IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 126

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

A large number of humans are currently travel to English-speaking nations for studying on both colleges and universities. This is due to locating rich continents and it is easier to find a job and learn in such countries, for example, England, Australia and America. Meanwhile, I am going to explain the major reasons and importance of learning english abroad in the forthcoming essay.

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Museums and art gallaries should concentrate on works that show histroy and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that museums and art galleries ought to be more pay attention on historcal objects of its own country rather than showing other country's goods in it. From my point of view i strongly agree with this statement. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say the Olympic games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that Olymic games are outdata and don't belong to this current century we living on. I believe that the Olympic games changes it purpose to fit the 21st century. Nowaday this sport event is a dream for any atheltic to be apart of it, It is an opporitinty for them to gain medals and fame,and it is sponcers by goverment of every nation became it is a way for countries to use there wining teams as soft power, they support there sport team to wins as many gold medalic to show there excellent in every field.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams contrast the changes that Grand Park has undergone since its opening in 1920 with those that it has nowadays.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faces in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

One of the biggest threats is global warming and the alarming rates of sea levels rising are continuing to happen. I think that issue can cause some problems in the climate and the community. However, the governments and individuals could take roles in solving the problem.

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In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and then give your opinion.

These days, it is a common thing the higher education pupils prefer to work or travel who finish to take a break before entering universities in some nations. Although adding work experience in resume and gaining development of the skills are the benefits of taking a break, students focus might be distracted and friend's contact might be lost are the drawbacks. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons and I will give my opinion too.

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Topic 2: Some peole think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. Other people think that government should focus on social services such as health and education programs. Which statement do you agree with? Explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

Although many people think that government should focus on improving the economy of the nation, others say they should rather try to improve social services. It is agreed that central government should strongly focus on two vital services; they should provide better education facility for teenagers and special treatment plans for retired people.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their doctors . Do you this this is a positive or negative development ?

Many people these days who have medical illness are searching to use different toy of medicine and treatment from their friends instead of booking appointment with the medical profession . However , in this essay , I would explained both views supported by examples and will provide my own opinion .

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, smartphones have become essential devices, as more and more people are relying on them. This writer believes that the merit of immediate contacting and automatic actions outweigh the disadvantages of facing the risks of cyber fraud.

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Life nowadays is generally more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.

Currently people are increasing suffering from stress than people in the past. This essay will discuss the main causes of why people struggle from stress nowadays including increased job presssures and their life style. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving one's work -life balance and healthy lifestyle.

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Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenagers’ literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, cellphones are becoming more and more popular because of its convenience. It also is extremely useful for all of the age to solve the work. However, some people argue that young people usually use smart phones that can brings negative point for their literacy skills. In my view, I partly agree with this opinion.

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Plastic bags,plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Now-a-days,plastic usages are highly required by the people all around the world.It carries more weight,cheap in price.Even,so many companies are incredibely growth in the production of plastics.In our country the packing,water bottles and bags these all designed and manufactured by the polythene.In this condition we will discuss the polythene makes damage in our environment and what should be done to solve this issue.

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In the past most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and the smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

As globalisation era, the internet is a crucial role in our life and it can use to work at home without going to the office. Some people think that it is a great innovation while others disagree.

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Nowaday,more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a postive or negative development ?

Recently, the increased number of people are have been choosen to communicate online rather than meet in person. I believe, this is cause negative for sociality, therefore lead to crime and physical health.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animals. Is it justified or there is any alternative? To what extent do you agree or diagree?

A number of individuals believe that doing experiments on wildlife is ulawful and have negative impact on them. Nevertheless, others think that for scientific innovations it is necessary. I partialy agree with the above statement. In this essay, I will elucidate both aspects and will justify by examples.

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Many claim that tha fast food industry has a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Over recent decades, many countries have been trying to expand fast food industry. While there are many advantages to having prepare meals but I believe that there are many disadvantages. So in this essay I will explain both views.

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In an era of globalisation, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job, while others believe that other options are better. Discuss both opinion views and give your opinion

Overseas learning is a good option for students to continue their journey and expand their experiences. In this modern era, competition is very intense, particularly when looking for employment. Therefore, having an opportunity to study abroad will increase the chances of obtaining a high-salary occupation.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many university students are trying to improve their knowledge in various subjects rather than their main stream, while others believe that it is a waste of time and they must focus on their main subjects hense, they can expertise their own stream. In my opinion, I also agree with the first part due to the fact that, learning more things can open up more paths to the future.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many individuals possess their own smartphone. This author argues that the benefits of owning a smartphone outweigh its drawbacks.

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In today’s world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages.

In today's digital world, most of people have their own mobile phone. Despite the concern of smartphone addiction in young people, the benefits of owning a smartphone outweigh the the drawbacks.

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