IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 125

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree ?

Children are pressured by most of the parents to achieve success. I agree with this statement because, they want their children to achieve financial freedom and better social status in future.

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More and more business meetings and business training have taken place on the Internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people developed online business training that have taken place on the internet. A lot of people found it useful. Because they do not even need to waste their time to flights or to go the place where there are going to teach. However, it is also got dark side. You can not feel the atmosphere or energy of training.

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Some people think that government should spend tax payers’ funds on cultural activities such as music or art. Others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people consider celebrities such as actors and athletes to be their role models. Do you think that people should look up to celebrities as role models? What other types of people are worthy of admiration?

In this era the most people think if celebrities such as actors and athletes could be their role models. It's fine if the role models give them a good or positive example. Celebrities can be positive role models due to their have some talent. If we can able to emulate their positive characteristics its fine to make them role models.

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Crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to the development of advanced technology. Do you agree or disagree

A faction of people holds a notion that crime rates are declining in contrast to the past as a result of innovative technology development. I complete agree with this view which I will explain in this essay.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In this modern world, especially in urban and metropolitan areas, healthcare, medication, and medicine are something that easy to access. With the increase in medical knowledge, there is always a way to cure the illness. But still, many people tend to choose alternative medicines and treatments rather than visiting official healthcare. Of course with my logic, I can not stand this phenomenon.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinon.

It is important to consider how children should learn to become a good member of society. While some people believe that parents play an essential role here, others argue that school is the suitable place to learn this value. In this essay, I will disscuss both sides of the topic.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days students start ignore taking science subjects in university in different countries. The question is, what are the causes for this problem? In this essay, I am going to discuss the reasons and effects of not enough students choose science subjects.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People today tend to having an alternative prescriptions to deal with various health issues instead of going to a hospital, getting an examination from the experts. I advocate this as a negative alteration which can lead to a mal-practice medicines and treatments.

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In today's world many people own a smartphonem.Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Presently, the big number of people are using smartphone and they use it popularly with a lot of different reasons.Besides that, people know that these days were of technology and technology machines will have a big impact on changes of world. This essay will disagree that many people own a smartphone in today's world is a advantage.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In recent times, it is believed that moral characteristics such as honour,kindness and trust became less essential.Since,the people are judging based on their status and physical appearance.I completely agree with the latter notion ,but i do not think that moral values have less important

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In 2020, India's healthcare sector was valued at roughly 280 billion U.S. dolla

In 2020, India's healthcare sector was valued at roughly 280 billion U.S. dollars. It was expected to reach about 372 billion dollars by 2022, showcasing significant growth over the past decade. The sector is one of the largest contributors in terms of revenue and employment in the country.

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There is an increasing trend around the wprld of married couples deciding not to have children.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the couples who decide to do thid.

An increase in a number of married couples in and around the world,they have decided to not have children.Nowadays, it is been trending not to have childrenchildren.It iis fashionable.Overall,the couples are getting married soon and planning not to have a children because of their own problems.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples decding not to have children.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

An increase in number of married couplesin and around the world,they have decided to not have children.Now a days, it is been trending not to have a children.It iis fashionable.Overall,the couples re getting married soon and planning not to have a children because of their own problems.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree

There is debat going around banning and the replacement of fossil fuels cars with electric cars.

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in todays world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owing a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, all over the world, most people have a smartphone. This writer will provide the advantages and disadvantages about the owing smartphone.

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in today 's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the adavantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disavantages?

In our contemporary world, smartphones have become ubiquitous, sparking a debate about whether their advantages outweigh the drawbacks. The convenience and connectivity offered by smartphones are undeniable assets, allowing users to stay connected, access information instantly, and enhance productivity. However, concerns about privacy, addiction, and societal impact warrant careful consideration.

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n today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern digital’s era, there is a large amount of individuals has a mobile phone. Overall, in this context, I would argue that the benefits of production, transportation and sales outweigh the drawbacks in using disturbs others.

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in today's wolrd many people own a smartphone. do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays, many individuals have a smartphone for them and also outweigh it. This statement agreed and will give some props and nons to evident and explain this essay.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowsaday, smartphone is neccessary and people always hang it nearby themself. Smartphone is helped peole to do anything easily and people can use it anytime or anywhere.bUT USING MORE SMARTPHONE HAS A BIG NEGATIVE EFFECT ON PEOPLE HEALTH. THEY HAVE A HEACHACHE AND EFFECT ON THEIR EYES.

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