IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 118

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people today are drinking sugar-based drinks (reason and solution)

In the current era, it cannot be denied that numerous individuals are highly enjoying sugar added into the beverages a lot due to some reasons.

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Countries spends large amount of money on sports competitions. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages.

A phenomenon of countries' huge expenses for sports competitions have brought various advantages and disadvantages. From my perspective, the drawbacks have exceeded the benefits.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to learn foreign languages at primary school rather than at secondary school.describe the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays,the foreign language play a crucial role in our life.Some stvata notice that it is essential for children to start learning abroad language at school.While, the other opposed that statement.In this essay we will discuss both merits and demerits.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an idea that children’s activities in free time should be managed by parents, otherwise some people believe that it should be free for children to decide what they do in their free time. From my perspective, children should be managed by their parent in choosing activities for spare time

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

University gives people more opportunities to choose a good career, so they feel more satisfied by their job, have high salaries and the possibility for improve their education with Master’s degree in the future. Hopefully, they will also teach other young people so that the country remains success in the future. Also, many workers need to have a degree on their CV when they apply to a job.

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The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

The human population is growing in a fast pace over the last years. This can generate a lot of bad consequences. This essay will discuss and analyse possible consequences of overpopulation and draw some measures that can be taken to resolve this problem.

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As air travel has become cheaper, more and more people are travelling abroad for their vacations instead of visiting places in their own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Travelling by plane is the mode of accomodation that is mostly preferred by travellers with far destinations. Lately, the Indonesian government has come up with plans that make flights cheaper, leading to more international flights occuring. This is backed up by the intention to promote the growth of the nation's economy. However, this endeavour has sparked both benefits and drawbacks. Hence, this upcoming essay will discuss those pros and cons.

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Some people think that students benefit greatly from going to private secondary schools, but others assert that private secondary schools have a negative impact on the young generation and the society alike. Discuss both views.

Parents have different perspectives on education, such as secondary school for their child. There is no doubt that to achieve the competencies of a student in secondary school, they should have a personal teacher, while some parents suggest that the children should play together with their friends in the same age group. Personally, I believe that parents should consider private school in secondary school for future education. Along with my opinion, this essay will discuss both views.

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In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays is very common that you do not see a professional photographer because people do not matter the age have their own smartphone, is not a secret that we find in a digital age. If we estimate who many time a family needs a professional photographer, maybe are only in special occasions or never. Besides, daily is easier buy a camera or any instrument that replace the work of someone who studied to be a photographer.

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Some parents prefer to have their children receive home tuition, an alternative that traditional education teachers have always questioned. What are reasons to support home tuition?

Nowadays, many parents believe that children should be educated by home tuition but teachers of any academy or school do not agree with this thinking. Parents think that if parents send their children to a school or college could lead to develop bad habits in them. I completely prefer home tuition.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In order to find a solution for the increasing of traffic as well as environmental pollution, it is suggested that people should raise the gasoline prices. Personally, I strongly agree with that statement. This essay will discuss both views and give out my opinion on this topic.

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News stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.

There is a morden world and many youngsters and children created their reals and aplod that stories in thier phone and their chenales. Nowa days ,many people to take a new phone for their children and children's created new chenal in their phone and upload new reals. This is very commen stayed in tody's world. In this essay I will disscues some pros and cone in below pharegraph.

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Computers are besoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Computers is using on daily base in schools

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The topic of renewable energy is widely discussed these days. What are the main reasons behind the increasing use of renewable energy sources, and is this trend a positive or negative development for the environment?

Belonging the qucik development of teachnology, people use more and more energy these days. No matter transportation, home or workplace, the use of energy is needed. For example, when we take the tram, the lighting, the air cnditioner even the tram itself, both need to use energry. To maintain our life quality, we need to maintain the engry supply. And now, more and more people are discussing using renewable engry rather than tranditional unrenewable ergry, which is prodcued by oil.

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Today food travel thousand of mile from farmers to consumers. Why is it so? It is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the phenomenon of the food trade is becoming a heated debate in which people can try food from other places of the world which in my view can be a plus which I want to explain throughout this essay.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In this contemporary era, an increasing number of people are inclined to stay in cities rather than rural areas, and then the population in the countryside is reducing. In my perspective, this is a nagative development for many conutries, the national economies will lower graually because there are few people doing a job of fishing or agriculture. Additionally, some urban areas have become more crowded than ever before, diminishing living quailty is also a servere problem.

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Many people think that it would be beneficial to establish a single, global currency to make international trade and travel much easier. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?

There is no denying the fact that trading and travelling are crucial for our life. While it is a commonly held belief that in purpose of making travel and trade more smoothly, we should create a single currency to use for all the nations, there is an argument tah opposes it. In my opinion, I consider creating a singal global currency will be nufair for smoe countries.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each orther. Others argue that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals think that in this modern era, many people are completely reliable on each other. In contrary, others think that they have became more independent and do whatever they like. This essay will discuss both perspectives with their reasoned points and exapmle. I opine by stating that the individuals in todays time believe they are free and can do whatever they likes.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important to have a leisure time admist the day to day hustle of an individula's life as it helps to improve the mental health and improve the creative skills. However, not everyone enjoys their 9-5 job, hence they have their favourite hobby to carry out during their leisure time or during the weekends.

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Some people believe raising the price of fuel is the greatest way to address global environmental issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Global warming is a natural phenomenon occurred in some periods of time on Earth. Nowadays, humanity is living a new one due to emissions of fossil fuels that are increasing the levels of pollution and greenhouse gases. Up to a point, human beings are trying to face these environmental issues by raising the prices of combustibles. This essay depicts that statement is wrong and showcases more affordable solutions.

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