IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 148

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

There is no doubt that these days people have problems with their health which is making their health worse some people believe that an increase in public health facilities is significant while others think that an increase the public health will be affected. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, in plenty of countries a very few number of students are decided to take science related subjects at university. The main causes of this relate to the way of teaching in universities, which could have a significant impact on society. This essay will discuss some factors contributing to this problem, and also some effects on society.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your own opinion?

Study overseas is becoming a favourable choices for almost students due to supplementary course, while the others considering that it is part of their studies. This essay will show that this is a learning transformation in this century and potentially enhance student’s motivation. It will first suggest that are the availability of multicultural and differentiate learning is the one and foremost benefit followed by discussion of how it can sometimes need an extraordinary effort and my own opinion in the following paragraph. The main advantage of this program to learners is give the real and fascinating experience to earn the variety of subjects that they are never got at their home university. Minors were once faced to the out-dated learning sources. The sophisticated advent of information and technology utilization taking a key role, because it allows students to easily access and being part of learning catalysator. Not only the advance of learning sources, but also multi-ethnic lea...

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some parents, specially mothers stay at home instead working, and some people think that they should receive monetary compensation from the government. Do you agree or disagree.

It is true that the government should be assisting their people, especially those who are not available to be working due to some constraints or another. However, I believe that housewives are not one of those people. This is because the decision for mothers to stay at home is not because of any external factors that force them to stay at their house, rather, it is their own family decision on determine the role of each people in the household.

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In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many differences from their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons？Is this a positive or negative development？

Travelling across the world is considered the one of the treatment. Old people usually travel to discovered new things,however, recently most cities are similar each others. I believe that the appearance is achieve part of the country without exposure the culture.

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Some people argue that in particular countries lot of individuals are becoming intrigued in looking out about the past story of the place that they live in. I believe that this phenomena is good and can make a few impacts. Through this essay I will explain what and how, regarding this issue.

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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, believe that everyone should have the freedom to choose whatever sports activities they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports are an imperative activity of people lives.when it comes some claim that there are some dangerous game should be banned by the authority, while others opine that games should be chosen with freedomly whatever sports people like. In this essay, both sides of the topic will be discussed followed by my opinion.

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Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experiencTe.

These days, an autonomous car is quite popular around the world and many manufacturing companies have started to the self-driving vehicles. However, I do not believe that this kind of cars will not become common in upcoming future. This essay, I will explain why I do not believe this statement and provide examples to support my position.

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It is important to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is nothing in this world that gives gurantee related to the accomplishment of any tasks. Most of the events in both personal and professional life requires a trait, thinking outside of the box or applylying a non-tradiitonal method, to achieve success. I am optimistic that the nature of taking risks defeats the failure.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

It has been widely claimed that more people prefer to be self-employed in this century than to work for corporation or organisation. While it could be considered that freelance working has more advantages. This essay will firstly discuss the reason for the claim before elaborating why I consider the situation to be positive circumstance.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

It has been widely claimed that some students in university would like to learn additional subjects apart from their main subjects. While it is argued by some that it is crucial to spend all time and concentration for learning for the degree. This essay will firstly discuss both perspectives before elaborating why I consider that learning subjects beside from major subjects to be positive circumstance.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

n modern era, some countries are trying to built a legacy by successfully participating in different tournaments with good practice and other countries are focusing on providing sports facilities that each one can take advantage, and I agree with this approach to developing sustainable and stable training methods.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside us decreasing.

It has been widely claimed that the reason causing residents in countryside in the number of states be falling is people living outside the city centre trend to move to live in the city. While it argued by some that the situation could be considered as positive development. This essay discusses with the perspectives why I consider that the declining of the number of people in rural areas to be negative circumstance.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a different nation where individuals have to speak and learn a foreign language can sometime be challenging and can bring some social setbacks and cultural shock to them, as well as practical issues. I strongly agree with the statement as it can contribute to deterioration of mental health as well as leading to miscommunication among the native speakers and the foreigners.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city? How can government make urban life better for everyone?

In recent days, I consider that the cities are like a place of opportunity. As well as earning a living has become much more difficult. Although there are some drawbacks of migrating to cities, the government could do to ensure the urban condition for citizens.

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Some workers must work at night. What are the advantages and disadvantages of night-shift work? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

These days, midnight shift is famous around the world due to the financial crisis. However, some employess do not have thr chance to ignore the night job, therefore, they must be worked. There some advantages and disadvantages are in these phenomenon and I will discuss it briefly for the foregoing paragraphs.

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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A major theme that is being discussed by several experts in the field of art turns to have contradictions and various points of view. A certain part of specialists hold the opinion that it is obligatory to include in the school program topics based on creativity. This essay will shed light on the reason why such disciplines should be promoted and how they can develop students' results, according to my personal experience and belief.

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Some people think that purchasing imported agricultural products has a positive effect. Others think consuming domestic products is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Technology has flourished by leaps and bouds in multifarious fields, especially agricultural, and as a result, food products are imported enormously as compared to the past. Some believe that buying other countrie's agricultural goods providing more benefits, while others opine that people should support their local farmer's goods instead of imported. I agree with a latter opinion and this essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past?

An international magazine shows that nowadays many travelers book plane tickets to fly straight to their destination and do not almost go out during their vacation. On the contrary, in the 1960s and ‘70s, travelers often experienced and explored a lot of things so they had memorial memories. In my opinion, I think that we can do anything as long as we feel comfortable and chill out during a trip.

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