IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 122

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Recently more people tend to buy their needs such as groceries, garments, appliances, and so on, from grand shopping malls. The consequence of their desire to this kind of shopping has been presented with closure of more local small stores day by day. In this letter I argue the negative aspects of this development for, before turning to the positive ones and I believe the positive aspects are more significant than negatives.

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Some people belive that robots are very important to human’s future development, whilw others believe they are dangerous and negatively affect society.

Robots have been making our lives so much easier , hencesome people think they might not be good for our future or even hurt us in some ways. I strongly disagree with this statement.

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It is common aspiration among many young peopleto run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

Many youngsters these days are inspired to run business instead of working for some organisation. In my opinion, it is a good strategy because benefits of running their own company have statistically overcome common practive of 9-5 jobs. I am going to discuss in detail and give some reasoning on how self employed services have more pros than cons.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some would argue that it is more beneficial when the government expenditure go on essential tgings rather than arts.This essay totally disagree with this idea because funding arts have much more economic benefits for one country and it encourages community cohesion and reduce isolation.

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Some people argue that government should spend on their money elderly people care. However, other people say that government should focus more education for young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some individuals believe that goverment has to spen mony on their senior care ,while others think that they should spend alot to educate young people .althought caring about retired are really important to take advantage of their experience , in my opinion , adolesences have played a big role in our country development.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days the last model of technology change the world and a lot of things are disapperared even some jobs will not be with us next years. So, some people think that this technology is the reason for why the shopping become easier. While others believe that the technology was not the cause for make the shopping easier. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Some school leavers choose to travel or work for a year before going to university. What might be the reasons for this? What are the disadvantages of this practice? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some school children prefer to take a gap year after graduation before pursuing university degree. This is because they want to explore their willingness to do in the future and seek adventures. There might be some considering drawbacks including loss of their valuable time, and some of them might be prefer to working continously rather than studying. These drawbacks will be highlighted in this essay with some examples.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Learning other subjects aside from a major subject is always attracting to most students while they are trying to concentrate on their own major. I think that this kind of dilema stems from an ambiguity of how subjects are categorizied.

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⚪️ People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays people are watching entertainment media by themself without any company,in my opinion watching tv and films with others,specaily with family and friends is more fun and creates a strong bond with your loved one, because you share experience and memory with each others. In this essay, I will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television alone.

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Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others,however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is argued that several of individuals face challenges in having healthier lifestyles in the current world. However, there are others who think that it is effortless to be in a good fitness if we encourage ourselves to be. In my opinion, I believe that there are a lot of difficulties to be in a good well-being, while we can be in good health easily.

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The plans below show the layout of a universty's sports centre now, and how it will look after redeveloplment.

The maps illustrate the university sports centre now and after reconstruction in the upcoming years.

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In the future, the main reason for going to shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. do you agree or disagree?

In the upcoming years, the prime cause for visiting shopping centers will be just for pleasure, not to purchase products. I totally agree with the notion due to alternative platforms and more convenient.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, individuals mostly youngsters are highly passionate about doing supremely exciting sport activities; however, some argue that these most be forbidden dut to their dangers and the likelihood of sever accidents. Although this concern is completely logical, I do disagree with banning them.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an idea that existence of cars with fossil as its fuel should be changed by electric cars. In my opinion, this is a great plan because the electric cars have two advantages rather than fossil cars, which are environtmently friendly and reducing noise pollution.

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many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. do you agree or disagree? what other factors can contribute to a good career?

While a large number of individuals opine that higher level on education has beneficial for a good career, others believe that education not involve on your career. In this essay, I will elaborate the positive impact of education on your career.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is thought that the issue of age is important and the world has a increasing the number of old citizens, who are creating the burden in for authority. While this development may bring about some benefits in society. I would argue that there are far more benefits.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling has been a controversial issue for every Earth's residents, and some people start thinking multiple ways to improve the recycling efficiency and hope governments to implement legal requirements. In my opinions, publishing clear a recycling strategy and explaining why the citizens need to obey these policies.

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The prison system has not been effective at reforming criminals. A large number of convicted felons return to committing crimes soon after being released. What are the problems with the prison system and what solution can you recommend to address this issue?

Although the people who committ with crime have been caught into prison, most of them still do the same fault after getting free from the prison. This essay will answer how the problems of this trend could happened and followed by the steps that are needed.

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It is believed that individuals who engage in reading books can cultivate greater imagination and linguistic abilities than those who prefer television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that reading has better contributed to creativity and language learning than television. In my opinion, reading is beneficial to imagination and language learning.

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Scientists recommend making it mandatory for children to learn how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, musical skills are growing day by day, it is manifested that teachers have to learn teenagers about music. Some other are believed that music is not mandatory for children. I strongly believe that learning a music is mandatory subject for children. I will discuss my point in upcoming paragraphs.

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