IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 123

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The internet has dramatically altered ourlives over the past few decades. Although someof these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What is your opinion on this?

As the advancement of the Internet, a human's life have been changed dramatically in many ways. There are pros and cons of the transformation that the Internet has brought, however, I think advantages of these changes outshadow disadvantages of them. This essay will dicuss my opinion with relevant examples.

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Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many people think that car is the best option to travel in cities but some people believe that bicycle is the best way of going anywhere in the city. Traveling through cars can cause pollution whereas bicycles are a pollution free source of traveling and also contain benefits in daily life.

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More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and what are the solutions?

Being over weight is the hot topic in the recent times and it is widespread mostly in young children. There are several reasons contributing to this problem as well as drastic long term effects.

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Some people argue that social media platforms are essential for communication and staying connected, while others believe that they pose a threat to personal privacy. On which position do you stand? Discuss the supporting ideas for your chosen position.

In the era of advanced communication technology, the role of social media has become a subject of debate. Advocates argue that these platforms serve as indispensable tools for fostering connections and maintaining relationships. Social media facilitates instant communication, allowing individuals to share life updates, engage in discussions, and bridge geographical gaps.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, is normally conceived for people, specifically family members that time spent in various broadcasting media such as television, YouTube videos and PC gaming have strongly bonds with the well-growth of theirs children. In opposite, there are people who claims that these kind of resources limits its integral health and intelligence and in consequence, deserve legal regulation or prohibition. In this essay, this positions are showed out and an personal opinion will be given.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valueable to be shared freely Discuss both these view points and give your own opinion.

It certainly can not be denied that good information is the key to research on the purpose of any business as well as for the academics. The benefits of such informative discussion are obvious, as life has become easier and more convenient. However, some people feel that it should be shared with each other while others believe that some pieces of information is too private to be shared freely. It surely is debatable and both views seem to hold water. But before coming to a reasoned conclusion, let us discuss both views.

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In many countries, it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

Alcoholic beverages are banned at the present. This essay completely agree with this initiative because alcohol can cause serious health conditions and it's promotion leads to buying, & consuming more.

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Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffice congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Unquestionably, every coin has two sides so are the people. Society's people are divided into two groups and therefore, the traffic congestion has become a topic of debate among individuals. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions along with mine which is in the favor of the former view will be discussed in a sensible conclusion.

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Some people like to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others prefer familiar places? Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places ?

Some people prefer to go on trip to somewhere new or place that has been changed, at the same time some others choose to go on same holiday trip. People with lack of communication skill should go on vacations around new places and new cultures.

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Governments investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

There are some arguments both for and against investing government. I personally strongly agree with developing various field of arts. In this essay, I will discuss more.

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In today's world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As the time goes by, there is a shift in research funding trend where private corporations tend to overtake public sectors role. I believe the benefit is likely more prominent than the drawback itself.

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Nowadays as a part of education process students work at our company for short period of time without pay do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In the modern world, the internship program is crucial method for many university students.This method can encourage students learn new things.However,some people suggest that trainees should get wage from companies. This choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in this essay.

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University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics these days. Many people believe that college students should be allowed to choose subjects they like to study. Others think that it is always better to learn subjects that have relevance in the future and I agree with them. Both views will be discussed in this essay

A number of humans believe that college and university students be supposed to available to select the major which they prefer to learn. Then, other thought that, the effective method to study the major subject that can easily get employment is the most important part to consider after they graduate.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Every people need a place to settle down, however in some countries not everyone could owning a home and forced to renting for their lifetime. Most people said one’s should have a permanent place to wrote in the id card, which in my opinion this case is a positive one because owning a home has more advantages in the long run.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as a desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages of visiting such places.

Every coin has two sides. Likewise, the trip to extreme places, such as a desert or the Antarctic. Visiting such places will foster people's awareness about nature but, if people do not have proper knowledge about the environment, come to places with extra temperature can be dangerous for them. This essay will shed some light on the merits and demerits of the issue.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that whenever children at school, they must wearing school uniforms in order to keep students focus on studying rather than exhibit their position in the society by wearing fashionable outfit. I agree with this statement because uniforms can eliminate distraction and provide equality among students.

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An increasing number of people want to buy clothes, shoes and other items produced by famous international brands. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Many men and women have been purchasing their clothes from globally well-known brands as a result of the impacts of social media on individuals. I, personally believe that this phenomenon should be accepted a negative development, since it affects local brands badly, and makes people monotype across the world.

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Although internet has some benefits yet its overuse has some negative impacts on human. Do you agree or disagree

Fast forward technology makes affect for people for instance internet. There are many arguments about advantages and disadvantages of the impact internet in our life. I agree with internets has more positive benefits rather than negative impact. In this essay I will eleborate this statement and also giving explanation.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

most people think that teenagers the best time of our life and the other think that become older give our life happier. I completely agree with youngest is the best time because it is time to young teenager to exploring their life and the responsible less than elder people. This essay will discuss both these arguments and the statement of explanation

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Globalisation has changed our lives in many aspects. Now, we are not living in a huge planet. We belong to a global village where everything is available in a walking distance. Transporting goods from a distant place has both advantages and disadvantages. My opinion is pros outweigh the cons.

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