IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 147

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are some argue that about excellent person for guiding in publics mind, which has some belives about their nature of guiding and move them ahead. From my point of view, I choose the former one and here is my essay.

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Some parents say that they should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Child-rearing style has always been a part of major debate in this con-current age.Some people have a notion that, taking a place in group activities is very important for child development. At the sametime, another group asserts that kids should learn how to make them busy by theirselves. This essay will introduce both arguments and reach a conclusion.

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•Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

•In Today’s world, every nation is running in a race to prove them selves that they are far better than the other countries. Some believes that working extra hours gives boost to the growth of a nation. However, I am not completely agree with the given statement and will discuss the reasons in the following essay.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyles in the countryside. other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is discussed by a part of society that is living in the countryside provides a healthy lifestyles another group of people oppose and consider that, living in the city is better for a healthy life. I will discuss both sides in this below.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Allowing Children to make their own choices or not is a smoulding issue of today's social life and is extremely arguable due to its unquestionable insignificance .

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Some people believe that visitors to others countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. ▪️Discuss both views and give your opinion.

observe rules it is agaist the law, exotic culture cuases sad talking while eating

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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

It would be argued by some that newcomers should establish minority community to maintain their own cultures. In my opinion, however, they should blend to the local culture of host nations.

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Some people believe that public celebrations like national days and festivals are a waste of money. They are of the opinion that people should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree? Support your arguments with examples from your own experience.

Festivals and national days have been a crucial role to foster the sense of unity since the early time of civilizations, and these celebrations have always been required huge amount of Money. At that point, there comes a question to the minds: whether spending money on these activities are wasting Money or not. It can easily stated that there are many pressing issues in our world including climate chance and housing crisis, and in order to improve individuals life quality these crucial issues should be prioritized by governments.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays companies had made a great deal to change and facility the humain life. To help them for that, they used publicity to attract people to purchase their products. However, public by the stuff even if they do not need it. Likewise, I believe that they use to be mature and buy only things there

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Option A: Children's playground: This playground would include swingset, basketball court, baseball field and a skating arena. Option B: Health club: This health club would include sports facilities, personal training and group exercise classes.

I was recently aware of the survey on land utilization effectively for the public.

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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?

In general, Sport is very important for human health but there are less of people who spend time doing sport or walking every day for some reason.In this essay, I will discuss and I will suggest solutions to encouraging people to do Sports .

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Some people believe that universities should only accept students with the highest marks while others believe that some students with low marks should have an opportunity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Any personal trust that higher education institution should only receive the leaners with the up grade level while others trust that any leaners with low grade level should have a chance. This both conditions up grade and low grade on report of result will stay consider to entry the higher education. In my oppinions, the chance should be present to every people to get education continuously. However, the higher education institution have an enroll to take the young learner come to learn in there.

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Some parents bring their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Any fahter and mother give their kids many toys for playing. Some kind of toys make their children more creative to play with them. In my oppinion, big number of toys for playing give more time to creat their facility to play and it is help the children to develop motor skill and cognitive developing. However, I also believe that having big figure of toys will spent much money to buy it. This habbit is not good in management of familiy's economic system.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it

some individuals believe that advertising is quite successful by attracting our attention to buying goods, other humans say that advertising has been really prevalent for a long time but it is no longer below us in our minds. although adverts are great ways to persuad us because they work on some things that are unusual to get in the shop ,however in my opinion in the present time the effect of advertisement will not continue in future due to people knowing all their strategy.

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, most of the people think that there should be a right to free education for all pupils by government whereas others consider these fees are heavy burden for state. I disagree with second idea and will support my opinion with more details and practical examples.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attendtion to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some individuals believe that advertising is quite successful by atracting our attentions for buing goods, other humans say that advertising is really prevalent for long time but it is no longer below us our mind. although adverts are great ways to persuad us because they work on some things that unusual to get in shop ,however in my opinion in the present time the effect of advertisment has not continued for future due to people know all their stratege .

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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagre

Some group of people tend to think, that both males and females are suitable to serve in the military, the navy and the air force. Personally, I think that women would bring more benefits being out of the army. The arguments are illustrated in the following paragraphs.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some arguments about the main environmental issues. While some people say the loss of particular species are the major issues, I tend to support the idea which says there are more important issues in environment.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the global life, the number of people who are living in cities are increasing rapidly. Along with the rise of population, the improving in techonology and the prorities of convenience are now paid many attentions, transport system particularly. Some belief that government should invest in building railway, while others belive that improving public transport is more important. In my personal, I agree that fast train will make life easier and more convenient.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important what are the causes of the? Is this a positive or negative development?

The importance of owning a home rather than renting an apartment which was always been debated many people claim that it is beneficial while others reject this. I believe that it is positive development by owning a home. I agree with the formal notion of discord.

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