IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 147

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvatages?

In today's digital age, technology plays an important role in humans' life. It is believed that social networking sites help people contact other friends and getting news . This writer argues that the benefits of technology to get in touch with relatives and update the the latest news outweigh the drawback of overloading information .

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2- Playing computer games only has negative effects on children To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, computer games are an integral part of children’s lives. Some people believe that computer games only negatively affect kids, while others disagree with this idea. I totally agree with the statement, and in this essay, I will explore various dimensions of the issue and provide an analysis of its extent to support my position.

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Write two paragraphs. Paragraph 1: Compare Shanghai and Los Angeles. • Don't try to describe every detail. Identify the most significant information. Paragraph 2: Say which of the five cities provides the best environment overall, and why. • Present the various factors in order of priority and try to describe them in your own words, rather than using the descriptions in the table.

Los Angeles and Shanghai have a little range of considerable differences. The population differs by 1 million people to the advantage of Shanghai. While the level of criminality is 5 times higher in Los Angeles. However, we can also admit a lot of similarities between these two cities. Basic service provision is about 100% in both places and levels of ambient noise is similar either.

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying fact that the phenomena in the next few years, all self-driven vehicles will be converted to a drive-less version, as the passengers will be carried to any place they wish for is ubiquitous across the globe due to its importance. Majority of folks are in the favour of this statement due to its number of merits. However some of the people highlight its demerits first. In my further paragraphs, advantages and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.

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Many species of animals all around the world are on the verge of extinction. Some say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many types of animals number has decrease . Most public agree that animals should be protect, while others argue that should give prorriorites to human beings issues. This essay, will discusses both conficting views, then finally will draw my own perspective.

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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their character are naturally more nurting than aggressive. To what extent do you agree with this.

There is an ongoing debate regarding men and women . A lot of individuals believe that females are peaceful compared to male , because they are more caring and nurting rather than being aggressive. If questioned ,I agree with this view to a large extent. My position is further elaborate in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explainations.

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Some people think that dancing is an important subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. What are positive and negative sides of art at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience or knowledge. Write about 180-220 words.

It is often argued that dancing is an essential curriculum for students but some people believe that that there are a lot of activities which should be taught to children because it is considered a waste of time. In my opinion, dancing has more merits as compared to drawbacks they might bring.

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Some peole believe that tecnology has led to many positive development in their lives other think tecnology is gradually take over controlof the way people live.

Technology is part of our lives. While some people see this situation has brought many improvements, others feel that technology is too controlling. Personally, I think that technology is largely beneficial.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best wat to reduce the rime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To extent do you agree or disagree?

Some researches shows the people with high degrees have lower crime rate,and it is suggested that education will help in decrease the numbers of crime.I believe education is one of the factors that help to citizens to have stable income and good lifestyle, but there is others factors that effect crime rate like neighberhood safty,income and social class that help keep the population a way from commiting crimes as way of living.In this essay I will dicusse from my point of view in this matter.

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Some People believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whilst , childhood is considered the best stage of their life by certain individuals when they can overindulge in different life activities, others contend that being happy in life is not defined by a certain period but rather different experiences in different periods. It is my contention that enjoying the life we live is not regulated by our childhood since, everyone can still have joyful life experiences at distinctive life periods.

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The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Accordingly to the information in the Internet, the social media is replacing contact in everyday life. No doubt, apps like Instagram, Facebook or Youtube became the part of our usual livelihood. In this essay, I am going to tell their cons and pros.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary era, employing communal media is the optional method to stay in communication with other individuals and discover upcoming events. While using social media is disadvantageous in few ways, the advantages are more significant

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages ?

In today digital era, social media has become an important part of a day of many people lives around the world due to it helps people to update news and connects with others. This author agrees that the time-saving and breaking distance outweight deterioration in health.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In digital era, social media is a place that people can make friends with others or gain new information. This writer believes the benefits of the relationship and the convenience in earning the knowledge outweigh the addiction.

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Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a huge negative effect on both society and individuals. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the recent years social media has invaded the lifestyle of many people, It has its advantage and disavantages. However the majority think that it brought more harm than good, especially Facebook. In this essay, both sides will be explored before evaluating whether the benefits outweighs the drawbacks.

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Many people around the woeld use social media everyday to keep in touch with other peoples and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

In this day and age, social media is a common tool for udapting hot news and stay in touch with other people. Personally, i think that the advantages greatly outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? All of his works are clearly depicted down to the smallest muscles.

In today's digital era, most people tend to access the networking platforms to contact with the others and follow the new circumstances of world. In my perspective, the benefit of convenience and saving time and energy outweigh the drawback of health problems.

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Some people argue that the government should invest more in scientific research to solve problems such as climate change and disease prevention. Others believe that funding should be allocated to more immediate concerns such as healthcare and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an argument whether the public research fund should solely invested on scientific studies related to some specific issues, such as global warming, or diversify into other fields. I personally believe that the government should equally fund all of potentially useful researches. This essay will cover the supporting reasons on both views.

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

There is an ongoing debate regarding character traits . A lot of individuals believe that everyones behaviour and personalities are all determined in advance due to the distinct genes from their ancestors even before a person is born . Further , it is impossible to change or modify a peron' s character traits. I oppose this viewpoint highly and my position is further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs to prove my disagreeable opinion to a large extent.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the gorvernments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the advancement of the technology has covered all part of the globe because of the scientific research.However , there is an argument that scientific research should be done by the government instead of the private companies.With this , I totally agree.

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