IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 85

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people believe winning is the only way to have fun and enjoy while playing games. Even though winning a game is a big part of playing and every one desire to win, winning is not the important part of it, there are greater values to playing a game.

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Nowadays,children watch a lot of TV and play video games.However ,some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health.

Nowadays it is argued that a huge part of children spend more time on television and play online game. Nevertheless, parents think that these activities have show bad influence on a child's brain health. This essay completely agrees with the given statements. In this essay, i will suggest some relevant examples in the upcoming paragraphs. Firstly in video games,can become immune to violence and more inclined to act violently themselves. Secondly spending too much time playing video games can isolate children.

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Nowadays,children watch a lot of tv and play video games.However,some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health .

Nowadays it is argued that huge part of children spent more time on television and play online games. Nevertheless parents think that these activities are show bad influence for a child's brain health. This essay completely agrees with the given statwments. In this essay i will suggest sone relevant examples in upcoming paragraphs. Firstly in video games,can become immune to the violence and more inclined to act violently themselvess. Secondly spending too much time playing video games can isolate children.

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Some people believe that criminals should be put into prison as long as possible. However, others believe that it is necessary to educate those people in local community. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is ongoing debate about whether criminals should be put into the jail while some argue that it is better to provide education to them. This essay will delve into both the views along with my own perspective in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancements in technology, which will help prevent and solve crimes in an easier way. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays modern and advanced technology help in preventing and finding criminals in a quick manner , as a result ,the crime rate is likely to decrease in the future. In my opinion , I agree with this statment and this essay will explain my reassons .

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Some people believe that advertisements have a useful function for TV viewers while others disagree. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals believe that advertisements show a productive function for television viewers while others would argue that it has a negative impact on the people watching television ads. I disagree with this statement about ads having useful consequences because advertisements give insufficient information that can have serious effects on human life in terms of health and safety.

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People spend more and more time browsing social networks. Is it a positive or negative development? Should anything be done to restrict children’s access to social networks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays People's big problem is social networks and it became massive part of their life. there are some benefits and harms on the social network. it depends how to use it. especially,people spend a lot of time on the social media (facebook, Instagram,etc). it is a negative point. However, Some of them who use to develop themselves, growing their life quality.

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Scientists tell us some activities are good for health, and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

All over the world, intelligensia shares healthy lifestyle habits for adoption as well as unhealthy habits for complete abhortion. Despite this, many in society continue engaging in unhealthy activities for many reasons which this essay will delineate, along with proposed solutions.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are some people who believe that it is beneficial to save money for their children, so that it could be used in the future, whereas others argue that opinion. I believe that it is a good idea to keep some of their monthly wages for use in the future.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is commonly seen that there is greater chance of committing crimes again by criminals who have served their first sentence. this is mainly due to the less job opportunities. However, this problem can be tackled with the help of effective measures.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be pasengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that in the future all cars will be driverless which means people travelling inside these vehicles will be pasengers while some individuals believe that it will be problems, If cars is coming driverless. Both sides have opposit opinion that means create a huge arguement about this subject. In this essay, I will discuss them before presening my own opinion.

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(S)İn the future , nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about whether published newspapers and books are needed in the future.Because due to advancements in the technology, almost all people can search for books , which they want, in online website without any phsical effort and they save their money and time.Although this essay mostly agree with this perspective, it will examine both sides including drawacks such as challenging for older people.

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying that pepole work hard to earn money, and it depands on what job they are working in , for example pepole that has been working in education section they have less strees then doctors , comparing between the two jobs we all know that doctors have high salary then teacher because the work hard more then teacher .

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Some people say that the best way to improve roads safety would be to increase minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motobikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Each country has different regulations of driving car or riding motobike, which are connected with the number of accidents on the roads. Hence, these make some people believe that the way to improve road safety would be to increase minimum legal age. This essay will describe on the agreement and disagreement of this content.

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Some people prefer to buy local commodities, while other think that world wide products have a better quality. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of the society likes to purchase locally made goods, meanwhile, other individuals opine that international goods offer superior quality. This essay will not only discuss both viewpoints but my opinion is also highlighted.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by ‎almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this ‎disturbing trend.‎

There is a 20% rise of overweight adolescents in western society in last one decade. This is mainly because of less physical activity and dependency on junk food. Due to these causes, there are a number of effects on the health.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is significant surge in road accidents. Along with this people need to measure their safety. Some people think the percentage of safety can be improve by increasing the minimum age of an individual for the driving license (DL). I completely disagree this statement. I will endeavor to shed some light on this view and given relevant reason.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (KLL)

Some humans give opinions that advertising is drastically great at convincing us to purchase goods. Other individuals have thoughts that advertising is so simple that we do not pay attention to it anymore. This essay will talk about both of them and I will share my assumptions.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some say they want the state to invest effort in researching for life on other planets, while it is a commonly held belief that others would argue about this idea saying it is a waste of resources, and nowadays on Earth there are so many issues. This essay will argue that although there are valid concerns regarding losing money in this research, the overall benefits of looking for life on other planets far outweigh the drawbacks.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowdays, Moving abroad needs to speek like a native. However, It can be beneficial for your adaptation in social area. I did not agree. Because it is not easy, Since you will confront so much strugles.

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