IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 144

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause various health problems.

Converting to a vegetarian can be considered as a good health habit. It reduce the unhealthy fat intake, which a majority of a fatal health issues are cause by consuming meat. In my opinion, I disagree because vegetable cannot provide the enough amount of the mineral and most of the protein are from meat by eating the right proportion of the meat will not make a person becomes unhealthy.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Plenty of food and beverage contain high levels of sugar that make populations unhealthy so that some people start giving a strategy of making the prices of food be more unaffordable to encourage people to reduce sugar consumptions. From my perspective, I am convinced that comprise higher fee of these food or snacks would provide this communitiy with a greater fitness than ever before, allowing them to contribute to more productive quality of working, and then spending less income on seeing a doctor.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

To comments with, There are many poular person live in India. like Film Actors, pop singers and sports person also many Businessmen and more. Few People belive that those people charga a lot of Money For an advartisemnet. Also some society belive that their person helped to many city and country economy. In this essay I will discuss some pros and cons in below paragraph.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear Mr. Smith, I lost my indentification card yesterday, I think it happend by the way from my apartments to university campus. I tried to find it, but still have not found.

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the cause of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It’s not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. Do you agree or disagree?

The one of way from many way to dicrease the criminal abolish the cause of crime with increasing the average of life satisfaction and giving a chance to people to get the educational in highest level. I agerre with this statement that It just not about put the police on every road and catch the people and put them into the jail.

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Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion

Is great and populous have the same meaning? I don't think so. In my opnion there are several aspects that we need to consider to give a city a great score. Yet,maybe the one with overcrowding population can be a good starting point to evaluate whether it is a great city or not.

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Some people think that fittest and strongest individual and team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe the key to attaining success in sports is cooperation of team members who are very strong and fit with each other.Meanwhile,others assume that victory belongs to that team who accepts itself to catch the reward.this essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter one .

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Television Sporting shows such as the Olympics motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples in your answer and provide your own opinion.

There is no secret that having mobility can boost both physical and mental aspects of humans. In today's climate, it is a widely held view that sporting programs in a mass media such as television can encourage youngsters to take up having physical activity, a theory which I fully subscribe.

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework

Many individuals are convinced that parents require to assist in their children’s homework. I completely agree with this opinion because not only parents can assess their education level but also can increase the parent-child bonding with their little one.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

In recent years, the rate of pills abusive users among adolescents are inclining. This might be because of social media's negative exposure that lead them acces inappropriate websites. It shall be seen as dangerous as affecting their future productivity. The existence of a helpdesk for pills abusive users must be helpful to getting them out of this catastrophe.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Funds should be invest in education, health care and some other services instead of arts like music and theater, so that, poor people can survive in this world. Personally, I agree with this idea and in following essay I will explain my views.

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Some parent say that giving expensive gifts to a child can create bad habits in him/her.do you agree or disagree?

A lot of parents believe spoiling children with luxury things is the same as supporting bad behaviour to grow. I believe that is true because it can promote such an insensitive behaviour to grow. This essay will discuss why I agree with this statement and provides examples to stronger my arguments.

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the cause of this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

In this day and age, students tend to behave badly at school. There are several causes of this alarming trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle this problem.

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The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? To reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In the recent days the usage of private vehicles has risen by a great number compared to the use in previous years but then this has led to many troubles. One of the major problem that this has caused is traffic congetion on the highways and the solution to this issue is constructing more roads rather than discouraging car owners from using them. In this essay, I am going to elaborate more on the issues identified and the solutions to them.

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In some countries elder people are to work longer and not to retire. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement age.

some elder people in some modern country is still working in their retirement age for example Japan. Now, elder people in Japan still working even though they working in their own restaurant. Working on elder year be trusted can keep our longterm memories and increase mental illness such as dimentia. furthermore, working on elder time makes them happier because they can meet other people in society. imagibe that they just stay at their home or nurhing home without any social live except with thei family and friend, they must be stressed and trapped. the point is, people wherever old or young need makes some social live and activity or bustle on their live so that they has healthy life both mental or physycal. elder people are not prisioner which mean their activity not to be limited. Japanes people has much longer life one from many reason is they still working in their retirement age even though they just doing easy job and they are has good quality of life.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this?. Do you agree or disagree

Presently artists earn more money than politicians. Perhaps, many people think that they frequently purchase an expensive goods, however I totally disagree with this opinion because celebrities are not a fixed job and actually celebrities troublesome obtain a work. This essay will elaborate in detail on the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraph.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Some people belive that youngsters are involved in social conflicts due to the negligence of their parents because they are swampped in their work . I agree with notion that lack of time for their children cause harmful impacts on their overall personality.

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so the population in the countryside population are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about migration to cities from the village is a positive or negative trend. I am going to examine the stated question and elucidate on numerous motives and then explain why I believe that it is a negative initiative in the modern age that pollution and crime rates are increased.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era, it is argued by some of people that both parents are needed to find jobs to support their children to gain benefit from the extra income, while the others think that kids need their father and mother to spending more time so they feel supported. This essay will provide further explanation as well examples for both side opinions.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many university students desire to learn different skills to put into their main subjects. However, others claimed that spending all their time and attention is vital when they only focus on their qualification. I totally agree that students need to put their efforts to only their occasions to not get distracted from something else as well as developing themselves for their future careers.

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