IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 123

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whilst many think that modern technologies, such as computers should be added to our educational system . I believe they have some noticeable disadvantages in term of risks to students.

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Many studies have shown that most criminals have a low level of education. Some people say that to reduce the crime rate, criminals must be educated within prisons. It will improve their prospects of employment when they are released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Majority of people are talking about the crime rate which is rapidly growing from last few decades, however few of them believes, it can be handle, if government provide education in the caves to those who commit crime. Similarly, I too agree with this idea due to change in their views and thought.

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As a part of their education, individuals should spend a period of time living or working in another country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People have to spend some of their time to live or work in other countries as part of their education. This essay attempts to shed the light of the merits and demerits of this educational journey before concluding that the abroad experience is important to broaden perspective.

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in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this era, it's common for companies to always up to date their products with new trend and style by advertisement. It seems there are some arguments on both perspective that will be discussed in the essay.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large portion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are to many individuals feel that whether the governments should takes a significant amount of money from the residence in order to upgrade facilities. Others feel that high range payments of taxes are unwelcome strategy. I am totally disagree with these statments, but in some cases it's might helps for short terms.

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When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dwellers healthy has been a controlversary problem back at the age to now, people often stay at home and starring at the screen all the time. But nowadays, we often see more public parks and sports facilities rather than shopping centers. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will talk about it.

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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

The plans draw the conclusion from a survey about the health centre has changed since 2005. Overall, plan B gives information on increasing some rooms and several new areas in a building. Also,the size of the garden and the car parking have altered.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate regarding the emphasis on vocational training over university education, with the argument that qualified professionals like electricians and plumbers are readily available. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as I firmly believe that university education plays a pivotal role in cultivating skilled workers, surpassing the contributions of vocational centers.

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it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents , for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both these views and give opinion.

There are majority of public who think that people who are talented can gain successful hills more than people who have not while others believe that any person can obtain even more success than talented humans of they do their best. The current essay will elaborate aforementioned notions and sigfest second view.

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Tests and examinations restrict teachers’ creativity and innovation, and they also exert unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A group of people have the notion that series of assessments can hinder tutors' ingenuity and put students into a stressful situation. This essay will provide two foundational reasons to support why I am not in the same boat with the initial notion. A psychoeducational approach will be used to argue the statement thoroughly.

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Nowadays, in many families both parents need to have jobs. What are some of the problems associated with both parents working, and what are some of the possible solutions? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this competitive world, many parents are forced to go out to work. This brings many conflicting opinions and problems however there are many different solutions and here are a few of my recommendations about this.

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Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Some people argue that scientist or technology expertist look valuable rather than musicians and artist in our society, I believe scientist seem valuable because thier impact for our environment and related current issue in our society.

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Although more and more people use public transport, some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. How can this problem be solved? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In todaty trend of the globe public transpotation has a various type of ways to travel.However, some city roads are still being very crowded with traffic and road blocks.In this essay I will be disscusing the possible ways to slove this problem while giving methods to illustrate before it comes to the conclution.

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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is regularly argued that today companies believe that higher education is more useful, than life experience of own characteristics for getting a new job. Despite this fact, there are a lot of opinions about this idea. Therefore, this essay will discuss about merits and downsides.

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Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

In todays world International shareholders has become powerful by many reasons while some people belive that is negetive thrend.In this essay i wall be discussing about this matter with my ideas containning wether to pros and cons.

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In many countries children are engaged in sorne kind of paid work. Sorne people regard this as complete/y wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The television can be dangerous due to the fact that any community or family can be damaged by it. We decide to watch it instead of talking to our loved ones or even visiting them. I completely agree with this, nowadays technologies is tearing family relationships apart, because we are more focused on the TV itself rather than our community. Although, watching the TV with everybody can transform in good memories at the end of the day.

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Some children spen hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case? Do you thinki this is a positive or a negative development?

In the present day, the development of technology is very rapid and on the rise. Smartphones is one of the results as they be more accessible and used by various generations. Nowadays, even children have their smartphones and this leads to many advantages and disadvantages. This essay will discuss the negative and positive development of smartphones for children and ended by my opinion as well.

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level of youth crime is increasing day by day aroun the world. Give some reasons and some sollutions to stop it.

In the recent years, crime committed by adolescents, has been increasing worldwide. This essay will cover on causes and solutions of the problem.

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown. What are the advantage and disadvantage of this.

Over the last few years, the numerous of people who prefer to travel other countries to study a outings language instead of learning in their homeland has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of travel abroad to learning diffirent language, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Many people choose to traverl abroad to learn a foreign languagle instead of studying in their home town.

Many human pick to trip foreign to learn a foreiger tongue instead of reading in their house small town.I will tell you the adventages and disadvantages of this in the next sections.

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