IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 127

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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in today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages ?

In today's digital age, a variety of citizens have a private smartphone. This writer believe that because of the convenience of contact with other people and searching for information, but it can be easy to get addicted.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages ?

Through the advent of smartphone, life of inhabitants all over the world has changed dramatically. Depite a few negative sides that this high-tech device brings to humanity such as phone addiction, how it benefits people on communication and aducation worths more considerations

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In today's world amny people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current time, there is a growing number of individuals having a smartphone. This writer believes that owning one could provide benefits like easier communication and navigation which would outweigh the eye problems from this technology.

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In today’s world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a high proportion of people possess a smartphone, which is thought to have more benefits than drawbacks. The writer agrees with this opinion as smartphones bring everyone closer regardless of distance, simplify email-checking and even banking, despite the risk of internet fraud.

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In recent times, many people have focused on the negative effects advertising has on children’s health, behaviour and family relationships. Advertising to children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

On our days, some countries decide that youngsters have to work in some paid work but some people thinks that’s wrong but others see some advantage on these practice like taking experience and it is a good way for learing. I am completely agree with these people who things that is a good activity for children, but let studie boths opinions.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion!

It is considered by some to spend their time doing in some pattern without changes, while others are convinced the adjustment is a positive thing. In my standpoint, I assert that doing evolution of life activity is required for special occasion only, for example cramping before taking qualification test.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that people's choices have increased these days. I partially agree with this idea as technology has improved many industries however it can limit our selection.

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Being a celebrity - such as a famous film or sport personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems

Some people think that being a celebrity such as a famous film or sport personality brings problem as well as benefits. True or not depends people have any perspective about that things.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Being wealth is an important aspect for human life and also being happy is an essential for human life. In this materialised world, being happy is a tough role for humans. There are some other factors that people ignore to a happy lifestyle factors such as difficult or struggled lifestyle. In next paragraph I am going to explain about lifestyle that healthier and wealth to humans.

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

Few young people perform or attend classical music concerts in certain countries. This is because they follow the modern era, where people tend to listen to modern music. They need to learn and take part in traditional music, so make them appreciate it.

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Students in university education should develop specialists in one subject area rather than create a broader range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's era, most university students are encouraged to focus in one specific area to be specialists. Developing expertise in one subject believed could gain profound knowledge rather than broad education. In my opinion, it depends on the type of the subject area. This essay would analyse the benefits to study interdisciplinary approaches will outbacks the limititation in one knowledge in bachelor level of student.

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

in some nations, only the limited number of young people who attending to classical music concert or playing classical instrument. I think it happen because the promotion of modern music is more attractive than classical and young people believe that playing classical music will make them feel bored. in this essay I declare that they need to be encouraged so that they can come and study about classical music.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Today, we are living in the era of high technology, where people engage in their daily activities using various machines such as smartphones, coffee machines, and other devices. Technology is advancing rapidly day by day, prompting innovative minds to invest their expertise in creating beneficial tools like tap cards and applications, which serve as our payment methods for shopping.

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Some parents believe that learning maths at school is redundant and should not be taught. while others believe that it should remain a foundation subject. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent decades, studying foundation subjects such as maths is becoming as a debate. Some people argue that learning maths are not crucial. However, I am firmly with the opinion of studying math ought to be a cumpolsary subject in schools.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.

Some group of people are of the opinion that the best way to change the situation is just accept that, for instance an unsutible job or lack of money, and some others assume that, attempt and improve such situation it would be better. I agree to some extent that trying would play a key role to change situation. This assay will provide my personal view in detail.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The topic above adresses that many society believed that cohabitation is a way to bridge the two people who are getting married understand each other in terms of communication and understanding. I fully agree to this matter. I speak this as a married-life training, which is not only talk about beauty and wealthy, but also as the necessity of calm mind and better communication with our partner.

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Some people believe that governments should invest more in improving public transportation systems to reduce traffic congestion and air pollution. Others argue that individuals should take responsibility for reducing traffic problems by using public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The opinion below describes the view of reducing traffic and air pollution problems by the government's responsibility to improve public transport and society's belief in increasing the use of public transport.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kinf of paid work. Some people regard this a completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

On the topic of children paid work, I stay in the side of the people who say it is completely wrong and don’t agree with the others who thinks it is valuable work experience.

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In some countries many parents are interested in home schooling and the trend is gaining popularity. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Schooling at home is being popular by some parents who are fascinated in it and it has some positive sides but I believe that negative sides are more than benefits and I will shed some light on it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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