget tickets offered to holiday-makers. To my mind, I am mainly opposed to this view, as the given solution may result in a bunch of drawbacks.

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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low cost passengers'flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree ?

As our civilization grows, humans develop more advanced means of transportation, and the latest transportation means are the ones that involve flying, the machines that take us to the sky: airplanes. Since we have reached that point, we have become so fond of flying that we want to make more of it. Hence, air traffic is increasing, and coming with it are its problems: noise, pollution, and the construction of more and more airports. This leads to people thinking that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. It may work, but in my opinion, you cannot solve the problems air traffic causes by restricting it, but you must resolve them directly.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, many people think that we should not judge people by their external appearance. Others believe that outer appearance can reveal them about people's personalities. In my opinion, I strongly agree that we should not assume people's personalities based on their appearance because of these following reasons. Firstly, it is undeniable that judgment is necessary for our life. We usually decide what is good or bad base on its outer beauty. However, we can not come to a conclusion about p...

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue the parents should encourage their children to participate in organized group activities in their own leisure time. While others may argue that children must be able to figure out for themselves how to do it own their own. In this essay, it will be discussed the two points on how children should spend their free time and I will give my my opinion based on those dicussions.

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In the modern world, mobile and smartphone use has become universal in most parts of the world. Although there are clearly many advantages of this technology, there are many who believe it also brings many disadvantages. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Over the last two decades almost everyone in the world has bought or used a mobile phone. With this technological development many people feel that there are a lot of advantages but others feel that there may be some disadvantages.Starting with the advantages, it is clear that using mobile phones makes life a lot more convenient. For example, it is possible to contact friends, colleagues and family in just a few seconds at any time of the day or from any location. Also, mobile phones can be used to access a wide variety of data applications such as Camille and social networking sites such as Twitter or Facebook. This is a benefit because people are able to interact on line at all times. Finally mobile phones give security and peace of mind to parents who are able to contact their children easily.

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Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In this day and age , with the proliferation of technology, communication may be accessible to almost every citzen and is becoming a significant focus. Some hold a view that face-to-face is superior to other communicating ways. As far as I’m concerned, I wholeheartedly subcribe to this opinion for 2 following reasons.

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It is possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as South Pole, do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the faraway natural environments is becoming the attractive destination with the researchers and visitors. While I accept that experiencing in the remove natural environments can sometimes have a positive effect, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Nowadays, the structure of family households and roles has been changed compared to the previous generations. There are some changes made in today’s households and I believe that this trend brings benefits to family members and society as a whole.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some parts of the world, native languages are being lost as the world develops and evolves. Some believe that this is unimportant and even see it as an advantage. This essay will discuss whether the loss of languages should be cause for concern.

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Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sport shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

That male sports shows have gained more airtime on TV than female ones is one of the concerning topics. The dominant number of audiences for the prior is the reason for this and I believe that equal attention should be paid to women’s sport.

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In some countries it is traditional for men to work and women to stay at home to look after the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In many countries, men are breadwinners whilst women have to stay at home to take car of their families. This situation has both benefits and drawbacks, in this essay I will look at both.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

In various countries, citizens believe that the government ought to give an enormous finance to enhance old shared-vehicles; However, the way I see it is that money need to be allocated for putting up more high-speed rails for hyperloops is essential.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want . Is this a good way to raise children ? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older ?

It is a common sight, that many children have the freedom to select their every day usage goods. Few argue that this is a positive sign for children to grow into individuals with free spirit, whereas others are against this. I believe that offsprings should have independence to choose things on their own and this essay will detail further aspects to support the opinion.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Now a day it is common that many children have the freedom to select their every day usage goods , Few argue that this is a positive sign for children to grow in to individuals with free spirit, where as others are against to this. I believe that offspirngs should have independence to choose things on thier own and this essay will detail further aspects to support the opinion.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The famous quote from the movie, Spiderman, "with great power comes great responsibility", fits well in this situation, where Media today only focuses on the clickbaits articles that can generate more eyeballs on their webpages and increase their TRP. This essay further discusses on how media affects the mental health of our socity and individuales by only focuing on the issues and nagative side of the world. It creates panic and anxiety within the world and portrays a basied version of our sroundings.

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Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

In many nations, the governments would provide partially to totally free education to their younger citizens as the price of this service can be extremely high. This essay will argue that the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people believe that school children should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Majority of our young life is being spent on school.Some argue that children should wear uniform to schools whereas,others argue that they should have the liberty in choosing their attire.This essay will discuss both the arguments and provide my argument for choosing that kids should wear uniforms.

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Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities.The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, world is changing a lot as compared to the past and construction is the assential part of this modanization of cities. But I personally believe that maintain traditional style is our first priority. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.

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The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the community works well in an environment where there is a strict rules and regulations imposed on them.I strongly agree that, if the people were given a free will without any limitations then there would be a lot of issues faced by the law-abiding individuals of the society.

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Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed by many that technology has been highly beneficial by bringing people closer and making it easy for friends to stay in touch. In my opinion, digital communication truly connects people who are far from each other, whilst creating gaps among individuals who stay together.

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